Pirates: Obtain the Conceptual Ability of Yan Shuangying at the Beginning

You really turn into a loser when you see the empress. Even if you have a pair of swallows and two eagles, they can't change your loser's heart. It shows how much of a loser you really are.

The Empress appeared in the East China Sea... I suddenly didn't want to read it. I already knew how it was going to develop. I felt that everyone writing about the Empress was as if I had never seen a woman before 😅. If I hadn't started to conquer the Empress when I was young, it would be strange that the Empress' character would like the protagonist when she grew up. It was too embarrassing to be forced to write, and it was not as reasonable as the maids in the Ming Ge Group.

When you meet the Empress, you reveal your true colors, just like a DS The plot before meeting the Empress is good

Author, please change it. The plot of meeting the empress is too awkward.

Wow, it's Boiling Sheep. Everyone, please retreat.

Military Captain: What can you do

The second template Konoha Dance King is really unbearable. This Dance King is just a joke. Even the battlefield rose only said that the movements are elegant. Now he is really a dancer 😰 In front of you, there are no bullets in your gun. Turn around and start dancing on the spot 😂 Invincible kid👌

Although Yan Shuangying has a harem, he relies on his own charm to attract women. 🙂🙂

Alas, the multi-character template flow is really... Even if you leave aside the part about the empress... The drama will not only show ridicule and pretense and slap in the face...

The author, I would like to make some small suggestions. The essence of Yan Shuangying is not to show off, but to be a collection of proletarian warriors, full of the brilliance of communist humanity.

Yes, it's too dramatic. There are about 20 chapters of the Empress' scenes. Not only the Empress is suffocating, but the pig's feet are also the newborn Dong Xi. Would the Empress be threatened like this? Her actions after being threatened made me suffocated.

Author, you bastard! How dare you ruin Brother Ying's image in my mind 😡

The author is a eunuch. As soon as the empress comes out, your book will be gone.

The last few pictures are becoming more and more unreasonable. You don't go to Garp Sengoku and the others to learn domineering. You go to Rayleigh. What an international joke. Why don't the Vice Admiral learn domineering? It's a professional teaching process. You actually go to the fake teacher Rayleigh. You might as well go to Mr. Kaido. One-stick Liuying, two-stick domination, and three-stick awakening.

The logic in these chapters is too thin. On the issue of learning domineering, you have to abandon the near and look far away to learn from Rayleigh. Even if you don't want to lose face with the navy, I don't believe that the navy doesn't have a library or the like. I have to use my wits to find Rayleigh. And the so-called learning of Haki is nothing more than listening to Reilly explain what Haki is. This kind of thing can be found in the Naval Academy by looking for information, or by fishing it out of other people's mouths, pretending to be on patrol at the Naval Academy, and auditing courses for Haki. Or, for example, when you are in class, like When characters like Zefa and Akainu are present, ask the students what they think of Haki, let the students speak, and then throw some light on it, and let Akainu also express his own opinions. The protagonist can learn it by listening to Rayleigh's lecture once, and he has learned it. There is another killer of the Celestial Dragons. Since he has already taken action against the Celestial Dragons, he just watched the Celestial Dragons kill the patient and the nurse's boyfriend respectively, right? That's all, talking about justice, it's all just to show off.

After reading the comments and reading Chapters 11 and 2, I can only say that this novel is hopeless and should be cut.

What I wrote before is okay, but why did I turn into a loser when I met the Empress 😅

Yan Shuangying should have been among thousands of flowers. How could the kind that doesn't touch the body be a stallion? Don't write that the harem is easy to be destroyed.

What you wrote is really cool.

Cut it off, it turned out to be the dog of the Celestial Dragon, and it obeyed the orders of the Five Old Stars to seize the blueprints of Pluto.

Dear friends, this author corrects his mistakes when he knows they are wrong, and he listens to readers' opinions very much. After a few pictures of the Empress, he is no longer a licker, and you can still continue reading. A little bit toxic, but not a big problem, just skip it.

Let me tell you something, it's quite beautiful.

This book is still readable if I don't write about joining the navy. It was written after I joined the navy. Are you serious and treating everyone as a fool?

Skip the Empress, recommend to read Chapter 31 to withdraw

After reading the table of contents, I found that the heroine of this book is Hancock, who then joined the navy. Her suggestion was adopted by the Warring States Period, and then she ran a school and became the principal. She also went to Rayleigh to learn domineering skills. Yeah?

I've read Chapter 46, and it's okay now. The Empress' poisonous point mentioned in the comments has probably been changed, but I didn't notice how licking it was.

I used to be able to watch the Rice Navy but now I can't stand it.

To be honest, I read carefully from the first chapter to the last chapter. The shortcomings mentioned by others do exist, but the author has seriously corrected them. This is an author who listens to advice. Overall it's really good, just a bit short.

There's something there, but the writing is still a little immature.