The Villain Cadre Doesn't Want to Become a Magical Girl

It's quite interesting. The setting is pretty good. The conflict of the protagonist's identity supports a lot of the plot, and there's even a lot of content that can be expanded. However, whether this type of book can be written well requires some advantages beyond the setting. For example, the current interaction between the protagonist and Fox Lingling is very interesting. Of course, there is too little content to draw a conclusion, but in short, I like the relatively relaxed style of this book, and it is not written to be heavy for the sake of being heavy. This book could be more daily and comedy-oriented, like a light novel (?). This is my suggestion.

There is no dark and cruel, no disgusting official, classic magical girl, love is easy and funny 👍

Recasting the glory of TS-type magical girls depends on you. If you haven't read this book, Wadaxi😭😭😭

After more than a month of social life, I finally had time to pay attention to the specific data of this book. Today I discovered that I have only been reading sixty or seventy years. This is actually to be expected. After all, the reading of this book was very low at the beginning, and it was natural that I had no time to explode. But this cannot continue after all. I have to do something to change the status quo, otherwise I will still send the next book. Originally, I was writing stories about male protagonists at Pineapple Bun, but the male protagonists there were in decline. After finishing one book, I started to revise it. I thought it would be better here, but I found that I couldn't get through it, and it was difficult to make any progress at the beginning of the regular day---just the last book with more than 200,000 words. Then I started reading this magical girl transformation story. I originally wanted to jump back to Pineapple Bun, but because Pineapple Bun no longer accepts stories with incomplete transformations, I started again. It's just that I found out that I still miscalculated. The magical girl story was not easy to read at the beginning. It was basically read by readers who couldn't stand the devil's delay after get off work. Unfortunately, I hadn't opened the book yet when the devil was behind get off work. I didn't reach the peak of the book in the first month after it was opened, and the initial wave of traffic was not right. The main reason why I am still writing this book is due to inertia and reluctance. Of course, the main reason is that I have been unable to think of the beginning of the new book during this period, so I just continued writing. However, what should I do after finishing the book is really a problem. There is a big gap between me and those talented writers. I can't think of a lively plot. It's really difficult for me to think about the beginning. Maybe I should reset my first book. As for the evil god who just wants to be a good guy and doesn't want to be surrounded by them, at least the traffic of the normal male protagonist's story will be okay, so that people will not have the desire to click in. I should simplify the setting and make the plot more serious. I will take advantage of the traffic in the first month to see if I can hit the new book list. But I don't know if this behavior of resetting the work is illegal. So I need some advice on what to do next. I still want to make money

I've seen a lot of eunuchs, but I've seen very few who could finish writing them without making much money. I'm looking forward to your next book.

It looks good, but it's a pity that it's not popular. There are fewer and fewer people following it. I'm a little worried about whether I can stick to it.

At present, there are too few explosive points, and there are too few reasons for the slow progress of the plot Why don't you try double updates every day () Mainly because I recently watched a similar water-funded cadre + magical girl, and the two fights of the protagonist so far did not leave a deep impression on me The first battle was just pure numerical values ​​to chase off the soldiers, show your face and save the person, no more The second battle will open the field I was frustrated for a long time, and then suddenly I understood the numerical monster awakening mechanism and drove it away. The areas that should have been a bit explosive were opened in a normal way, and the emotions were over before they were accumulated. Or maybe what was accumulated was the emotions of other magical girls, not the emotions of the protagonist. If you want to stay as readers, you need to polish it a little more.

It's awesome and it's still being updated. If this one is finished, I'll order all of your next books.

This is a very interesting entertainment novel, with few open maps. The double identity of the protagonist brings out a very rich perspective. The characters who have appeared so far can also have a lot of fun. The logic is still in the box. There are a lot of holes dug now. Looking at the subsequent filling level, the results are a bit worrying and the author is afraid that the author will run away with the train. Overall, it is good.

If the author can persist in writing BeLike: How difficult is it for a person to persist...

It's a pity that such a good book is not on the shelves

Now that you have finished reading the current chapter, let's make a summary and recommendation. First of all, the core dramatic tension of the book is identity conflict and concealment. It is worth mentioning that Fox Yu already knows the identity vest. This hidden identity is exposed so early, and there is no delay in receiving praise. However, it remains to be discussed whether the author can achieve a good effect after quickly using this method, whether it is to deepen the identity conflict or transfer to other conflicts. Of course, given the author's dominant position in elements such as "acting" in the protagonist's ability design, I temporarily think that this book will continue to develop in terms of identity drama. Let's talk about the character design of the protagonist. The protagonist is a Thousand-Faced Person, but his personality is still that of a magical girl. However, as the Minister of Friendship, he clearly pointed out that he has been tortured, abused, etc. It is not recommended to describe this aspect, because the protagonist still shows an ordinary moral sense. From another perspective, if I decide to go into the dark part, I will expect a fierce conflict between the protagonist and the magical girl. After all, he is really doing Gestapo work for wages. If we just brush it off, it would be a waste of this innate human resource. Regarding the heroines, read the author's comments, Harem Direction. Let's talk about the aunt first. This role is too thin. After all, the story has just begun, but I hope the author still pays attention to it. The emotional drama of the aunt is very obvious but there is no description other than love (maybe it will be described in the future when talking about the past). The main recommendation now is the fox. The author also has a better impression of the fox. The arc of the story is still acceptable. At the same time, as an "accomplice" character, the identity conflict between "magical girl" and "abyss" can be discovered in her like the protagonist. So to me, the fox is more interesting, and the aunt is too ordinary. Coming to the summary part, let me first talk about the score: 7.5. The main problem is that there are too few, and the future is promising. Oh, and the foreshadowing feels a bit too obvious. This is not a problem, but it can indeed be optimized. Many things will weaken the impact. There are some interesting characters, and the drama is good. If you handle it well, it will be a good light novel.

What I look forward to most every two days is this update, and what I look forward to most every other week is the update of the devil next door (sad)

This is really transsexual and a bit disgusting.

I recently read two pretty good magical girl novels, and they both got pretty good grades. I still read them every day, but these two days I read them one after another. On the other hand, the author here not only insists on updating, but also allows everyone to read it for free, which is amazing. The following are the two eunuch books. I wonder if any book friends have read them.

How do you give me a sense of déjà vu like an old brainless youth romance campus comedy? Or any of the various lightning points?

My only complaint about Xiancao is that the male protagonist has zero erotic mental activity, none at all. Is this still a man?

I leave the words here and you finish the book as quickly as possible. I will order the entire next book directly, as promised.

The look and feel is top-notch, the logic is clear, and it's worth a look.

Have you ever been a magical girl? It's a bunch of random writing, and I take it for granted!

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Is it the magical old man again?

The author's writing is really good. Whether it is the sense of crisis of the characters or the introduction of the world view, they are just right without being artificial. In many magical girl novels, she appears capable and lively. It's a pity that you can't recommend this book.

Although the world in Donglin City is small, Li Moran's heart is big

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"! Read often

Consider resetting this book and sending it to other platforms to see the data? 😭We really like this story 😭 Of course, if the author wants to write another book, I will support it as long as it is good 😭

This book is so well written, why hasn't it been put on the shelves?

In the middle period, I started to feel a bit watery and boring.