Warhammer: The Imperium of Man Descends from the Stars

Let me tell you my personal views on this book. In terms of writing style, it is harmless except for a few typos. But from the setting point of view, it will kill you. Warhammer hasn't appeared much yet. Let's briefly talk about the setting issues that emerged from the stars: 1. Ring World. Ring World is built around the planet. For Stars players, it's arsenic mixed with gut grass and crane crown red. Just look at the comment area to see how exciting it is. 2. Webway and Stargate. The performance of the Ancient Sage Webway is closer to the small channels of the Harbint Unified Planet State, but it can open doors everywhere in the galaxy. For example, some Eldar are chopping corn on the earth and saying that chaos is the enemy. The star gate is similar to Doraemon's arbitrary gate, but it can only be connected between gates, and who can pass through can be controlled. 3. Army. Stars players have always recognized that the Stars Army is for children, but this is based on the Stars Fleet's 100% air supremacy. When encountering the Shield Fortress ball, you still have to send Army soldiers without relying on the Colossus. But how incredible is the Army of the Stars? The veterans of the giant zombie band went up and blew up the satellite directly, and this was only the second-level unit, and there was a first-level unit above it. The very strong Azhan worms push the anti-gravity level four armor buildings of the stars like pushing blocks. No matter how you look at it, the Astartes cannot defeat these soldiers, not to mention the even more incredible mod army. And I personally think the biggest problem with the author's setting is that this is a late-stage empire that has defeated natural disasters. Generally, the default is to complete the technology and enter the cycle. In the later period, even if the empire was in trouble and couldn't get the dragon scale armor, it still had the guarantee of neutron armor. This thing is different from the water droplets of the Trisolaran. The water droplets are just pasted with a layer of atoms, but this is battleship armor. Converted to Warhammer, it's a well-preserved Golden Age regime. This still does not take into account the creation of the universe, which rapes the law of conservation of mass and energy and tramples on the laws of mathematics. This thing refers to the ancient saints or star gods. And the Xinghai Tianpu above this. If the author did not choose Fallen Empire to start, the decision would not be as big as it is now.

Preface: When writing a fanfic, you need to weigh the two fan bases, making it seem like you are not favoring either the stars or 40k. However, the story as written was such that the stars were set very weakly in the first eight or nine chapters, and it was obvious that they wanted to give the stars 40k. The first story event, the battle between the Astartes controlled by the protagonist and the Human Empire, does not describe the themes of sacrifice and sacrifice that are mainly described in 40k. It is just a one-sided massacre without any meaning. You can't see how this event will move you. It feels like giving 40k to the stars. This leads to the fact that it is neither biased in favor of Stellaris nor Warhammer 40k, which is incredible. As for the specific settings, to put it simply, the setting chapters in the first eight chapters contain a large number of settings that have not been approved by the readers. 1. Establish a female genetic body. But don't add that they have a relationship with the protagonist, like it, etc., Because this is the Primarch, and behind each one there is actually a certain number of independent fan bases. You can copy the original work exactly, or you can completely change your personality. You must not have an affair with the protagonist, otherwise you will naturally lose empathy for the original gene, which will make people feel fake. Just like if you write about an ordinary person who picked up 10,000 yuan on the ground, no one will find it unpleasant. If you write about an ordinary person who picked up 1 million on the ground, and then spends it how he wants and how he enjoys it, then the readers will have to ask you why. 2. The protagonist must assume the identity of human emperor. This is the Emperor of Mankind. Every word and action he makes must conform to the corresponding identity. Or he must at least obtain the reader's permission once, so that he can make the following decisions, such as not cooperating with the Human Empire. There is a justifiable reason for his actions. Returning to the identity of the protagonist, what kind of person is he? There is no way for people to acquire incredible abilities, power, property, etc., And then treat the world as a game. Online novels must write the protagonist as such a person. However, because there is another human emperor as a comparison, the protagonist is completely unlike a human being who is responsible for the future of a race. He is helpless, infinitely cruel, and full of love for mankind. 3. Xiao Hui. The question is still the same. Here Xiao Hui actually represents the protagonist's woman, a well-educated, courteous, gentle, but extremely powerful person with extraordinary strength. You can think about it with your head, and there will definitely be another relationship. Then the question is very simple, why? Summary: You need to let as many readers as possible allow your protagonist to do something.

Is the author Yun? Whose star materialism bans artificial intelligence?

Stars is full of technology and can be damaged by war hammers. It's really awkward for those who have played Stellaris. If you haven't played Stellaris, you can still read it, but this name attracts people who want Stellaris. The starting combat power is too weak. Why don't you? For example, Stars has just entered Warhammer at the beginning of the game😅 A fallen empire is described like a native of Stars who has just ascended to heaven😅😅😅 Except for the giant battleship, the rest of this fallen empire is really no different from the natives.

This shows that if you set the protagonist's power to the Star Empire that has just started, there will be no problem. Unfortunately, it is not the case. It is even more humorous to play gang-hopping with the Empire later and get jumped on the ship. The most important thing is that since it is set to the Fallen Empire, your real opponents should be the Chaos Spare Ribs, the Tyranids and the Complete Star Gods, rather than catching an empire to fight to the death.

🙄Is this the strength of the Emperor of Stars? How can this be compared with Huangpizi? Huangpizi has its own special effects and is instantly better. You have written so many buffs but you still don't see anything special about the Emperor of the Stars. No wonder he is called a fake emperor.

It's really funny, you are already in the late game. The water drop two-way foil cannot be placed on the countertop at all.

The clouds hammer the clouds and the stars are so rubbish.

I haven't played Stellaris for a long time, but I feel like you're flying in Stellaris. Playing in Warhammer World, within the space of physical laws, you're beating everything in the real world. A beating in the true sense of the word. The textual definition of "extremely strong" is twisting the laws of physics with your bare hands. What are the laws of physics? The simplest are the four basic powers. I doubt whether the Ancient Sages and Star Gods in Warhammer can do this. To put it more seriously, everyone has proven the Tao with strength. Are you still playing house in Warhammer?

I saw Chapter 8. Has the author ever played Stellaris? Are you going around the world and building around the earth? It's still the matryoshka ring in the giant structure. You can later explain that the ring world in the game is built around the planet! Can't you tell the difference between stars and planets, or are they just clouds?