Dragon Slaying Begins With Immortality

The writing is okay, but the plot is too average. What the "Jin Yiwei" saw from the perspective was not a hero, but an "untouchable" who killed the "Jin Yiwei". The protagonist actually wanted a reward and directly believed the person he killed. All clever. And it was such a coincidence that despite all the misunderstandings, an uncle was enough, and everything came to pass. The white dragon happened to appear, and when she entered the forest and found danger, she still had to go forward. It happened that she was about to transform into a dragon but had not yet transformed into a dragon. It happened that the protagonist killed her, and she happened to be a high-ranking man. It happened that she did not become a tombstone but a "fruit". Everyone is a fool except the protagonist.

Maybe new people will come to see it after it is recommended on the Internet, and they are curious about which extraterritorial devil this is Lai Lai is from Mao Station. He used to write Jojo Infinite Flow Fans The main works are "Infinite Creed", "Infinite Gospel", etc. Just search "Levatin"

Laolai, promise me you will survive this time

How to put it this way, when I saw the title and introduction, I thought it was a road movie story like Prince's Revenge, that kind of fantasy world where everyone lives on an empty island, and then the protagonist travels to the past with nothing, and is received and settled by the warm and kind people there. Then after a while, the Dragon Whisperer degenerates and transforms into a dragon to destroy the world where the protagonist is. After the disaster, he unexpectedly awakens the ability to grow into immortality and harvest other people's souls. While traveling and fighting monsters to upgrade, he collects intelligence to prepare for revenge, and during the journey, he gradually reveals the truth about the world view and the power of the Dragon Whisperer. This book was amazing at the beginning, but then it became strange when I met the supporting character who was about to transform into a dragon. The tone of the story turned to plotting and plotting. I originally thought it was an adventure story, but it turned out to be a story about a hero plotting his power. As it was written, I felt that there was no sense of immersion. The motive of killing the dragon was insufficient, not interesting, and there was no novelty in the fantasy world. It was a pity that it was tasteless in reading.

The previous book Eighty Days (called Substitute Creed on Mao. Com) was so good that I won't write about it anymore because I think it's inspiring. The author said he was "simply unconvinced" and "he felt he could write better" before he wrote sixty chapters and told me that his grades were not good. What grade do you want for chapter sixty? He told me that he had used the style before, but he couldn't accept it. After reading it for the second time, he found that it was taken off the shelf, and he started a new book. It took a new track that he had never tried before. At first glance, it was all psychological activities. After looking at the previous revisions, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I thought I'd give it a try and wait for the author to adjust it, and when I came back, I saw that it was already a eunuch. I was very speechless, very speechless, very speechless. If you are perfectionist, you cannot finish writing a book first. After finishing it, slowly put it on the shelf, and make minor corrections if there are any problems. I prefer not. You said I didn't listen, I thought I wrote it perfectly, but then I cut it again.

Instead of writing novels, why not find a class? There are so many eunuchs here.

I did a little research and found that Qidian seems to have a term called "work interaction value". You can just check in every now and then when you think of it, and just send a reply. You don't need to swipe every day or swipe continuously. Just let it happen. Thank you all.

The evaluation is that it is better to work part-time. I want to make money by writing novels but I can't finish the novel. How can I accumulate fans and writing skills? It depends on your starting point. These two books have been written for a while and then stopped.

Give him the framework of the original work. He can play very well within this framework and write wonderfully. But let him play freely, and he will be at a loss and constrained. Why do you think this is?

It's a simple truth, the more you cut, the harder it is to get started. Will the plot overhaul have too much impact? So why not think about it when drafting the outline. Two things are most taboo when writing online articles: 1. Being too bookish. I don't understand that online articles are essentially consumer goods. 2 is a lot of unfinished work. The outline was rough and I didn't think about it carefully. I wrote the article with enthusiasm, and ended up with frequent appendixes due to various reasons. Good things are not famous, and bad things are spread thousands of miles is the most appropriate label for the Internet. Hopefully you learn from your failures instead of taking a short break to prepare for the next failure.