In Desolate Era, but There's a Virtual Universe!

I felt very good about this book when I first read it. Although it stitched together the worlds of swallowing, fighting, etc., The stitching was pretty good, but the more I read later, the more strange it became. Only Yang Jian, Monkey, and Nezha were written throughout the whole process, so I didn't even know who the protagonist was. The protagonist's sense of existence was too low. It was so low that the more I read, the more boring it became. It looked like a group portrait, but the author's group portraits were written with sincerity.

The author is really good at sewing. He had a mysterious revival before, and now he has another trilogy of fighting and breaking.

If you are creative, let's keep this up first and hope to continue writing 🤫

The protagonist failed to merge with the Dao, and made another operation to merge with the Three Realms, avoiding competing with Ji Ning for the position of the Chaos Controller. There is nothing to see in the future.

By the end, I had no desire to read anymore. The stitching was a mess, the protagonist had no sense of existence, and the plot was dragging. I came here specifically to watch The Wilderness, but it turned out to be a mess.

I don't understand why the whole Hedao must fail, just to prevent He Ji Ning from competing for position?

With Nuwa's talent, she should have been able to break through to the level of Taoist Lord after becoming a world god for hundreds of millions of years, and there would be no need for her inner demon to show off.

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To be honest, it is a bit creative, it belongs to the magic modified version or the swallowed version of Manghuang Ji, or an original one with the Manghuang Ji as the background! However, the writing is a bit wild and unrealistic, and most people cannot understand it.

The creativity is good, but there are many problems The first thing to bear the brunt of is the division of the realms of the two settings, such as the monster ancestor god, the peak of the world realm, and the perfection of the world realm. Don't tell me that this is in the original work. Aren't you just superfluous? Let me ask you, if you have to rank the two words peak and perfection, do you really think that you can write more plots by writing like this? Author, don't you know how badly this kind of realm setting has been criticized in other books? If you were writing a book to make money, wouldn't you examine the market environment? Then there is the issue of scale. During the period of land reclamation, we didn't go out for a long time or even a light year. How about taking a look at the original work? How big is the big world in the original work? Have you checked carefully? After writing a lot, I ended up with the impression that the Three Realms are not as big as the solar system. Why, I followed a certain family's third master and wrote about the Hydrogen Continent, and the scale setting of Douluo Continent was so miserably criticized. You didn't realize the seriousness of the problem at all. Don't you think this is a small problem that you can just look at and ignore without looking? Then the poor performance of this book is caused by these small problems. After all, not many people can tolerate these small problems. I have also read fifty or sixty pictures. Combined with the two problems I mentioned above, this book gave me the impression that it did not respect the setting of the original work. That's not to say you can't have a second design, but don't take it for granted.