Naruto Starts from Otsutsuki Bloodline

To be honest, I don't know who the heroine will be, but the acquaintance process with Ino was poorly written, and the further acquaintance was also poorly written, and many of the interactions were inexplicable. And I personally think that the most important point is that the strength is too poor, just a vase. The heroine must at least have the strength of Tsunade, and she must have achieved it through her own efforts.

Overall, I can read it, except for the scene where he becomes both the savior and the villain at the end, which is a little unclear. That chapter is not very good, but the rest is okay.

The protagonist's combat power is now severely suppressed. I have learned a lot of awesome skills, but when I use them, they are useless and no one can defeat them. The Flying Thunder God Jutsu is very powerful, but I can understand why the protagonist didn't show it. Maybe it's because he doesn't have Namikaze Minato's reaction speed and combat analysis ability. But I don't quite understand the immortal mode. After I learned it, I turned it on every time I fought, but it didn't feel like it had any strengthening ability. I turned it on just to look good. Is it 50-50 against anyone? However, this book is well written when interacting with the characters, and the description of daily life is very interesting.

I insist on clearing the name of the third generation. How much does Prince Ming subsidize? ? ? If he eats expired food, the store won't sell it to him? ? ? Narutaiko will only eat ramen when he has coupons. Not to mention other aspects of the third generation, Naruto has no way to deal with this aspect. The fourth-generation son of a dignified son was raised as a nuclear weapon, not to mention protection. His mother did not treat him this way at the beginning. Why did you become friends with Gaara? It's just that the two of them grew up very similar.

Otsutsuki's blood power, fifth level!

I feel that the reincarnation eye is more beautiful than the reincarnation eye

Am I the only one who finds it difficult to open the vest, and it doesn't feel very satisfying when the horse is dropped, right?

Wasn't Kaguya Otsutsuki just a blank slate from the beginning? I remember it was so weak that it was difficult for human armies to deal with it. The bloodline performance of the protagonist is quite powerful, and the other typical examples are Indra and Asura. They were not so invincible when they were young. They only become powerful when they grow up.

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What exactly is a big 🪣 wooden whiteboard? ? ? ? Was it written in Boruto? ? ? What exactly does the whiteboard contain? I haven't made it clear yet, so I just say it's a whiteboard. Who knows what's on the whiteboard?

Every time, Obito is used to rescue the enemy to advance the plot. So speechless 😑

Obito Nagato Kimimaro looked a little disgusted. You said it would be okay if you let him go once, twice or three times, but if he ran away more than ten or twenty times and still didn't kill him, it's really disgusting. It's obviously reached the point where it can be killed instantly.

I think the only good things to write about Naruto fan fiction are the behind-the-scenes stories. But anything that jumps out to do the obvious can't be written well. The Hyuga Mirror of the Reincarnation Eye, the behind-the-scenes big BOOS Uehara Naraku, the part-time worker Akihara Kagura, Uchiha's intelligence agent Uchiha Cloud, and a book called "Tobirama Man's Assistance" or something like "Uchiha Shimizu". These are the only good books. Others are not very good.

The plot behind it is unstoppable. The outline of this book is probably only a few hundred words. The author let himself go and wrote according to the plot.

The original works are all about space and time ninjutsu, so you have to change it to a space jutsu. Isn't it embarrassing for you to pronounce the author of this name?😅

Can you change your space jutsu? What do you have to call the space jutsu that is clearly named in Naruto? Does it show that you are capable? Don't you find it awkward when you read it yourself?

Which purple thunder can hold Juuzang back or even win. You are still suppressing your combat power. Damn it, you are killing and not killing. What do you mean by being a ninja? Are you playing house? You actually saw the Holy Virgin. There are so many A-level missions and S-level missions. All the people who died were bandits and samurai. No ninja can die, right? Treat ordinary people like ants. You still pretend to have the heart of the Holy Mother. The people in the Akatsuki organization are all treasures. You can meet them in every chapter. The two sides fight for one round, each returns to his home, and then continues to fight for the second round. Kishimoto doesn't have your ink. Every time you write about a plot character, none of them die. If you die, you won't write, right? Sage mode, with five doors opened, eyes evolved, Flying Thunder God, Rasengan, all in hand, and the heel horns are all opened at 55. Are you good at it, or are these skills so rubbish? You have learned nothing but forbidden skills, and the worst ones are all S-level. You can't kill any of them. This Holy Mother is really unstoppable. Just watch it slowly.

This novel has been like this since the beginning of the bad job of driving a vest. Not to mention that this routine has been played to death long ago. Doesn't the author still think that this routine is very satisfying? It looks like a group of awkward people, and they are all working for the sake of fun, and they don't care about the continuity of the story at all. If you don't fight, who will.

? Is the account sold? It's really hard for a fifth-level author to write so many typos and not even bother to correct them when others point them out. There are also missing words and so on.

What age is it and is Kakashi's sword skills still on the table? Isn't that thing used to highlight the difference between the main characters and passers-by? During the entire later period of Naruto's career, apart from Sasuke who also played with knives, who else played around with knives all day long? Sasuke was playing with a knife, so why was Madara grabbing him and almost stabbing him to death? If you want to cheat but don't want to drive so high, what's the point?

This is the most rubbish Otsutsuki bloodline I have ever seen. It's just a piece of cake. I feel like it's not even as good as the Uzumaki clan's physique.

There are so many ABA sentences in this book that it's ridiculous. Everywhere there are nods, shrugs, pursed lips, shakes of the head, and winks.

It smells like plagiarism from "Naruto's Worker". They all followed Kakashi to reveal Obito's identity, and then followed Jiraiya.

I subscribed to a few chapters but found it boring. I really don't understand the point of getting the Otsutsuki Genshiki vest? If you want to say that you are a conspiracy theory plot, it is exposed that the Third Generation and Danzo will mess with you, so you just get a vest. Obviously you can just go over there, but you still get a vest. I don't see any meaning other than the number of water words.

I feel like each Naruto fanfic written by this author is worse than the next, but the basics of the early years are actually the best.

This book reminds me of the book about working people. But this book is so embarrassing. I can't guide it, or I can't write how to guide the plot.

After watching it all night and adding the monthly pass I just got, I think it's worth it.

Um, I just want to say that you, the author, wrote it yourself. Don't you even read it? "But" appears at least 10 times in one chapter. .

Hey hey hey, see for yourself