One-Punch Supergirl

Having read up to chapter 99, here's my assessment: "Old-fashioned." Outdated thrills, outdated plot tropes. It contains multiple elements such as entertainment, online games, superpowers, and cultivation, but the related plots of each element in the text are "outdated" and the combination is not very good. Online games are classic examples of "hidden quests" and "hidden artifacts";

It was a mess of online games and singing, and it didn't even show the power of a punch.

The online game content can be completely deleted; it's just filler to increase the word count, and skipping it won't affect the plot.

The writing style is decent, but the plot is rather formulaic. It's the kind of book that's lifeless and lacks any truly eye-catching highlights. Take Star Sword, for example; the early part where the protagonist is kidnapped and takes on an adventure in space is quite well-written. It captures that youthful energy—the kind of drive that makes you want to overcome any obstacle with your sword.

The conflicting emotions between the protagonist's past life memories and his daughter's true nature in the beginning of Star Sword were really enjoyable to read, and the author's writing style was also quite humorous. I've read Star Sword several times, and I hope to see more of this kind of conflict portrayal in this book. 😍

I'm getting too old; the new batch of wish-fulfillment novels are so cringeworthy I feel like I'm picking my toes. I can only read wish-fulfillment novels written by older authors.

Although it's not a long story, after reading more than ten chapters, the basic tone of the article is basically like this. At first glance, I thought it was a high-level martial arts academy story, but after a few chapters it became more like the urban fantasy novel "The Return of the Dragon King." The narrative was a bit too bland, like a diary with nothing in between and no rhythm.

The game's pace is terrible. The beginning was great, but then I suddenly felt like, "Where did this come from?" I'm not interested in the game at all, and I haven't seen the previous installments either.

This word count isn't up to par yet?

I've given you all eight recommendation votes I have daily from both my main and alt accounts. Once you sign a contract, I'll also give you my monthly votes. I'll also subscribe using my alt account after the book is published. I hope you won't be ungrateful and abandon this project!