Begin as a Fish and Be Reincarnated Indefinitely

The main character, Yu Sheng, was not given a golden finger, and the writing was confusing. He passed through 10 years and entered the next life, and then changed his life the second time. He was no longer interested? I don't know why I'm writing about fish, just to make up a title?

Chapter three, in the mist, inexplicably escapes from the tank, and inexplicably learns magic. The time is messed up. I don't know if I read it too quickly or the author made a random calculation.

Some of the framework and settings of this book are based on the book Liu Shui Qian Zaida, and the author has obtained his consent. Liu Shui Qian Zai has also published a new book. You can go and support it.

I feel like the rhythm is not good. I turned into a fish in my first life and wrote three chapters. In my second life I became an adult and wrote 57 chapters. There is a big problem. How many chapters are you going to write in your third life? Turning into a fish is a complete gimmick in three chapters.

I only read two chapters. It doesn't feel right. Ordinary grass carp can survive for 8 to 10 years normally, not to mention that this fish can also cast spells and can live longer in the water environment. If you don't want to be described as unusual, you should have changed the name earlier. It aroused our curiosity, and the second chapter ended in a hurry. It's not like you to sell dog meat over sheep's heads.

Is this taking the protagonist Golden Finger from Reincarnation and using it directly? Or is the old thief opening a new book? Isn't he playing a game?

Does the protagonist want to train? I feel that if the fish goes in the direction of physical training, it will probably be a creature similar to a sturgeon.

The style of this article feels so familiar and strange(

After the protagonist is reincarnated, the skills, talents, spells, etc. From the previous life are all gone? ?

Is it a little deviated from the outline? I feel like these are a little too detailed.

Xiao, is that you? Is it you? Resemble!

Have you used AI to polish your writing? I always feel a little weird when reading your writing.