A Mortal's Journey: From the Start, I Was Recruited as the Moon-Masking Sect's Live-In Son-in-Law

The novel is too calculating, constantly resorting to scheming and intrigue. High-level cultivators don't engage in such schemes; they subdue others with force. Your writing is stuck in a vicious cycle, resembling more of a palace intrigue novel than a cultivation novel.

Having read so many fanfics about ordinary people, even those without any cheat codes, you're the first author to make the protagonist so miserable. Do you have some kind of serious illness?

These urban fantasy novels featuring sons-in-law, dragon kings, and super-rich tycoons are finally starting to wreak havoc on fantasy and historical fiction. I just saw one that said something about transmigrating to the Three Kingdoms period, being abandoned by Xiao Qiao, and choosing Diao Chan instead—why are you crying? 😄

The earlier parts were a mess, but these last few are somewhat legible; at least they have a bit of an underdog-versus-strong feel to them. I just wonder how long it will take to use this overpowered cheat ability.

I don't understand at all. I have no idea what this nonsense is. Cultivating immortality is fine, but why all the scheming and plotting? Who do you think you are? A Qi Refining cultivator trying to outmaneuver a Core Formation cultivator using all those modern business tactics? If you really did that, you wouldn't last a minute.

Ten years later, Shennong passed by and spat.

This self-important idiot has no idea what he's writing. He didn't even read "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" carefully. Do you even know what kind of person Han Li is? Even if we disregard the reincarnation version of Han Li, even the Han Li who hasn't yet reached Foundation Establishment, if you knew he had the small bottle, he would find a chance to kill you.

Judging from the latest chapter alone, the author essentially time-traveled to the Three Kingdoms period, then recognized Liu Zhang as his lord, preparing to elevate him to the status of the Han Dynasty. My assessment is that he's utterly hopeless.

Looking at the cheat code, I was immediately struck by the feeling of a dazed, rich tycoon throwing money around to pick up girls. Looking at the protagonist's words and actions and character setting, they are completely mismatched. The elite character setting is a perfect match for the suffering, compromising, scheming, and naive working class. Finally, let's look at the worldview and setting.

The story begins with a business tycoon reborn, forced to flee to a cultivation town by a bandit. The author initially intended for the protagonist to use his wits to escape, but ran out of ideas and couldn't continue. Suddenly, the protagonist tells the innkeeper that the demonic path will invade in two years.