Girls Dungeon Heavy Desire

Can't you just take the original version?

It must be a conspiracy of Chaos😡

Investigation object: "Girls' Dungeon Heavy Desire" - Male Protagonist - [Loulan] Investigation Result: [Physical Time Travel] Judgment Basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates and adds information about the time-travelers' time-travel situations. With the occupation of recording, it aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the traveling conditions of the travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information inquiry services If there are any mistakes, Wanwang will correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay until March 31, 2025

Isn't the Dark Dungeon a refresh mechanism? The monsters inside need to be cleared regularly, otherwise there will be more and more monsters. So why is there still a ticket system? You can only enter with a ticket. Logically speaking, shouldn't it be better for more and more foot men to brush the inside? Of course, the high income is also a reason for the ticket system, but I remember that another feature of the dark dungeon is that it is uncontrollable, and you don't want to risk your life for money?

Because in fact, the protagonist did not lose anything at all because of this incident, and the article even specifically stated that the thief would return the things. If the author wants to write a plot like this where someone is killed, it should make the reader feel the loss of the protagonist more clearly, for example, the tiefling bard was killed or something like that. Otherwise, it feels like she's just mentally ill.

After reading the free chapter, I feel it's okay. As a result, I felt uncomfortable reading the testimonials. Since we have made an original copy at the beginning, why do we have to follow the game process; The stitched background is quite interesting, but the boss is still the ancestor, which is really a bit of a loss; Before putting on the shelf, he did a bad job before giving a speech, which is a bit ruined, and he is tolerant when he sees a woman; I originally thought it would be a story about traveling around to experience the customs and customs of different worlds, conquering different dungeons, and getting to know various monster girls and their warm and daily adventure stories. However, it turned out that it was about establishing a country and a lord. I was speechless, and my expectations and monthly tickets were in vain. It's not that there are no good ones. For example, the degree of participation in various events will be written according to the strength of the protagonist. I feel very good. It seems that the protagonist has self-awareness and brains. This is basically not seen in other books.

The crime of stealing something is not punishable by death. Let this woman just admit her mistake and punish her. Why do she have to kill someone?

After a quick look, it was determined that the tree trunk was punched and eaten too little.

The smell is too strong, don't consume it unless you are a serious 2D person.

An author who tries to write a novel with depth, well, tries to

I hope Pigfoot can maintain his character and not end up like a 🐢man

The Beautification Filter Version of The Sad Wind Emperor

Thief Girl has already used 4,000 words. If you give her another 6,000 words, it will already be 10,000 words. If you can't handle 10,000 words, you will lose the follow-up reading. These three chapters will be published together, and it would be better if the chapter names are clearer.

It's a bit interesting, but it doesn't have the desperate atmosphere and blood pressure of Darkest Dungeon, and the non-dungeon part is boring.

Pigfoot is simply an idiot. He has no common sense and no way to deal with danger. He just hangs around in the dungeon with that broken plug-in that sometimes doesn't work... You just go down to the dungeon and check the information (information includes but is not limited to strategy, history, documents, past records...)

Think of the dungeon as the Soul Knight and you will understand everything instantly

Brother who writes about monster girls, you must keep writing it!

Deep Diving Tide Controller: The abominable humans are here again. They have killed many of our brothers. Let me give you some advice first... Deep Diving Maneater A: Can't wait, for the sake of our lost brothers! (Give No. 2 Ah San a knife) Deep Diving Man-Eater B: Let me help you! (Another knife slashed hard on Ah San) *Ancestor: The situation has really taken a turn for the worse* Ah San: Is it finally our turn, then... /The deep-submersible tide control master used [Suffocating Wave], and Ah Sannecked Zi Yiwai/ ——————Heir's Perspective———————— Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that I have newly learned[Alien Demon Buster], [Hate Alien Demon], [Hating Beast], [Sclerosis of Epidermis] Ah San😭 tips: Be careful of speeding

I really want to play dungeon, are you a gold medal sales person?

My XP is still not enough to support me reading this book

First let me talk about what I think are the advantages: The subject matter is well written, it is relatively novel, and it is quite attractive Although there are cheats, there is no over-the-top, and the balance is pretty good In terms of combat, the protagonist's character is also good, Yes Self-awareness (knowing that I am a noob) Also has the mentality of becoming stronger (use it when you need it, but do not completely rely on plug-ins and become a plug-in, but also find ways to strengthen yourself) At least not the kind of protagonist who is the same whether you have it or not, and can be a different dog. Then there are some sharp voices: The shortcomings are obvious: The plot twist is too rigid and too mechanical; (Those adventurers in the city defense battle are simply living saints, acting as if they have been brainwashed by mind control, something is wrong no matter how you look at it) The characters are a bit too flat; The gap is huge, it is impossible to change a pair of different worlds. What you feel when you stand on the mountain is that everyone is equal, and the strong should not bully the weak?

The pace has been a bit weird lately, and I don't really want to watch quirks 😁

What does "on" in the introduction mean? Don't understand

Join in the fun

Hehe, Monster Girl really likes it

There are indeed flaws in what the author wrote. I hope everyone can view it rationally. Please discuss it reasonably and also ask the author to carry forward his strengths (bushi

Did you spell it wrong in the introduction? Oh...

Does the protagonist have such deep relationships with other people? I didn't realize it. The plot of helping to defeat the White Dragon is awkward. You can just ask the system to set a task or give you a reason to get some reward. You are so awkward.

Wherever the protagonist goes, something happens, and whatever the protagonist wants comes to him. The aura of the protagonist is a bit too obvious, and it destroys the sense of immersion. The protagonist is a bit too busy. The above is just a suggestion from an ordinary reader.