The Void Mage’s Fantastic Journey

I hope the author's works won't be like those glamorous bitches out there, filled with too many conspiracies, super villains, inexplicable calculations, etc. Life is already very tiring, just reading a novel, I don't want to be too tired with the inexplicable villains and inexplicable plots.

The idea is good but the narrative style is a bit uncomfortable

I'm really sorry about this. Because I'm usually quite busy, I uploaded it directly without reading it after I finished writing it. The result is a lot of typos and sentence fragmentation, and it has been criticized a lot -0- So I have started to revise the previous chapters a few days ago, and I also promise that I will check them carefully when I finish writing and upload them in the future. I'm really sorry--😭

Read the introduction! Took Galen away? ? ? Is my Lux no longer fragrant? Or is my Sword Princess not beautiful anymore? Or is my piano girl not old enough? Or am I, Kyle, not good-looking? You should talk about it.

I didn't see the protagonist using his wisdom to analyze spells and understand the rules. I only saw him using the mage as a warrior!

Starting from the encounter with the giant dragon in the forest, the whole book dropped to a new level, and successfully transformed into a novice novel. Later, he subdued the Black Widow and criticized Stark's father. The supporting character successfully lowered his IQ and EQ, and died of poison. Dumbledore is such a cautious person. It was logical to let Pigfoot enter Hogwarts as a teacher. Later, he ignored Dumbledore during the meeting with the dragon and made Dumbledore unable to understand. I am Dumbledore. Lido definitely suspected that the protagonist and the dragon were plotting something. The protagonist's series of actions were simply selfish and did not treat Dumbledore and the people of Hogwarts as true allies. He also wanted to manipulate others and use them simply as tools. The most rubbish meditation method. A man as smart as Dumbledore couldn't figure it out. He dismissed Dumbledore in just a few words. Dumbledore loved the school and the students so much that he was willing to sacrifice himself to protect the school and the students. He would actually do it because of the protagonist. After a lot of talk, he happily agreed to send students to another world to work for the protagonist and take risks in getting involved in royal battles. He also agreed to be the protagonist's dog... After the poison test was completed, the front was remarkable, but the back was full of poisonous mushrooms.

It looked fine at first, but when I saw people going to Assassin's Creed to spread their faith, I couldn't stand it. What you want is someone who truly believes in you, but they tell you that the person and god who booked you to spread your faith is just a stronger magician? And then tell them they can be like you? You're still spreading p's beliefs?

I couldn't finish ten chapters, I talked a lot of nonsense to myself, and the character descriptions were not very good.

There is a big problem with the route that the protagonist took. When I went to Valoran, I only got the power of the void. I was really speechless. The most valuable thing in Valoran is the ascension ceremony. Wouldn't it be nice to become an ascender and then be promoted to a god? With the power of the void and the power of ascension, the gods will be invincible without coming out.

I hate those who say that Western dragons look like lizards. According to your statement, Eastern dragons look like worms.