There Are Too Many Female Protagonists After Rebirth

I don't know how the author wants to clean up Qingmei. Now I think it's best to end this character line as soon as possible. No matter how Qingmei is cleaned up, having a child is a poisonous point. To be honest, seeing so many regrets, this should be a very disgusting way of writing. The standard of a certain bar is qcqs. Not to mention, you are definitely a poisonous character in the past life. If this character is not done well, it will be a failure at best. But if you do it well, it is better to focus on other female protagonists.

The author's writing style is really good, but I couldn't read the ten lines at a glance, and I'm particularly curious about Qingmei's lines? Because none of the other female protagonists have this line that makes me curious. If Qingmei is not the heroine, I don't think it is necessary to portray so many of her lines. It feels a bit cruel. If Qingmei doesn't change and still wants to please her best friend, let her go offline. She easily distracts me when she appears. After all, everyone has a regret in their heart.

The relationship between the heroines except Qingmei is a bit shallow. It is necessary to add some plot descriptions and story interactions to bring up the feelings. If Qingmei was married and had children in her previous life, even if she committed suicide, it would not be a big deal. Never be a literary youth.

The plot is incoherent, and many places require readers to make up their own minds. Is it smooth for the author to finish writing without even reading the entire article? The jumps in the plot are a bit outrageous. One second, you are eating and the next second, you are discussing Qingmei in front of the bookstore.

When I was in high school, I also met a girl with the same personality as Lin Yao. She and I were in the same class together since the first grade of junior high school. We were not childhood sweethearts, but we were similar. We were better at playing in junior high school. I took her to the Internet cafe to apply for a QQ account and play together in the Internet cafe. I remember that we played Dungeons and Warriors together. I let her play the magician, and I played Soul Calibur. I took her to brush up the pictures of Gran Forest. I still remember that she was chatting with a netizen on QQ, and then she asked me to take a look. When I was watching the video, I saw an old man on the other side. I laughed so hard. When we were in high school, we were not in the same class, and we also played like this through the first year of high school. It wasn't until my sophomore year in high school that I suddenly heard from a friend that she had a boyfriend with a yellow hair. I didn't believe it at the time, because after playing with her for so long, I still don't know if she has a boyfriend? When we were playing together later, I saw her bringing her boyfriend over, which made me feel bad at the time. It seems like something very important has been lost. I just knew I liked her. But she does already have a boyfriend. I was quite miserable during that time. When she asked me to play, I also said that I wanted to review books, or that I had something to do, or that I was wallowing in an Internet cafe. To put it shamefully, I cried secretly in bed alone at night. After she came out, I deleted all her contact information and blocked her. After a period of estrangement, the relationship gradually faded away, and my love for her transferred to another girl. However, I later heard from a friend that she and that yellow guy broke up not long after that. She failed to pass the high school graduation exam, so she dropped out of school and went out to work. I went back to my hometown some time ago and saw her selling beef with her husband in the market. She didn't recognize me at the time, so I took one look and turned around and left.

That's it, rather than rewriting, it's better to reopen.

The aunt is very good, and the two heroines are also very classic. There is nothing to say. I dare say that what everyone is most concerned about is Qingmei. How does the author plan to deal with Qingmei in the future? It feels like a lot of the author's foreshadowing is just to clean up Qingmei, which doesn't really seem like it. The author's writing style is a bit special, as if it has been deleted. In the latest chapter, what was written about two people at the table eating together? So obsessed. It was written earlier that Qingmei had a child, and then it was written that she committed suicide. Later, she wanted to clear her name that it was not hers? It can be whitewashed. Although it is cliché, it is still watchable. What I fear most is cuckoldry in the past life. I am also afraid that the author just wants to torture Qingmei, because the author is writing about Qingmei and there is nothing wrong with her in this life. I hope it can be arranged well so that they can reconcile or disappear in the future. I did not read Qingming to read youth pain literature.

It looks like the second day. Erri is an author that I like very much, and also an author that I feel very sorry for. So regardless of the author or not, I hope I can have a good attitude. This kind of writing method should have little hope for platinum masters, but if you don't deliberately write a crappy plot, you should be able to earn a relatively ideal income without any problem.

The author has a strange writing style. I just stayed up late to catch up on the latest chapter. Maybe it was because I read the novel quickly and I was not so energetic. Sometimes when I read this novel, my mind often failed to respond. I wondered if I had missed something, and when I flipped forward, I felt that I hadn't. For example, in the following paragraph, what comes first, and what the male protagonist wants to say is hesitant to say. I was completely confused when I saw this, and it took me reading the whole paragraph to complete all the content. I feel that there is a missing scene in the middle where the male and female protagonists see another couple reaching out to take a taxi.

So far, the most controversial plot of this book is probably the green plum. Once it is written, it will be the biggest highlight of the book. If it is not written, the book will be finished. The other heroine scenes don't feel very appealing. After I finished reading it, the one that impressed me the most was this green plum, because I also have a green plum. But it has also become a regret in life.

If Qingmei was the heroine, there would be no need to watch it!

Not only did the reader lose the feeling of involvement and flesh and blood, but the protagonist also failed to adapt to his new body just like the game's human world. Everything seems so bland, without the youthful look of a high school student, neither scumbag nor affectionate. Are you telling me it's a harem novel? Haha, how can the protagonist have a harem with this character? The interaction between the protagonist and Tang Yaoyao didn't feel that the protagonist was sexy, it felt very artificial and unnatural.

The scene changes too quickly, so you have to watch it carefully to not get out of touch. To sum up, I personally think that opening a harem will slowly change Lin Yao's personality. It is not a pity that Qingmei marries someone else. They were all reborn, and they kept silent and did not change knowing the outcome. If you say you don't like it, then you really don't like it? Inexplicable separation. The character of Lin Yao itself is set up in a weird way. How could she be a pleaser personality if she was born with such conditions?

It seemed like I was reading a little too fast. Did Lin Yao commit suicide later? Is the protagonist's nightmare at the end of the first chapter Lin Yao?

Good looking, food! ! ! Write quickly

The author's way of writing is really stream-of-consciousness. He doesn't write carefully. The writing feels like he writes whatever comes to his mind. It seems that the author's mind is empty when he writes. It's actually quite uncomfortable for readers to read.

Very good, eunuch

How long has it been since I saw a rebirth novel with such a touching feeling?😭😭

If you like to do some extravagant things, you will easily be dragged into a dark room 🤭

I can't even listen to opinions. The book in the same category also had some chapters sealed, and then the author's account was cancelled. New books still need to be maintained. Mainly because the author is so unreliable.

After reading the latest chapter, because the writing style is more literary and delicate, it will exclude some readers, but this is a style issue rather than a quality issue. Then Lin is a somewhat controversial heroine, because I don't know how the author plans to arrange it, and I can't comment on it, but it's best to write based on what you have decided at the beginning, and then write slowly, and don't pull it too fast or use too much force, otherwise this kind of character will easily collapse. Controversy is not the biggest problem. A character that is unimpressive and unmemorable is the biggest problem. Of course, except for obvious highlights, the same is true for other heroines. I will continue to read it, I quite like it.

Has the author considered re-opening a new book? The setting and plot of this book are complete. . . It's better to open a new book and start over.

Come on, author, it's beautiful. ! Don't give up

I think it's pretty good. Why don't you just keep writing and write what you want to write.

What's going on with the update? Why is it so unstable?

I feel that the plot is generally okay, and the interactions with several female protagonists also made me twist. However, I feel that the author has reached a dead end in deleting new chapters due to some minor issues in the previous chapters of the book, and the results are not very good. I really recommend cutting it off and restarting it as soon as possible.

The plot is messed up 😥, has it been rewritten?

I can't even read those books that I ordered. A little depressed and a lot of poison.

This is a little less, and the plot is a little less. It is recommended to cut it off as soon as possible and restart it.

Have you opened a new book? It's been so hard waiting.