One Punch Super Girl

After seeing Chapter 99, I commented: "Old-fashioned". Old-fashioned fun, old-fashioned plot routine. There are many elements such as entertainment, online games, supernatural powers, and immortality cultivation, but the relevant plots of each element in the article are "old-fashioned" and the combination is not very good. Online games are classic "hidden tasks" and "hidden artifacts"; I don't know what I want to do when I write singing and acting; The whole system of superpowers does not have much expression; And there are some poisonous points that the author may not be aware of - For example, when a high-level immortal cultivator is reincarnated, why are low-level moves "understood" instead of "transformed"? It would be nice to add "Because the current aura environment is not good, I have temporarily designed skills and moves to adapt to the current environment." For another example, the protagonist lets a self-aware AI operate his vest, and the AI ​​uses the vest on its own initiative to have sex with the protagonist's best friend. "Making one's own decisions" now doesn't make people feel cute and interesting, it just makes people feel that this AI can't handle it clearly and can't keep it. ...... If it continues to be like this, it can only be used as hay ~ food.

It's an online game and a mess of singing, and it doesn't even reflect a punch.

The content of online games can be deleted completely, and the word count is purely water-limited. Skipping it will not affect the plot.

The conflict between the memory of the protagonist's past life and the daughter's nature in Star Sword was really exciting to watch. The author's writing style is also quite interesting. I read Star Sword back and forth several times. I hope I can see this kind of contradictory portrayal in this book again 😍

The writing in this book is pretty good, but the routines are quite old. It's the kind of lifeless thing with no bright spots that make people's eyes brighter. Take Star Sword as an example. The early part where the protagonist was kidnapped and taken to the stars for adventure was very well written. It's that kind of momentum of young people. No matter how many difficulties there are ahead, I will overcome them with one sword. If the sword can't break it, then just bring in the interstellar battleship to break it with force. There is another problem with this book, let's take Star Sword as an example. The reality is about the plot of science fiction martial arts, and Star Sword is about the plot of the western fantasy science fiction game Xianxia. If there is no violation, this book will not work. Now my only feeling about the online game in this book is that it is ancillary to the main plot. There is a feeling of you playing yours and me playing mine, very divided. Also, the protagonist is a bit too settled. I actually don't hate wearing a vest for myself. The key is that when the vest becomes a spirit, he can do things on his own, and nothing will happen without the protagonist. The protagonist is also made to worship his own spirited vest as his teacher. I can only say that I know how to play, but I am speechless... The key is that it is confusing to understand the priorities. And every time, it's the spirited Ma Jia who steals the show and causes trouble. Because Ma Jia has become a spirit, he's quite a supporting character, so he can't take on the protagonist's perspective. The supporting characters are trying their best to show off, and the protagonist is just pretending to be soy sauce on the side. There is another disadvantage, there is no enemy, that is the kind of powerful enemy. Star Sword has the human military as its enemy at the beginning. This book doesn't even have an enemy, so it's boring and lacks the sense of confrontation. Moreover, there are many settings that are quite interesting if they are written in a Western fantasy without feeling inconsistent, but they are a bit inconsistent in a fairy tale. The reason why I have this feeling is that I used evil cultivators to read Star Traveler, whose author was banned. If this book can be written down, it will actually be no worse than Star Sword. What a pity! The author is good at writing Western fantasy, but not so good at Xianxia, ​​because magic and technology are equivalent, and there will be no sense of violation whether using magic to explain science or science to explain magic. The combination of technology and immortality feels like using materialism to explain theology. It feels too inconsistent The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Is this word count not on the shelves yet? ? ?

I'm getting old now, and it's embarrassing to read the new batch of cool articles. I can only read cool articles written by old authors.

I've read more than ten chapters, although it's not long, but that's basically the tone of the article. First of all, I thought it was a high-level martial arts school style at the beginning. After a few chapters, it felt a bit like the return of the urban dragon king. The narrative was a bit too bland, like a diary with no rhythm. Also why the whole fight is skipped? Isn't this a good little climax in the early stage? I don't feel anything after watching it.

The content of the game is too out of rhythm. The first content was enjoyable, but the second one suddenly felt like what did you do to me? I was really not interested in the game, and I had never watched the previous game.

The author, I will give you a total of eight recommendation tickets every day for my large and small accounts. I will also give you the monthly tickets every month when you sign up. Once it's on the shelves, I'll also use the small size to place additional orders. I hope the author will not give me a eunuch out of ignorance!

I haven't read it yet, I hope the author can stick to it and finish it 🙂

It feels average, it's better to update Star Sword Legend

Why do you keep writing game plots?

It's not that it's not good to watch, it's just that it's too complicated and has a little bit of everything. I often skip two or three chapters just to see what I want to read 😥

I'll go back and finish the Elegy of Swords and Magic, it's a pity 😭

Why was Star Traveler removed from the shelves?

After reading this book for a long time, I felt lifeless. Without the energy of Star Sword, I still prefer the energy of Star Sword and Stars. It's a pity. If it could be written like Star Sword, there is a high probability that someone would read it, instead of being half-dead like this.

Two monthly passes can support me

The writing taste is so bland... It's just like a composition, a bit too ordinary.