
Versatile Mage: I Can Control You Until You Die
全职法师:我能把你控到死
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.6M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
7Monthly votes
64.4kRecommends
166.4kFans
720Chapters
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The bias here is really disgusting, and Mo Fan is disgusting too.
Zhao is at fault, Mo is at fault, and the protagonist is also at fault. Zhao resented that Mo Fan was implicated in his family because he helped Mu Ningxue leave. Mo did not at least apologize to Zhao for his behavior. The protagonist knows everything. He knows that Zhao is wrong, but he is right, but the protagonist is also wrong. He pulls his frame, he stands very high. He did not point out that the Zhao family was implicated because of Mo's actions. He did not tell Zhao that Mo was only 10 years old when he did such a thing. He was still a child. If Mo had grown up, he would never dare to do this.
The best Quanfa fanfic I have seen so far, it is very consistent with the original work, much better than other random settings, and countless times better than some that would not have been written without the original plot. Although this one follows a small part of the original plot, most of it is the author's new plot. The author is working hard to perfect the Quanfa world, and it is also very consistent with the magical world in my heart. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is very smooth. I read a lot of Quanfa fanfics, and most of the protagonists and supporting characters have the same character, and the dialogue is very dull. This book is different, the characters are very distinct, and each character has a different personality. It is a very good book.
To be honest, I have read a lot of Quanfa fans. This one is well written and very suitable to my taste. It has a single female protagonist and detailed battle plots. It is great.
Personal opinion
Isn't your poison system and your parasitic nebula somewhat overlapping? I thought it was the space system or the chaos system. Personally, I think the poison system is really not that good. It is not as good as the curse system. The curse system of my ancestors has a lot of writing.
The writing is quite good, but the protagonist takes himself too seriously, and the military benefits are too good, right? In a world of demons and demons, a lot of people in the military will definitely die, even a lot of Skyhawk mages will die. If everyone pays compensation according to this rule, I feel that the country will be completely doomed.
As we all know, clothing is one type, and soul clothing is two types.
Instead of letting the times change the protagonist, I hope the protagonist changes the times.
I found that the book about the full-time mage did not make any changes to the society of full-time mage in the end. I want to see a protagonist leading the people at the bottom and changing this family-dominated society. I want to see the protagonist unite all the people. The human race in the world is no longer divided into multiple countries to fight against monsters instead of fighting among themselves. There is only one voice in the world and that is the protagonist. I hope the protagonist is not trapped by emotions. I hope the protagonist will use everything to revitalize the human race. Am I crazy to think so?
I'm really convinced. The target is a single female protagonist, and the male protagonist has many romantic partners, so forget it, after all, she is very charming. But what happened between him and Liu Ru. Your ambiguity is really a bit too much. Everything else is acceptable, after all, he can only pay lip service to it, but Liu Ru's one is really too much. I really liked this book. After all, the writing was quite good, but it was both serious and grounded. What they say is that only Jiang Shaoxu will be the heroine. As a result, there are a lot of ambiguous objects. Another Liu Ru appeared, this one had the best relationship and was the most chaotic.
If you like cool writing, don't read this. It's very frustrating. Personally, the most disgusting part for me is Chen Ying's plot around the 100th chapter. Hiding a black beast is like hiding a drug-addled and mentally unstable murderer. In reality, he will be shot. What can I say about this kind of birth? Listen to what she is forcing, and the author's mental state is not good when writing. A person who has traveled through time wants to be the light of mankind? Do you remember who the protagonist was in the beginning? He keeps swearing in every sentence, and you want to take humans off without any preparation? You also know the problem in Versatile Mage. In order to lead you away, you must clean up all the aliens (holy cities and the like) and the moths in high positions. If you don't even dare to do such a thing or even be stopped from doing it, don't write this kind of plot. Without this determination, I'm afraid you will bring all mankind into the ditch.
Advantages: The writing is good, there are constant little jokes, the plot dares to break away from the original work and directly open a copy of the ancient capital, and the writing is quite interesting Disadvantages: It is a cheat but the design is very rubbish. The protagonist awakens two elements at one time but shares a nebula. The pure and pure negative improvement is just to engage in fusion magic in the early stage, but for mana, another endurance trick is required. If this trick is enabled but not enabled, it is better to directly create dual elements and find the person who studied fusion magic in the original work. There is also a plot that I personally think is very toxic. In the eyes of the protagonist, Mo Fan and Mu Ningxue are both talented and handsome, but in the eyes of outsiders, Mo Fan in the early stage was just a street kid who gave up on himself at the bottom of his grade. To be honest, it would be impossible for me to be Mu Zhuoyun and Mo Fan would have a chance to awaken. Then the protagonist of the magic assessment made a mockery of Mu Ningxue's father with Mo Fan, especially Mo Fan, who coveted Mu Ningxue's body while scolding his father-in-law's old wall lamp 😅
The protagonist gives me the impression of a mad dog. I personally feel that he can't live long in the real world.
For this kind of male fanfic, it actually doesn't matter if you write multiple female protagonists. After all, there are still people who like this, but if you label the title as a single female protagonist and write an ambiguous article with multiple female protagonists, this is really too much. Damn, I was so happy watching that. Liu Ru suddenly appeared in front of me and I thought it was nothing. This Liu Ru was definitely not good. Xu Fang is already with Jiang Shaoxu, and they are both boyfriend and girlfriend, and you are still having an affair with that Liu Ru. Isn't this fucking cheating? Don't tell me anything about brothers and sisters. Which brother would be so ambiguous with his sister?
To be honest, this book is pretty good, but the most annoying thing is that sometimes there are always some supporting characters coming to show off to the protagonist, and then a person suddenly appears and says disdainfully to the protagonist, "Who are you?" Do you deserve it? Pretty boy, get out of here 🙂🙂It's really annoying
The author lacked consideration when writing the protagonist's invention of the bomb. There was explosives in the original work. Considering that the slave-level monster is three meters tall and can travel at dozens of meters per second, what use are ordinary bombs? Even Tang Yue's mid-level magic can evaporate hundreds of meters of river water.
The hero and the heroine
The male protagonist has a girlfriend and is having an affair with another woman. If you mind, don't read it.
To be honest, the plot is a bit rough. If you don't compete with Mo Fan for resources, Mo Fan may not be able to survive the next crisis. Everyone can understand this. However, from sending scrolls, to the Holy Spring, to giving new life resources to Mo Fan at a very low price, which is almost like giving away for nothing, without asking for anything in return, normal values, and multiple unilateral favors will cause the friendship to deteriorate, and only when there is back and forth can the relationship deepen. For example, for freshmen resources, the protagonist knows that he cannot grab them from Mo Fan, so you avoid plots with resources and create original ones. You grab them first and then give them away. It feels very deliberate and scheming to the readers just to give away personal favors and to show off your strength by standing up and showing off your strength, but there is no real gain.
The setting is good, but the author's attitude towards women is too obscene. Originally, I could accept a few bitchy remarks, but the more powerful the protagonist is and the more female characters he writes, the more disgusting he becomes.
As a fan of Versatile Mage, why can't I read any other book on the Internet except this one? Who can see it?
There is a magical world, but there will be no helicopters and flying magic tools. The plot is also awkward. It feels like the world is revolving around the pig's feet, forcibly reducing intelligence. There are too few originals. Are the comments section full of trolls who want to get good reviews?
It's a good full-time fanfic in every aspect, but it's disgusting to just tease it without reading it.
This one, Inversion Attribute, Mobile Disaster, Blacksmith, Qidian. Com are all full-time fan novels that are still being updated. I feel that these novels are more unique. This one looks more cheerful, and the other ones are more imaginative. The other novels always feel that they cannot be justified and the logic is too poor.
This author is too official, and some parts are not consistent with the original work. However, some second creations are quite novel. But it's pretty good written like this. Other fans are even more outrageous. The cheating in this book is not that great, but the others are just as outrageous. Looking at it, I almost want to vomit, and other things.
What Thunder plot did I go to? I was too deliberate and sometimes included some personal stuff.
The plot of showing off and slapping people in the face feels neither good nor bad
There are often plots where the children of a certain family come over to look down on the protagonist and ridicule the protagonist, but the protagonist is just shocked and then disappears? You could say it was a slap in the face. After shocking the opponent, he still refused to accept it. The protagonist has been restricted by various restrictions. He is happy but not completely happy, just like happy.
The lag is too high, which makes the rank level feel very unqualified. The original protagonist is strong enough. Comparing the protagonist of the fanfiction with the original protagonist is equivalent to comparing the original protagonist with a normal person. If the lag is too high, it will make people feel less happy.
Why can't all French novels mention the Black Church?😰😰
I saw the beginning of the Battle of Guofu, and there were some problems with the description. I felt that the power of demons at all levels was not shown, and the development of each plot was a bit flat and broken.
Many people are debating whether to have a harem heroine, a bunch of brats, of course not a heroine, just have a woman, why? Do I have to be responsible for sleeping? What kind of child psychology? I am a demonic monk, a bunch of virgin children.
Let's not talk about anything else. If you don't have a good wife, it's already very good. It's not like some people who can't walk when they see a woman. The writing is messy.
Mu Ningxue, My Wife as a Full-time Mage, has a single female protagonist. It's very interesting and has a great emotional line.