After Unemployment, One Piece of Information Is Refreshed Every Day

I don't know if I didn't see it clearly, but you mean someone in the takeout group spent 40,000 to buy celebrity autographs?

I don't know what's going on. It's so confusing.

I read Chapter 16, and four or five women came out. Is this understandable? Are we all LSPs? The key is that the information is too confusing, with a hammer here and an ax here, especially the white wolf with empty gloves in the digger. It is too intellectual, or too idealistic.

Nowadays, there are many systematic articles about daily information, but none of them are really well written. The main reason is that wealth comes too easily, too quickly, and there are no twists and turns in the process, which leads to the collapse later. There are more than ten pieces of valuable information 365 days a year. It is necessary to set up some twists and turns and difficulties for the protagonist, otherwise the plot will soon become boring.

What is the information gap? Why is it tripled? Even the people of God can't stand it

If you have a golden finger, you have to find a charity condition

There were so many characters in just a few chapters that I got confused.

Are there any handsome guys or girls who like to accompany pictures? If yes, give it a squeak. Can you help me illustrate each female character in the book?

Not all information needs to be resolved. It is too deliberate and unnecessary. The description is not clear and the plot is incoherent. I suggest you sort it out.

When I read Chapter 24, just by mentioning the names of the people who appeared earlier, I didn't know which one was a takeaway and which one was civil engineering. There were also people from the opposing side. When there are a lot of characters, it is recommended to simplify the supporting roles, for example, divide them into three categories: takeout, civil engineering and enemy, pick one or two names for each, and activate the follow mode for the rest. The camera follows the named people, and the remaining people are *** with two delivery guys or workers. The dialogue is also a bit too much and has no beginning or end. It is best to divide the detailed scene paragraphs to ensure that the dialogue in each chapter is concentrated in no more than three scenes. When you are talking, you suddenly switch to something else. Unless it is something very urgent, try not to write like this. It will have a strong sense of fragmentation.

After watching the first one, I lost interest and continued reading.