American Comics: from Hogwarts to Becoming a God on Earth

The Flesh Cube is a very good idea and wonderful

Although the world transition is so fast that I can't even react, but it's pretty cool to watch for free.

Why did you copy Superman's bloodline and suppress his upgrade? Take off your pants and fart

There is no concept of blue bars in Harry Potter. There is no need to force one. If it is a normal world and there are restrictions, then forget it. This is DC. Infinite magic is nothing. The pressure is too heavy, and even after copying Superman's abilities, it's still weak. It feels like it can't grow, and there's no desire to continue watching. You should relax some restrictions appropriately.

I don't know why it has to be written together, why can't it be reopened through time travel? This kind of hybrid writing method is almost impossible to complete the book, especially if it is mixed with the DC world. DC is inherently messy, with too many and complicated concepts, and the wizarding world of Hogwarts is lightweight compared to DC. It is just like Tyson suddenly meeting Taylor while fighting. They are not on the same level, and I don't expect it to be able to complete the book. .

The setting is good and the writing is average. First of all, the system has a low sense of existence. It does not appear once in ten chapters, which makes the system appear unexpected to readers. Secondly, it is the processing of chapter 20. The owl wants to kill the protagonist and the protagonist wants revenge. What a climax. What is the result? How to write it? Is the protagonist letting things go? Just kill a gangster and forget about it? Is the protagonist incapable of catching it or can't he flip the table? Let a mouse poop on your head every day? Spying on the protagonist in the dark? Doesn't it matter if the protagonist is killed? The reader felt a lump in his throat and was disgusting to death. The part about empathizing with Falcone was even more outrageous. There was no foreshadowing or hint at the beginning. He just wrote about empathy and even set up a tombstone for the black boss who wanted to kill him. Didn't the reader feel uncomfortable after reading it? Isn't this just pure deus ex machina? I suggest you correct the poisonous points first before writing, or sign up for a class on writing novels and compositions. There are many poisonous points but they are dense, large and small.

Just watch it first, if you become a superhero protecting the United States, forget it. In American comics, time travelers can kill villains for the sake of profit and their own safety, rather than the so-called killing of villains to protect ordinary American people and protect a country that harvests other countries through its economy, military and culture. Don't say that reality has nothing to do with the work. The same goes for the American government depicted in American comics. That's how the author wrote it.

The author has been criticized like this and his grades are mediocre, but he is still writing. I admire that no matter how messy it is, at least it has an ending. Unlike some old eunuchs with explosive grades, they are very cheating. Or those eunuchs who still have subscriptions but are resolute

Now this movie, now that movie, it's a mess! Writing about Deadpool breaking the wall is the biggest poisonous point!

Bald Luthor can use Superman's DNA to create Bizarre Superman, and the protagonist in the book has super powers and uses Superman's DNA to get himself a Captain America serum. . . . You don't want to be a superman like Bezak, or a man from the motherland who was cut into a dog. You can give him a child's version of the Man of Steel, but in the end, with the blood of Superman, you become a super soldier? 🤔

After messing with Deadpool, he obviously dropped several levels.

From rescuing the reporter to the Rubik's Cube, the writing was too deliberate. In order to highlight the power of the protagonist, the author deliberately added descriptions such as the protagonist's cruelty and arbitrary, weak opponents, and awe of his subordinates. Not to mention that the addition was wrong, and the writing was not in place. 1. Because of the deliberate description, these chapters only highlight the power of the protagonist, and the plot is not If there is any advancement, others will highlight the strong when completing the plot. The author only writes about strong 2. Because it is too deliberate, the protagonist and the people around him are just like being down-to-earth. They are attacking, defending, speaking harshly, and confessing. They write back and forth, without logic and rationality 3. Just write one or two chapters, it's been a week. It's not over yet. As soon as I opened the latest chapter, I saw that this is the same theme as the previous chapters. 4. Hesitation and passivity. The author arranges for the protagonist to always solve the problem when something goes wrong. In other words, the enemy must first humiliate the protagonist and then show weakness and fear. The enemy must first attack the protagonist, and through the protagonist's understatement of defense and counterattack, To show strength, but you still struggle with small things, too weak, If you blow the island to pieces with one punch, wouldn't it be over? If you lift the aircraft carrier and throw it at the opponent's face, wouldn't it be over? You write that the protagonist is strong and can do whatever he wants, but he is cautious and clever in doing things. If the protagonist has a moral bottom line, then why should he be clever? If the protagonist has no moral bottom line, why does the protagonist only dare to be clever? You write that the protagonist is strong and basically invincible, but you only show your strength through cruelty, you only show your strength through defense, and you only use small things to let others know your strength. Does your strength lie in bullying the weak and getting beaten?

When I saw the limited exemption, I knew that this book was going to be over. Basically, the ones exempted were junk and half-dead. The editor put a limited exemption to see if it could attract a wave of traffic. If it couldn't attract more traffic, I would just give up.

Author, how did you come up with the idea of ​​including Deadpool knowing about the plot you wrote?

What a fart invincible label 🙂 Chapter 14: Lung Mist Being Chased

No wonder the exemption is limited, the writing is really stupid. I wrote something big

I saw Deadpool break through the wall and sneak away. It was so chaotic that I lost sight of it.

Does this person like to move himself so much? Things in the future seem to be destined. No matter how pitiful the bat is, it is not necessarily miserable. Zatanna, whom the protagonist came into contact with, should have evacuated Gotham from the beginning and forced the plot to unfold there. Sorry, it is really difficult to understand. Chapter 13 was the place where I was completely dissuaded. I was moved by myself and self-righteous. Why am I still alive if I like to lick others so much?

Too licking Batman. That's not to say that you can't recognize superheroes or even be their followers, but this is a cool article, and the protagonist has cheats. Ever since your Patronus Charm was awakened for bullshit reasons like "making sure people stay grateful to superheroes," I knew your protagonist was going to be a support person and a nanny. There is something interesting about this.

Can you still persist in writing a book about Superman's overwhelming combat power? Does Emperor Yili still have true fans? The problem is that it's only 1,000 monthly tickets.

I really vomited. What's the point of falling in love with the label of not having a heroine? 😂😂😂

I don't know why the Superman bloodline is suppressed? The people watching are here to see Superman. If a Superman is not invincible, does he still deserve to be called Superman? Are you getting stronger all the time? You might as well choose a small Kalami bloodline to become stronger step by step, I can accept it.

The HP world suddenly turned into ordinary people doing bloody experiments by wizards. The protagonist started to engage in massacre. It seemed like it had become another book. It was inexplicable.

What is written in a mess,,,, take a look at ai

I couldn't stand it after reading one or two chapters. This is an American comic. The abbreviation for Dream World is fine. Otherwise, it's better to change the name to Zhutian. When I saw this name, I mainly came to read the American comics. But it turns out that Dream World is written in such detail, and there aren't many American comics.

Sure enough, those who write American comics have some—— What does it mean to trust Batman's moral judgment? So not as good as Iron Man? I don't believe that the protector of all evil killers actually has morals. Look at the comments and the plot about awakening the patron curse because it wants people to be grateful to the superhero. What a pure-bred licker.

I keep accommodating those heroes, the idol filter is too heavy

If it's not the Invincible Flow, then it's a waste of time.

Less than 20 chapters, the poison continues, the protagonist is exhausted, and even almost dies.

There is no need to look at the light blue bar.