The Person Is in Naruto, but the System Thinks He Is in Pirates

Is this guy another author's account? I'm afraid that the author's book won't be popular🙂 🙂

At the age of five, Metkai can open the eight-door Dunjia to three doors, haha

The subject matter is good, but apart from the subject matter there is nothing worthy of praise. The author's writing style is obviously unmanageable. The actual combat assessment section is written just like Wang Bip's article, with all the flaws it should have. A lower grade practical examination, Konoha F4 actually gathered together to watch, you like this and I like that. The group of children watching were also talking a lot, and the content of the discussion was not like a normal conversation, but like a barrage. The protagonist doesn't know how to restrain himself even though he knows someone is watching him. What can you do if you win a primary school student's exam? When is defeating Kakashi not possible? You must not surrender your life to the conscience of others in full view of the public. Aren't you afraid that Danzo will find you? This is not a conspiracy theory. The experiences of Yakushi Nonou and Saoi are all original plots.

It's useless to say more, water, water, water, water… there's still poison in the water

A Chinese name among a bunch of Japanese names, don't you think it's inconsistent?

In a dark world like Naruto, you can't control your mouth. You might as well cut off your tongue to avoid a lot of trouble.

Why do you have to write 10 chapters about the invention of the telephone in the ninja world? I'm so nervous. This plot is so boring.

Problems seen: 1. Other characters love and praise the protagonist for no reason. If there are too many, it will make people feel too childish. Praise comes too easily and lacks difficulty, and every chapter is praised. Unless it is a child, it is difficult for readers to get involved 2. The protagonist is in the ninja world, but always wants to develop power and technology, and always wants to farm. The author may have a later arrangement, but if you look at the early stage, you will feel that you have to take care of both ends, and it will not please you in the early stage. How many people can insist on seeing the later stages Taking these two points together, 1 means that everyone loves me, and 2 means farming. In male channels, readers generally want to feel that the power belongs to themselves. This writing method of everyone loves me + farming is either a harem novel or a female channel. To be honest, the author does not switch to writing fan fiction for two-dimensional mobile gacha games, or two-dimensional game fan fiction that children like. Writing comic fan fiction feels a bit inconsistent.

Here comes a bunch of names to persuade people to quit. Have you really never watched Naruto or are you pretending that you haven't watched Naruto? Konoha's strongest taijutsu ninja, Chen Baojun, tell me if this is a Chinese-like name?

The one in the book circle called "Mom, She Kissed Me Again" is someone who has trouble with the author and is a high-level villain, right? Don't you want the author to change his name just to make the book better and attract more readers? Why is he so excited that he can't stop shouting and jumping, changing his name is like killing him?

I really don't understand why there are Chinese names in Japanese comics? Don't forget where you came from? You've already made a living out of Japanese comic book fandoms, and you're still being serious? Someone used an original animation to make a point. And Xiao Li, please, Rock Lee, transliterated by Rock Lee.

The beginning is very interesting, but the author is very strange. He is obviously writing a Japanese anime fan novel, but the characters all feel Chinese, which is very inconsistent.

Getting off topic, don't forget that Pig's Knuckle's basic base is the pirate's ability, not technology. Pig's Knuckle is not even a genin now, so he develops technology? Do you have the ability to keep it? It is better to develop technology after reaching a certain level of strength. Also, when it comes to phone calls, isn't your system running on Pirates? How about some phone bugs? Being a psychic beast, isn't it better than your phone number?

The last book that was able to nest pirates was Beast Control + Devil Fruit. What pirates can give is either domineering power or fruits. The protagonist can't just keep eating fruits and turn into a Cardcaptor Sakura.

Although, but this? How should I put it, the system is stupid, and the protagonist is even stupider

It's too tedious. The progress is slow. The word count is too much. It contains too much Japanese. It doesn't feel like it was written by a Chinese.

Very interesting, please continue to update