Liu Xie: Let Me See What Happens to You!

Recommendations of Kodak Duck, come and take a look

It's really okay, but the food and grass are still young. By the way, since Liu Xie is the protagonist, the author should write more about Liu Xie. If there are two updates a day, you need to let Liu Xie appear at least once. Personally, I always jump to watch the battle between Cao and Sun. In general, it's food and grass, come on.

If you change the account and click on it, it will cost you hundreds of thousands to finish the book. At first glance, you will feel like the author who failed to finish and ran away. It will give a very bad impression to people who occasionally see this book and take a look. Many people will not even click in to read it.

It's okay to continue writing the previous book. As long as it doesn't end all the time, the traffic will definitely accumulate over time (and don't change your vest all the time. Sometimes it's really hard to find. If you change it, you will lose readers...)

I feel that the author's writing style and skills are very good, but I feel that the presentation is too scattered and lacks focus. Maybe only 3-40 of the plot revolves around the protagonist. Since it is a historical time-travel novel, I feel that it will be more immersive to focus on the protagonist.

Come on, author, the writing is very good, the writing is delicate, the plot is reasonable, and the supporting characters are not brainless. Why are there so few readers? Maybe the early descriptions are too scattered.

Is this the end? When is the next book?

Come on, author, it's really good to watch 👍 But now I feel like Liu He is the protagonist...

It's well written, but the early descriptions are a bit scattered.

It can be seen that the author has profound knowledge and has a writing style from ancient times. Although it is not a sleepless night, it can be said to be unsatisfactory.

Recommended by Grenades Afraid of Water, the writing is really good, waiting for more...

The only chance is to take charge of the troops at Huangpu

I had nothing to do on May Day, so I took a quick look and saw your new book.

I've finished chasing it, and it's not bad. Except for the early part of the plot, which is a little too scattered, the rest is pretty good. Come on!