Beginning My Cultivation as a Mountain Dweller
从山民开始修仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 602k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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246Chapters
2.9kRecommendations
13.5kFans
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I Became an Immortal Standing in the Mountains
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The male protagonist is six years old, which is quite accurate, but the problem is that it's too accurate, you know? The writing style always makes the protagonist feel too childish. The problem is that I'm judging the protagonist by an adult's standards, so it's very confusing. Is this supposed to be a web novel for children? Is it trying to rival Harry Potter?
Change the name; it just doesn't have any appeal. "The Little Rascal's Journey to Immortality"?
Herbal jelly, maintain your quality and you'll be guaranteed to order it every time it's listed!
The beginning was a bit slow, but after reading six or seven chapters, it was really good. The author put their heart into writing the story. There's no pretentious or face-slapping plot; it's just pure hard work! The fight scenes were also hilarious, giving me the feeling of watching a Stephen Chow movie. There are very few books like this on Qidian anymore. Keep it up, I believe in you!
This book is a bit dry. The beginning is quite good, but around chapter 13, starting with the encounter with the wasps, the plot becomes too drawn out and rambling, which makes me lose interest in continuing. The writing style itself isn't the problem, but I won't comment further on what happens after that.
The beginning was quite interesting, but the later parts became... It doesn't feel like writing a novel; it's more like drawing a comic. It describes a scene and then adds a couple of lines about the characters' inner thoughts. Do inner thoughts really need so much description?
The introduction is very naive.
Author, are you writing a fairy tale? It's for children.
This book is the most enjoyable cultivation novel I've read in the last six months.
It's great, I like it.
Although the main character is only six years old, the author has carefully told the stories and characters well, and they are not one-dimensional characters. I like that.
The cultivation only begins after more than thirty chapters. This is too slow in order to slow down the pace. Although you write in detail, isn't this just padding?
It actually feels pretty good; there's hope if I keep writing. Life's tough, keep going!