I Asked You to Tell Stories, Not Your Criminal Experiences

There is a very toxic plot in the early stage. Let me describe it. If you can accept it, just watch it. If you can't stand it, you can run away in advance and save yourself from scolding the author. The male protagonist's live broadcast has achieved some results (thousands of fans + a wave of big gifts). An anchor company came and wanted to trick him into signing a contract. It offered a "high-paying contract" of 100,000 yuan for five years. The male protagonist saw through the scam and blocked him immediately. The manager of this anchor company thought, "Although I am a liar, you are not giving me face if you block me directly. I want to hire a group of trolls to blackmail you." So he toss the trolls to falsely accuse the male protagonist. The police happened to come online to send a banner and clarify the male protagonist, so the trolls were defeated. When the manager saw the police helping to clarify and the navy being discovered, the manager was not afraid at all. He hid behind the scenes and sneered, "We have a long way to go." I don't know what other poison is behind it. This "the manager of the anchor company is a liar and was blacklisted, so he felt that his face was damaged and the trolls spread rumors, but after being refuted by the police, he was not afraid at all and prepared to continue to work in Japan" is really vulgar to the point of being outrageous, so he ran away from me.

Juvenile? Start a live broadcast? Talk about experience? Grave robbing? Are you kidding? The protagonist is a boy? So, with so many experiences and skills, did the protagonist develop them in his previous lives? Do you think it's unreasonable too? That's right, the audience also thinks it's unreasonable, and the officials also think it's unreasonable. Xiaozhi, a trainer with twenty years of adventure experience, is really from the new town? When you write a novel, it's not like you're starting a drama. You only rely on words to describe it, and you don't follow logic? You don't have the extraordinary ability to protect yourself. Why do you set this up? Are you sure you don't want to change the text?

Another AI writer who was arrested by the police at the beginning and then helped solve the case

It's a pig's trotter again. Everything happens wherever you go. Broom star

Let's not talk about leading a team after watching a live broadcast. If I was caught by mistake, I still haven't compensated.

Discredit the police🙂

And I've seen this feeling a lot of templates, it's weird

It's getting more and more nonsense, more and more false, and more and more poisonous Especially when mahjong starts, the author has probably never played mahjong seriously, let alone the mahjong competition. After the level reaches a certain level, no matter how high the level is, there are no special circumstances. It is still unclear whether a half banker can show up. According to the author's writing, even a high-ranking player would find it difficult to accept losing a game.

You have to leave something when you pass by

Observing his tricks and playing tricks, it seems like an old friend has come. There is a routine writer who often writes live broadcasts, right? Which books were blocked or were they stopped on their own?

It is recommended that the author buy a better AI assistant to help improve his writing style. What is Chapter 16 about? Ancient times?

The subject matter is good, just watch the inverted fighting at the front, but not the plot of Qianju. The fake plot has not been written yet. The writing is obvious and inconsistent.

At the construction site, you just have to throw away your brains. Which construction site manager would be so brainless?

It's pretty good to watch, but the creation and conversion of emotions is very blunt. 1. In terms of emotional transformation, there is a lack of foreshadowing. The protagonist's emotional expression always comes as he says, which is very abrupt and seems out of place 2. In terms of emotional creation, the use of force is too strong. The author always seems to want to anger the protagonist. The way of irritation + the operation of excessive force , after the combination, it is like other characters have lost their wits and will kill the protagonist for a trivial matter After the above two points are combined, readers will find that there are always things going on around the protagonist, and there are always people who want to mess with him for no reason. The protagonist's emotions are also capricious. When you look at the short stories one by one, it is okay, but when combined, it will feel inconsistent.

Copying things mechanically, all kinds of suture monsters, garbage

The opening layout is very big and very good. I don't know why when I wrote Qianju, I stuck the layout on gambling, and the content was repeated and similar. I could have written other Qianju after I finished writing Qianju. I don't know what the author thought and went to participate in some competition. It was superfluous.

The live broadcast in the early stage was interesting, the tomb robbing was okay, and the con man was okay, but later on he directly joined the army? Then it's better to watch the King of Soldiers, bad reviews, let it go

Good looking 😍 Come on, author! !

So far it seems pretty good, the sentences are basically smooth and the plot is okay, so plant the grass first.

I was speechless in the first chapter. When I started talking about ghost blowing out the lantern novel, I didn't miss every word. What's wrong? Did you memorize the ghost blowing lantern before traveling through time?

What a waste of money, a waste of my investment. I won't say anything even if I click Finish.

As an old man, I can't understand these novels nowadays. Many people in society now make a lot of money through live streaming. So now there are novels that rely on live streaming. I can understand this. What I can't understand is that some people have supernatural powers. With golden fingers. I also rely on live broadcasts. If he could cash it out, I would understand. However, there are some novels where the protagonist does not make any money even though he does live broadcasting, but he actually does not want to do live broadcasting. Can do very well offline. Why are you still licking this live broadcast every day?

The story has no main line at all It is said to be a live broadcast After it is put on the shelves, it has nothing to do with the live broadcast The studio article that deceives subscriptions