Mystery: the Great Vampire Savior Just Wants to Lie Down

Premise: The collection data is true. When the flaws in the author's writing style are so obvious (there are so many psychological activities of the characters), why there are so many collections, I think there are the following reasons: 1. The beginning does not involve the city of Tingen. I have long been tired of watching the plot of Tingen without following the original work. If I didn't write this book, it would be a clean slate. 2. The plots in the first few chapters are excellent, and Sharon is very eye-catching! 3. The vampire path is very good. Compared with the assassin hunters who are tired of looking at it, the beauty path that can also change gender in the subsequent chapters is still a breath of fresh air. 4. Because of the above three points, the readers' patience has not been exhausted yet, but if we continue with such long and self-exciting psychological activities, as well as the poisonous plot that breaks the camel's back (the senior vampires do not give the agreed rewards, how can such a huge vampire not win a share) The serial characteristics remain? ! That's it. Why do you dare to mention it even if you ask for compensation later? This kind of hatred will not be restored until the Marquis is killed. As a result, the protagonist does not seem to have this idea at all in the subsequent description? , In this case, it is uncertain whether the collection of this book can continue to grow (anyway, I gave up here and stopped reading it, which made me feel angry. I will wait until there are a million words in the future). 5. Finally, after all this rambling, I mainly want to ask, is there any other secret fan who is willing to write a fanfic? Why don't you consider the vampire route? Maybe you can do it with a book like this one! (Serious face. Jpg)

There is too much nonsense and it is too verbose. Most of the chapter is devoted to the psychological activities of the protagonist, and they are all meaningless psychological activities. It is pulled back and forth over and over, and an idea is associated with it, and then it is said nonsense for half a page before giving up the idea. So what's the use of writing this paragraph? Water word count?

It is not enough to watch "Lord of the Mystery" in advance. It is recommended to watch "The Ring" at the same time, which will definitely give you a different kind of pleasure 😍😍😍

For example, Sharon was pregnant at the beginning😁 After all, there is a high probability that she is actually pregnant🤣

So in the later stage, does the protagonist want to be good sisters with Sharon?

I have read a few chapters and they are all inexplicable psychological activities. I wish I could encounter a small thing and think about it for a long time.

In short, all in all, there is too much nonsense, there are so many psychological activities, just like a diaosi, and time travel cannot change your habits. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have been on the roadside long ago.

It's too long-winded. The whole chapter is about the psychological activities of the protagonist, without any plot. The readers are not here to read your psychological analysis.

He will transform no matter what, right? Unless you jump to the black emperor. The God of Beauty and the Mistress of Desolation, the Moon and the Mother, the protagonist is a beauty😋

I was attracted by the rare moon path, so I added it to my bookshelf after reading it for 20,000 yuan. When I saw the latest chapter, the author's writing style was average, and the psychological activities and narration throughout the article were confusing. Especially with Father Earth, who was arrogant at first and respectful at the end? The protagonist is right

The author talks too much nonsense, deviates from the main line for a long time, and there is very little plot about the title of the book. Pushing the main line is the right way!

Will the protagonist become a "god of beauty"?

There are too many narrations and psychological descriptions. There were only a few lines of dialogue in the first Tarot session. The rest were all psychological activities and narrations.

Should we kill Mr. Ke and Tang Luohui?

To tell a joke, a vampire with 6 million pounds of assets is just the Time Baron, and he put it all in a basement and got it all in one pot 😅

Both the cultivators and the moon path are occupied by Lilith 😰

The first chapter was explosive and completely baffling.

In the front, my mind is normal, but in the back, I always use unreasonable arrangements to convince myself that I am being stupid, and I don't even get any reward. It's so frustrating.

The four paths of the Mother Goddess: the moon, mother, evil, and the world The world is a symbol of the pillars of reality Evil is a symbol of depravity The mother is a symbol of the mother of all things The moon is a symbol of all negative forces From the perspective of the Mother Goddess, the moon and the world are the most important to her. One is a symbol that symbolizes the dominance of the three pillars of the real world, and the other symbolizes the origin of the negative power.

Forget about poor writing. Still holding back Qu Wen.

No, what do you mean by taking so much effort to describe an original character in a fanfic And is the plot getting more and more ugly?

I remember that the oracle in the original book was the old immortal from the vampire race who deceived Emlyn, in order to get him to recite the name of the Fool as the vampire detective, but you ended up starting a harem, really, I am speechless.

When I first read it, I had the feeling that I clicked on the wrong one. I wondered if the one I clicked on was a fanfic of Lord of Mysteries. I thought I didn't open the starting point of Tomato.

Chapters 1 to 10 are too much nonsense. Chapters 1 to 10 are for you to catch our attention and make you want to read more. You have said so much in your heart in just one sentence, and you are still talking to yourself. I can't read it.

Uh, there are two sentences in one chapter, and all the words in the middle are from the heart. Can't it be abbreviated?

The third God of Beauty is in the Western Continent. If you want to be promoted to the Moon, you need to communicate with the Mother's Nest first and let the Mother's Nest give you the God of Beauty first.