Cultivation of Immortality: Start by Copying the Longevity Talent of the Turtle!

Is there anyone who really likes crappy starts now? Shock

"Looking back again" happens all the time. A lot of authors have this sentence in their introductions. I thought it was Jiang Yuheng singing "Looking back again".

I am a sect, but you don't have a low-grade spiritual root and can cultivate faster than a high-grade spiritual root. What do you hide behind a middle-grade spiritual root?

If the average life expectancy is not 1,800 years per person, why do you delay others for 10 years without feeling guilty at all, and still smile calmly when faced with other people's questions?

After reading the first chapter, you can see that the author's structure is too small, and he can't get any side business with 200 yuan.

Is there a woman in the main character? Another unparalleled protagonist?

Warm reminder This author keeps updating frequently, and the interruption lasts for a long time.

The key is the Taoist type and the cultivation school type. I really have no desire to click on it.

I have always felt that longevity should be based on the current state, rather than being fixed. People's longevity will continue to change if they eat whole grains. Even if an immortal remains in peak condition, there will be times when he has to fight, and he will die even if he is seriously injured. At this time, longevity will definitely change. (Shouyuan, if there is a system, the system will also analyze it according to the status of this month or longer or shorter. For example, if you eat normally and practice normally this month and live according to this month's status, you can live for 50 or 60 years for the rest of your life. If your habits change, fight, eat the wrong things, or get sick, your lifespan will be shortened as a matter of course. For example, if you eat the genius earth treasure and your condition is better, your lifespan will be lengthened as a matter of course.)

The writing is okay, the plot is okay, and it's smooth, but there's just not enough sense of crisis or urgency.

Why don't you use copy and paste? There are also weapons and self-defense skills that are not speechless.

Mortal: Start from the game store

There are not many poisonous spots and it is edible. The only thing that is okay is that the protagonist's golden finger never appeared in the later stage.

It can be written about the family, the skill is good at point B, and the combat power is stronger. In fact, for alchemy and weapon refining, it is best to have fire spirit roots, and the formation method to have earth spirit roots. To be honest, it is best to have more than three foundation-building pills for miscellaneous spirit roots. In addition, it is best to have more than one woman. It seemed that it was too easy for me to make alchemy myself, and my fighting power was too strong, so I didn't even accept women. I originally hoped to add more top-level skills and top-level soul-accelerating magic weapons. Talisman treasures, spiritual beasts with special functions such as the effect of psychedelic control of the soul, second-level high-grade puppets and above, corresponding to casual cultivators or ordinary family monks below the middle stage of foundation building can win, otherwise it will be too easy. The technique is powerful, the spiritual power is strong, and you can control longer magic weapons.

I don't understand. After the protagonist and the turtle have exchanged their life spans, the turtle only has a normal human lifespan. Isn't this lower limit still the normal monk's lifespan? The turtle will die if it dies. There is no difference between this and not changing. It's not like the turtle is changed

The setting of this book is okay, and the protagonist's acting style is also good. Although the emotional line is a bit rubbish, it is still a pretty good book. Unfortunately, there are a lot of typos in the text, and the context does not match. The first sentence is a panacea, and the second sentence is a jade slip. It is also speechless, especially before and after the foundation is established. Several paragraphs are repeated in the text, which is boring.

What does Goldfinger look like? I feel like it's not written clearly and I haven't used it much later.

The elixir is formed too quickly. This type of novel cannot be introduced too quickly, otherwise it will lose its true meaning.

85 Photos after listing. The last few pages and the first few pages of Chapter 86. The more poisonous you have, the more poisonous it will be. The preface and postscript are completely incompatible. He said that he would refine four foundation-building pills and store them away, but in Chapter 86, he took them all out again.

Fairly well-behaved, traditional immortality writing

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