Smiling Proudly: Lin Zhennan Is a Worldly Person

The author has literary talent, but when it comes to female characters, the mother-in-law drags her feet.

In the original work, Lin Zhennan was unable to practice the swordsmanship to ward off evil spirits, so he relied on his humanity and sophistication to travel around the world and maintain the Fuwei Escort family business. However, when someone refused to give him face and wanted to kill his whole family, his humanity and sophistication were of no use.

Zuo Lengchan's ice energy was never revealed before he faced Ren Woxing in the third Shaolin battle. What you wrote is that everyone in the world knows it. So how did Zuo Lengchan use his ice energy to overshadow Ren Woxing in the third Shaolin battle? Ren Woxing was not stupid, and he returned to Shaolin to save his daughter. How could he not ask about the details of Zuo Lengchan, a master of the righteous path?

It's so disgustingly written, it's so oily. If you don't just destroy the Ma family and take over it, it's written as if it's going to be edgy. Everyone knows there won't be edgy content here

Ma Yujiao is a little disgusted. You either don't kill or you kill decisively. You have already promised to subdue others. If you don't do it, you are a weak and defenseless woman. You just find these excuses. When there are others, you don't think about these things. You go up and kill them. The men who kill the women are left behind, right? Why should I leave something so disgusting?

The writing is okay, the plot is smooth, and there are no bad points so far. But... This is a martial arts system text. 😂 The above is an objective evaluation, please refer to it individually.

This woman from the Ma family can dissuade half of the readers.

As far as I'm concerned, what is human sophistication? It is a means used to maintain relationships when personal strength is insufficient. When you have enough strength, it is not very useful. As long as you don't be arrogant and don't be arrogant, being a normal person is already the ceiling of emotional intelligence in the eyes of others.

Which master's vest is really well written, the writing is crisp and the plot is good, keep up the good work.

Lin Zhennan is a direct descendant of Shaolin. It would be a pity not to hug that thigh.

Gone, gone, Ma Yujiao died too cheaply and too honorably. The three to four hundred people she instigated to attack the Fuwei Escort Agency were all Zhongliang, and they didn't have to die. Lingchi is the ending she deserves

Lin Chaoying wanted to create a new method in internal skills to surpass Quanzhen Sect's internal skills, so Jade Girl Heart Sutra found a different way and used other methods to gain the upper hand. However, when practicing the exercises, the heat will evaporate all over the body. It is necessary to practice in an empty and uninhabited place, with the whole body's clothes open and open, so that the heat will dissipate immediately without any blockage. Otherwise, it will become stagnated in the body, which can cause serious illness in small cases or death in large cases. After practicing, two people need to use their internal strength to guide and protect themselves. Only by combining their strength can they overcome the danger together. The Jade Girl Heart Sutra is divided into nine sections. The odd-numbered exercises are "yin advance" and the even-numbered exercises are "yang retreat." You can stop at will when practicing yang retreat, but when practicing yin advance, you must complete it in one go, and there should be no slight setbacks in the middle. After successfully practicing the Jade Girl Heart Sutra, the internal strength of the Ancient Tomb Sect has gradually improved. The scholar is light and strong, and his attacks are quick. He can fire three or four consecutive moves in the time it takes an ordinary person to make one move, but his attack power does not increase accordingly. Because Lin Chaoying only wanted to defeat Wang Chongyang rather than kill him, the Heart Sutra martial arts only focused on quick movements and incredible moves. So is it possible that the Sunflower Book is actually a fragment of the Jade Girl's Heart Sutra. Later generations couldn't practice it the right way, so they added that if you want to practice this skill, you must first use the eight characters from the palace to practice. In addition, the needle-throwing technique of Sunflower Book is also a characteristic of Tomb Sect martial arts.

After reading so many chapters, I feel that the author has not read the original work written by Jin Yong, but has probably only watched a few TV series or movies adapted from it. The author's knowledge and understanding of the book Swordsman is somewhat specious.

Alas, the writing style is okay, but it is indeed the kind of Lin Zhennan who walks in the world of people and behaves in a face-to-face manner. It is uncomfortable to watch.

Dear author, can you please do two less rounds of shooting a day and update one more chapter? ? ?

This plot becomes more and more boring the more I write it, I don't even want to watch it anymore

Writing a time-travel novel is also extremely frustrating. The more I read it, the worse it gets. Just pass it.

Single or multiple? If yes, who is the heroine? If you don't reply, there will be pitfalls by default.

I was going to search for some old books, but the result was eunuch 😰