I Only Wanted to Retire, but Became a General of the Empire

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The alarm bell is ringing! Don't promise what you can't deliver!

Will the protagonist change if he has always been like this? Will there be back-and-forth about rebellion and surrender? I feel tired after reading Chapter 20 and Chapter 30. Is there Shennong?

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Mere imagination and luck cannot sustain a book. The protagonist must grow. For example, didn't he see the pain of the people at the bottom from the game? The prosperity of the people will be miserable, and the destruction of the people will be miserable. From a submissive time-traveler, he became a qualified person in power through personal experience, a person in power who can empathize with the people at the bottom. The focus of the story will also gradually change from "I want to surrender and retire" to "I can't vote anymore, so I can only help the empire" and then I will become a tall man. What? Am I a tall person? The process can still be blessed by luck. Occasionally, some practical skills can be interspersed, for example, the protagonist can indeed operate the economy, and for example, he has summed up experience - as long as you do your own thing well, the enemy insects will cause problems on their own (the people who surround me are the Allies!) In addition, this dream is also an opportunity to attract the protagonist's group or cause the transformation of the supporting characters. At this time, the reason for success can change from the so-called luck to the contradiction between the excellence of one's subordinates and the enemy's own intensification. We are strong and the enemy is weak.

There are no major problems with this book. The author's writing skills are good and you can read it with confidence. The first part of this article is different, and there may be changes later. In short, I really like reading this book I hope the male protagonist can be more dedicated.

No, bro, haven't you finished writing this round? Are you still going back and forth? Not to mention whether they are tired from fighting or not, I think everyone is tired from watching it 😅 I have been saving up for half a month to finish reading this plot in one sitting, not to mention one day at a time. I originally said that I would finish writing this war by the end of July. It is almost the end of August, haven't you finished it yet? And when I saw your title, I didn't even have the desire to click on it. To be honest 😅 When I saw Checkmate, I thought it would end soon. But then, why did the latest chapter include three more baits? How long will it take for this copy to be completed? 😥 In fact, the most important thing is that the update is not good enough. It is like squeezing out toothpaste. It keeps squeezing out. It is difficult to have the patience to keep grinding it out. 😅 It was originally a very good book, but it has become an old lady's foot wrap. 💀 It's like a piece of chicken ribs.

This book is good in every aspect, but the author really likes to write his long and difficult sentences, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read 😅

It takes several months to write a battle, and the image of the supporting characters has not been developed. It is all an assembly-line battlefield brainstorming. There is not much information about the social background, class conflicts, character interactions, etc., And it feels like the writing is not prioritized.

It made me feel uncomfortable, not because of the plot, but why does the author like so many long and difficult sentences with attributive attributes? It's extremely uncomfortable to read. I couldn't find the subject for a long time, and I didn't know who it was talking about. It was so uncomfortable. For example, here (even this is not the most common one), there are a lot of attributives in front of it. Can't the subject be given directly at the beginning? Or does the author think this sentence structure is very advanced? ? 🤔🤔🤔