Tokyo: I Can Summon the Nine-Tailed Fox Task Force

Feeling a little uncomfortable. I don't know if anyone is like me. First, the book is called Summoning the Nine-Tailed Fox. But so far, I haven't even seen a team in the foundation's worldview. Secondly, there are too few special agent scenes and it feels boring. Third, robbing banks should not be done by the Foundation. If it doesn't work, you can set up a rebel organization based on the Foundation's worldview. But when Ying first appeared, there was no explanation and no one asked. I feel like I can still use some help

The protagonist is afraid of chicken feathers. Author, when you wrote this, the expansion of combat power was unavoidable. I have always thought that it is better to expand the worldview than to suppress combat power What are you writing? Foundation system Are you worried that the protagonist's combat power will be too high even if there are contained objects? If that doesn't work, you can just compile it according to the containment file. The enemy of the protagonist has never been the gangster Karami and the colonial government, but the organizations and big countries that have mastered the power of the contained objects. Don't be so stingy and play house with the gangsters all day long. The protagonist has too many scenes. This kind of perspective is destined to be on the action team members, the cadres who do tasks to earn points, and the enemies of Dihua. It is really useless to waste a lot of scenes on the protagonist. It is better to rely on the O5 Council to describe the protagonist, which can not only increase the mystery but also increase the character. There is also the protagonist's sister and the Wudong maid, may I ask what are their functions? Pretentious? Who are you pretending to show? Pretend to show it to readers? These two people have no characteristics in the first place, but they are forced to play roles. Don't write a plot where you discover the girl's talent in the end, and then successfully join the protagonist group to start a harem in a reasonable way. Instead of writing this, it is better to build a base and maintain a standing action team to study the contained objects.

Summoning gangsters and killer militiamen has an upper limit of 999, and the upper limit of special forces is 99. The lower the limit, the lower the limit. You are bragging about this and told me that you want to secretly rule the world. The Foundation for the Protection of All Humanity has 50,000 US troops stationed in Japan, and nearly 30,000 US troops stationed in South Korea. The maximum summoning limit of the protagonist system does not exceed 5,000 people. This thing is barely A strong thief can organize a base in Japan and act as an East Asian terrorist organization. The protagonist also has to pay the summoner's salary and daily expenses for equipment maintenance. However, this guy has no continuous way to make money and can only rely on robbing banks to make money. If you want to see the Earth Foundation, you can run away. If you want to see terrorists looting Japan and South Korea, you can wait and see.

Can you write about Black Watch in Prototype II? The Black Watch of Prototype 2 is really cool, and it is good at restraining living zombies and biochemical monsters.

It's a good read. I'd like to give you a little suggestion. After the protagonist is cured of his illness, he can continue to pretend to be sick in a wheelchair and play the role of a sickly and beautiful young man to mislead the enemy. Who would have thought that the boss behind the scenes would be a patient with ALS?

This type of novel itself tends to be a group drama, but the group characters in this book are a group of toys that cannot be retracted and retracted at any time. It is quite poisonous in itself, and it is even more poisonous because of its habit of creating various incarnations.

It is indeed a new feeling. These chapters are written in order to give the protagonist a dreamland plug-in. They are watery, dry and boring. If this is published, I will delete it.

Can the author handle various details carefully? Various inconsistencies Various protagonists have flashes of inspiration. . . All kinds of logical confusion. . . Nice idea. . . The details are overwhelming. . .

The dream assessment in the new chapter is also very crude and brainless. After screening out a few survivors in the dream battle royale, they immediately revealed the core secrets. There was not even a political review. None of the Caotai team was like this.

Why don't you start a war with millions of troops?

Directly unify the world and collect extraordinary objects faster

Your update speed is simply pushing readers away.

You might as well write about your daily life. Then the group portrait. Why has no one discovered the Foundation and Chaofan before? Because there are too many cameras. The situation is too serious and I can't hold it anymore. (I made it up myself) Then I simply had limited contact with the government. Share something (make up your own myths or other deceptions about supernatural things in the past) and they will believe it if it happens now. Then the main line is the meaning of your own time travel. Don't be like Xiao Qitian. In the past, there were no sudden disasters. Aren't you called the Final Council? You initially thought it was random (the system named it directly) but later you discovered that neither your ability to time travel nor this ability was given randomly. (That disaster happened in this world. You didn't let it happen). You are the savior and you just fill in the rest of the content. You don't need to think about whether your fighting strength will be broken. Upgrade when you use it. The rhythm is well controlled. This book has a million words. You can get by even if you want to love the content of your writing. This story is finally explained! Take a look at what you wrote... This is a common problem with online articles. You don't even have an outline. Just out of my mind. It's impossible for you to read this book without losing your fighting power... What's the outline? I said this is what it is! See for yourself!

Houmi, I am terminally ill. This setting is too uncomfortable. Let's write a cool article and make it more fun. Don't arrange this setting just to promote the plot. It's disgusting.

In Schrödinger's world, a setting suddenly appears on the earth, and if it is not seen, it will not be observed. When I see it, I collapse into the reality of history

Author, it's okay not to stress the combat power, but the trend at the beginning is that the civilians are the first to come into contact with the containment objects, and most of the higher-ups don't understand it. Don't suddenly change the outline to say that the government already has a mature and long-standing anomaly management organization.

Don't talk about suppressing combat power. Look at Superman and Saiyan. There are many who can rule the world. But if Sun Wukong really went to rule the world, the plot would be that he would hold meetings and approve memorials every day, and then turn over his cards at night. If you say you go out to fight, that would be treason. Many people have long argued that the goal of world domination itself is nonsense and meaningless. After the world is yours, you can't mess around anymore. If you don't want to eat beef, you are a foolish king. Then what kind of rule do you want? You can just be invincible and add chaos.

This Leviathan is a bit unbearable. Wouldn't it be better to do something like 084 or 096? This multi-million-ton Leviathan is a little weird. You might as well be the ancient god descending...

Don't press it. It's hard to find a book that can be read, so let's press on the combat effectiveness. If you think there are too many soldiers and you're afraid it won't be written or it will crash, let me give you some advice. Can it work? The protagonist can have a group like the forced colonization of armored Kronos. The shadow government is all behind the scenes. It doesn't necessarily have to dominate the world, but every country, every city, and every department has its own people. Like Kennos, no matter what he does, he can cover it up. Killing the police can be covered up like a car. Misfortune, a missile bombing a school can be concealed as a gas leak. Even the President of the United States did not know that there is such an organization in the world until the second before launching a full-scale war. It is not impressive at first glance; even the novel you mentioned yourself, in which the main character protects the boss, can deploy armed forces globally, use artificial intelligence to mobilize the US military to coordinate, and can quickly initiate emergency measures within 2 hours of the appearance of a contained object. Is it no better than your restriction of recruiting cannon fodder? I would like to give some advice to newbies. Don't think about completing the follow-up book. Just let yourself go and use your imagination. If you haven't even put it on the shelves yet, you might end up being an eunuch. It's better to practice with this book first, just in case you encounter the fantasy world. Like time travel, the more you write about it, the more popular it becomes. In this way, even if you fail to control this book, you can continue to write a similar book with this theme. It is not a matter of course that the popularity of this book will be successful. Even if you keep writing on this theme, you may be able to write it for four or five years. (Don't think about it for a lifetime, sometimes you just think too much) Contained objects are better to say, what are coming out now are some low-end contained objects, the really powerful contained objects are in another universe, that universe is the universe after the Foundation has lost control and collapsed, but there is a universe blockade. They can't all come over, but they will eventually come over. Now the ones on the earth are a little weaker, so you can download dungeons and collect them one by one. Haven't you been able to write many wonderful stories about contained objects since you were a child? The book can be completed with a final decisive battle to resolve the big boss that caused the foundation to lose control.

The problem now is that it's hard to read. It feels like the author's writing power can't hold up the settings, and then the settings are hard to read because of numerical problems. The author can actually weaken the numerical description and write each task as a unit drama. It focuses on the personnel preparation and investigation before the completion of each mission; the interactions, psychological descriptions, behaviors, etc. Of each character during the mission; the reactions of all parties after the mission is completed and the final summary. It is best to set up a clear main line, similar to the various commissioners fighting abnormal projects in the Foundation archives, and then intersperse the protagonist's layout, so that it will be much more comfortable to read.

The recent update has changed to the dragon clan. There is no desire to pursue it at all. It has deviated from the core of the book and has become an active invasion of the heavens. It is no longer a guardian.

After reading Chapter 160, I really can't stand the rest of it. What's the plot behind it? You can guess it, he must be pretending to be cool everywhere, and he's pretending to be awkward.

What have you been writing about in the last few chapters?