One Piece: Adopt Akainu and Adopted Son Barrett at the Beginning

Barrett is one of the most powerful protagonists. He is so talented. I think he is just a little weaker than Big Mom I can't even imagine how embarrassing it would be to give him a suitable fantasy beast species.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist has really upright views. He has IQ, EQ, and has several wives. I think he deserves it. Many people can't even be a good partner and teach good children, but the protagonist can do it, and he also raises a bunch of children very well. These qualities and achievements are also precious in reality, not to mention the average pirate. Based on the protagonist's current performance, it is not an exaggeration to call him a great sage in the world of pirates.

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to mention a new car again. I hope you will update a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. Thank you.

The writing style is sophisticated, the plot is well plotted, and the characters are full of characters. Or is it a pirate story +an alternative behind-the-scenes group portrait story . Aren't you chasing death? ?

For a master of physical skills like Barrett, it is better not to eat the fruit than to eat the fruit. Unless Barrett refers to his colleagues and cultivates the combined fruit to a conceptual level.

I feel like I can still take Jhin in, my racial talent is off the charts

The newcomer's writing style is not sophisticated, but it is not immature either. Although some descriptions make the protagonist very pretentious, it is still readable.

In fact, I think the most suitable fruit for my little daughter is Momo. Make a big bomb and then boom a hundred times.

Author: In fact, there is no need to rush to open a new book. Give it a few days to sort out the things that you will write wrong when you are impulsive. Make a note of it. Whenever you think about having a seizure, look back. Remember what you will do when you have a seizure to avoid doing it again (Some things written during a seizure can be looked back at. It's really embarrassing to the point where my scalp is numb, watch it a few times to avoid it effectively) Secondly, it's important to adjust the situation, Because the plot of killing the protagonist's son's fiancé who fell in love with a girl, and letting him know what the fuss was like is an obvious situation. You will only write major points when your attitude is wrong. It is obvious that you need to make some adjustments, including re-examining the whole book from beginning to end to see where your mentality is wrong, which intentions are actually unnecessary, where you are simply pretentious and impulsive, and how to write the plot. It is the optimal solution, Otherwise, you will just eat up the negative emotions and frustrations and lose your experience. Of course, don't rest for too long and lose your inner motivation. Finally, come on 👍

Write a novel about taking care of Xier. Take care of him and love him. In the end, you have no money to steal a piece of bread. Then you are beaten to death in front of him and tell him to love life.

Recently, the chapter has obviously returned to level, so that comment was deleted. There is too much content in the front and it is not easy to change. The key is to be stable in the back. Pinning that comment to the top can easily affect your performance. After all, at first glance, they are all bad reviews.

​In your opinion, why do birds fly? Because they want to fly into the sky. But this is impossible, this is just wishful thinking of romantics. I also have the same idea, the desire to transcend childhood, but I can't do it just because I want it Because they have to fly into the sky. When the final meteorite is in the Cretaceous Period, only free birds can escape from their destined demise. Birds want to fly into the sky, so they build wings for themselves. Their ideals are completely opposite, and they hope that their ideals will be trampled on Yes, in order to prevent the sun from setting, I flew into the sky and took away your light. I will melt with it and fall to the sea. But if you want to take it back, you, you, must fly to a higher place than me. This is the logic of adulthood after transcending childhood.

Among pirate fans, the one that impressed me the most is Arceus' pirate journey. You can look at it and it's similar to the family style.

The writing is okay, but I'm really tired of seeing this camp. If you are a navy, you have to listen to the Celestial Dragons. I don't mean you have to be pirates. Is there anyone who wants to go it alone?

It seems that Barrett will form a bond with the protagonist's daughter. After all, the protagonist's daughter's personality complements the current Barrett, and it is easiest to get close to his heart and become Barrett's white moonlight 😏😏😏

Um, how can I put it this way? It looked pretty good at first. When it was about to be released, there were more than ten pictures in a row about my son's childish adventures. I really didn't think it was good. An original character adventure with a protagonist is enough. The adventures of the protagonist's son are redundant. It's better to write a story about accepting Hawkeye and letting Hawkeye go on adventures, or about Jinbe, Aoji, etc.

Can you strengthen the protagonist appropriately?

The author wants to write a lot of content, which is very rich, but the pain point of serialized novels is that they are slow. There are almost no chapters left now, and there are no comments in the book circle. More than 90% of people came to read this novel firstly for Sakaski and Akainu; secondly, they wanted to see the protagonist log in to the pirate time so many years in advance, and see the protagonist's fluctuations in the world and the development of the characters, but no one wants to read the protagonist's heirs all the time. A little mention is enough, and there are many mentions before and after it is released. Less, it has been mentioned a lot before. Not many people want to read this kind of content. It should be more about seeing the growth and changes of Barrett, Sakaski, and the Navy compared to the original work One or two small characters are enough, there is really no need for so many group portrait perspectives PS: The main pain point is the update speed + plot advancement. Most of the people here want to see Pokémon development. If the hand speed is okay, it is recommended that the author divide it into two chapters, one chapter for group portraits and one chapter for Pokémon development.

On the island of Shangkong, Bika captures a little ghost named Eniro. He possesses the Thunder Fruit and has the potential to be at least one of the three generals.

Are you serious? Is this the end?

The emotions are described in detail. Looking at the name, I thought it was the kind of mindless and refreshing novel that just accepts people's praises and worships them.

The beginning is really unappealing, and I don't have the desire to read on. I personally feel that it doesn't look good.

Is the author here? I read it on Q. I remember that Akainu's fruit can cause volcanic ash in volcanic eruptions. Volcanic ash can cause respiratory infections. Have you ever considered the nightmare of a strong taijutsu person?

When reading a novel, you have to limit this and that. You don't have to rely on yourself and other people's protagonists. When writing a novel, you have to refer to the unsatisfactory reality and seek perfection. The strength of your imagination and battle is all supported by the second set of restrictions.

In 1480, Kizaru and Akainu are almost 20 years old. Do you want to adopt them? Aoji is about 10 years old

Where can I find the related works mentioned by the author? Where can I read the extra chapters? Which book lover knows about it? Can you tell me?

When will the campaign start? I'm stuck at home every day

I just watched One Thousand and One Nights. Is this really a joke? Do you have more plots in the future? Can you please make the title clearer? I personally don't like reading it very much. I feel like I've been cheated.

I am Vlad von Carstein, Count of Sylvania, Elector of the Empire, but everyone likes to call me "the noseless" vampire. I love literature. Growing up in the desert country of Nehekhara, I aspire to become a cultural person who studies pyramids and mummies in the future. But I never expected The Pharaoh Queen was greedy for my handsome appearance and forcibly transformed me into an immortal vampire. Being immortal is certainly cool, but I missed my most beloved literary path. I practice martial arts intensively. Forced to become the queen's husband, I had to strengthen my body and extend my endurance. I spent a hundred years practicing martial arts and became one of the twelve most powerful vampires. But I never expected The seemingly powerful vampire country was besieged by the Tomb Kings. I fought bloody battles on the front line. The queen had already escaped early, the country was ruined and the family was destroyed. I was forced to wander around. I practice magic. While wandering, I obtained a Necronomicon and became a pseudo-believer of Nagash, Lord of the Undead. I was soon appreciated as the Commander of the Undead and was also given a Ring of Resurrection. Immortality, infinite resurrection, and reaching the pinnacle of life are just around the corner. But I never expected When the unlucky Master Na was about to ascend to the throne of death, the black pyramid was accidentally blown up by the Rat Man. Nagash failed to ascend to the gods, and the undead believers also turned into ashes. I began to pursue power. I, the false believer, survived. Suddenly I realized: I have to rely on everyone to run, but I am the most reliable. So I transformed into a prince from a neighboring country, married Isabella, the daughter of Count Sylvania, adopted and transformed a group of little vampires into sons, and became the most powerful elector in the empire. Then the battle for the throne started. I want to be the emperor and control my own destiny! But I never expected During the crucial battle to invade the imperial capital, my resurrection ring would be stolen! So she was attacked by the high priest and fell to death on a wooden pile under the city wall. The vampire army was defeated, Isabella died in love, but her son Manfred was complacent with the resurrection ring. I began to yearn for justice. The ruthless backstabbing made me look back on my thousand years of life and found that I am both civil and military, proficient in magic, powerful, and in love, but I still inevitably end up in a miserable ending. The reason is that I always hang out with a group of villains. So after I beat up the unfilial son and took back the resurrection ring, I decided to change my life - to become a partner of justice! So, I led the army north to fight against Chaos in the Final Battle, rescued the last emperor Karl Franz, killed the leader of the Blood Dragon Knights who took refuge in the devil, and killed the plague doctor who murdered King Raun. Being so righteous, I am already a pillar of the right path. But I never expected The evil god Nurgle resurrected my beloved Isabella to deal with me. I didn't want to hurt her, but I took off my infinite resurrection ring during the battle, put it on Isabella's hand, and then jumped off the city wall with her in my arms. After giving up eternal life, I was nailed to the wooden stake under the city wall again, while Isabella was resurrected by the blood ring and got rid of Nurgle's influence. But the world also ushered in final destruction... When I jumped to the justice camp, the villain actually won? ! I suddenly realized: There are many forked roads in life, and it has nothing to do with good or evil; everything is a trap, and no one can control it at all. But a bard from Cathay said that he could help me change my destiny against the will of heaven. Should I believe him? Or is this another new pitfall?

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