Answer Me, How Did Your Group Members Become Deadbeats?
回答我，你群员怎么成老赖了
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- Myriad Worlds
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Why put up with this?
No, Zhu Yuanzhang was already trying to trick you by offering paper money as payment, why bother with him? At least the Wuzhu coins were made of copper, a metal. Zhu Yuanzhang using paper money was the real trick.
Waste of subject matter
It's all just a stream-of-consciousness writing, completely amateurish. The characters' personalities aren't clearly defined; they're only distinguished by their names. It's terrible; your writing skills are lacking. You need more practice.
The problem is
Whenever the protagonist arrives in a new place or encounters something, there are long, inexplicable internal monologues. Perhaps this is intended to depict the protagonist's transformation. However, this feels forced and unengaging, and I also feel that his internal monologues don't reflect entirely correct values. But given that he's a host, it's understandable that his values might be flawed; just reduce the amount of internal monologues.
After reading the comments, I didn't believe it at first, but it turns out I was naive.
Even AI-generated content is better than what an author could write. It's all nonsense.
After looking at a few pages, I started reading the table of contents and then wrote my review.
Firstly, the process of acquiring the first "golden finger" (a powerful, albeit unattainable, advantage) is novel. However, the entry point is flawed. You should choose some widely accepted and popular plot points to incorporate, like starting with a storyline from "Battle Through the Heavens." That would be much better. You could directly capitalize on the traffic boom! Answer me.
Actually, the synopsis about Xiao Yan looks quite interesting, but I was discouraged by the comments section before I even started reading it. 😵
The idea is good, but the writing is mediocre.
Go screw in some screws! Where's your writing style? Answer me!
To put it simply, the subject matter is interesting, but personally, I'm not interested in the novel. I took a quick look, and you guys said there's a lot of nonsense. I just took a quick look, and it's so-so. Anyway, if an author really enjoys writing books, this isn't something that can't be changed.