Love Is so Difficult to Understand

A few points to mention. First of all, the first person is really rare. The advantage is that it has a sense of substitution, but it is difficult to write a sense of substitution. Secondly, the beginning of your story is really boring. There are all lovers around, and then a school girl has an inexplicable crush on the male protagonist, and then the dialogue is very white. Looking at the title of your book, I thought it was about the male protagonist exploring youthful love. In fact, there is no actual content in the first few chapters. I just remembered that one of the male protagonist's gay friends has a classmate and keeps showing off his affection. What do you want to write? I hope the author will work harder, think clearly about what he wants to write, and then express it through the plot. I won't have to watch it for a long time without remembering anything at all.