Warhammer: The Imperium of Man Descends from the Stars

Let me share my personal opinion on this book. In terms of writing style, aside from a few typos, it's not a big deal. But the premise is absolutely terrible. There haven't been many Warhammer games yet, so let's briefly discuss the setting issues arising from Stellaris: 1. RimWorld, RimWorld is built around planets. For Stellaris players, it's like poison mixed with poison and arsenic.

Foreword: When writing fanfiction, you have to balance the two fan bases so that people feel that you are not biased towards either the main stars or the 40k fans. However, the story written in the first eight or nine chapters portrays the Stars as very weak, clearly indicating an attempt to pad out the Stars for 40k.

Is the author a pundit? Who advocates a materialistic, cosmological approach that bans artificial intelligence?

Stellaris, with its full technology, can still take damage from Warhammer; it's really awkward to watch for anyone who's played Stellaris. If readers haven't played Stellaris, it might be worth reading, but isn't the name meant to attract Stellaris fans? The starting combat power is way too weak; you might as well say Stellaris just got transported to Warhammer at the very beginning! 😅

This performance would have been fine if you had set the protagonist's faction as the newly established Stellar Empire, but unfortunately, it wasn't. The later scenes of the protagonist switching sides with the Empire and then being tagged along are even more comical. Most importantly, if the protagonist were set as a fallen empire, their true adversaries should have been the Chaos Rig, the entire Tyranid race, and the complete Star Gods, not a direct confrontation with an empire.

🙄Is this all the Star Emperor is capable of? How can he compare to the Yellow Skin? The Yellow Skin comes with its own special effects and instantly kills him. You listed so many buffs but I didn't see anything special about the Star Emperor. No wonder he's being called a fake emperor.

That's hilarious, you're already in the late game. The water droplet two-dimensional foil is practically useless.

Cloud Hammer Cloud Stars, it's rubbish.

I haven't played Stellaris for long, but I feel like if you're already incredibly powerful in Stellaris, then in the Warhammer universe, within the realm of physical laws, you'd be utterly crushing everything in the real world. A true crush. The text definition of "exceptionally strong" is practically distorting the laws of physics with your bare hands. What are the laws of physics?

Having read up to Chapter 8, has the author even played Stellaris? You built your ring world around Earth? Or is it that nested ring system from the Megastructures? And later you even explained that in the game, the ring world is built around planets! Can't you distinguish between stars and planets, or are you just talking about clouds?