Beginning My Cultivation as a Mountain Dweller

The male protagonist is six years old. The writing is very consistent, but the problem is that it is too consistent. Do you understand? The writing always feels like the protagonist is too childish. The problem is that I see the protagonist from an adult's perspective, so I'm very confused. Are you planning to write an online novel for children? Planning to take on Harry?

Change your name, it's too unattractive. "Little Po Boy Cultivating Immortality"?

It's a bit confusing at the beginning, but after reading six or seven chapters, it's really good. The author writes the story carefully. There is no pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot, just hard work! The fighting descriptions are also very funny, giving me the feeling of watching a Stephen Chow movie. There are very few books like this from Qidian. Come on, keep an eye on you!

The beginning of this book is very good. It starts from the encounter with the wasp around Chapter 13. The plot is too procrastinating and wordy. I have no desire to read it here. There is nothing wrong with the writing. I won't continue to read it. I won't talk nonsense.

The front part is quite interesting, but the further back the more interesting it becomes. . . It's not like writing a novel, it's like drawing a comic. To describe a scene, you only need to say a few sentences about psychological activities. Do you need so much description of psychological activities?

Author, are you writing a fairy tale? For children,

This book is the most satisfying novel about immortality that I have read in the past six months.

Although the protagonist is only six years old, the author carefully tells each story character in it, and it is not a one-sided character. I like it.

I only started to try to practice after more than thirty chapters. In order to keep the pace, this is too slow. Although you wrote it carefully, isn't it just watering down?

It actually feels pretty good, and there should actually be hope if I continue to write it down. Life is not easy, come on!