Trench Guns and Magic

After watching 130, although the previous settings and plot are a bit immature, they are still watchable. After returning to China, the plot plummeted to the level of a junior high school student, especially the setting and treatment of women, as well as the plot of entrepreneurship. It was written like a pig's foot like Long Aotian. It was not much different from the plot of a short play. It was so bad that I didn't even want to comment in detail. All in all, let's spend some time in the afternoon before seeing it on the shelves.

It's been really hard after reading for so many days. The problems and deficiencies that everyone pointed out are all addressed in the comment area. I'm not thinking that if you take the time to write a supplementary chapter with easter eggs, wouldn't it be more useful than leaving posts everywhere in the comment area? You said that the Sentinel of France appeared later and you didn't write about it. Besides airships and big killers, Dezi didn't write about anything. He wrote about everything in the comment area. Walt came to see you write a novel, not to see your comment area. I want to know the specific situation. I have to scroll through your comments for a long time to find out. Why can't you write an Easter egg chapter when you have time to put out fires in the comment area? Is it so difficult?

Taking World War I as the world background, it combines modern military technology with magical technology, such as internal combustion engine armored knights, military mages, airships, etc., To form a unique power system. The setting is very novel and interesting. The author's description of the details of the war is quite accurate, and the sense of substitution is strong. For readers who like fantasy and military, this book is not to be missed.

After listening to more than 30 chapters, the plot and logic are a bit disconnected. Since the protagonist has traveled to the past and has not yet had a sense of immersion, it is more reasonable to realize that he should cherish his life. However, in terms of plot content, the protagonist develops into a heroic commander, and the logic is relatively broken.

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There's not much to say about other plots, they're pretty good, but as long as the plots involving the male protagonist and the magician are particularly difficult, readers are advised to skip these plots directly.

The same is true of being reborn in the front line of the battlefield, leading the team with excellent command in times of crisis and surviving, and the concept of the International Column is the same. The world view seems to be okay now (the heavy armored knights of the Middle Ages and the traditional mages should be), and the plot development path is similar to the <Artillery Arc>. It is also a well-educated playboy who has turned around. I am currently looking forward to the development of the plot and hope the author will write it well.

Suddenly I felt that the protagonist's golden finger should be initially restricted. Basic functions such as spell training, RTS vision, and intelligence acquisition can only be activated on the front line. It can be recharged when entering battle. After completing the battle, you will receive rewards such as the energy storage limit and activation of other functional modules based on the battle results. You must consume energy storage in the rear to enjoy basic functions and use scientific research assistance and other modules. The current golden finger can actually develop stably in the back, but due to the subject matter, it focuses on the front line, so it has to be written about, and it takes up a lot of space. This results in the golden finger's function not being fully developed and used. The golden finger, which can shine in the rear and influence the overall situation, can only grind meat on local battlefields on the front, which is too wasteful and inefficient in achieving the goal of ending the war. If there are restrictions on battlefield triggering and charging, the protagonist can want to fish in the rear and develop steadily. However, with the development of the intelligence system, the protagonist finds that if he loses, it will be over. So he has to find ways to stay on the front line to recharge the golden finger, improve himself and reverse the situation of the battle, and also actively improve himself to participate in the battle to unlock the module, and then Later, an additional huge crisis was gradually discovered through the intelligence system, but the power that could be mobilized was a drop in the bucket, and it was impossible to explain to others and convince them. They had to find ways to do things in other places during the short peace to maintain the activation of Gold Finger, maintain development and expansion, and finally solve the crisis. At the same time, the world entered a longer period of overall peace.

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1. Refer to the narrative style of some group portraits like "Band of Brothers", which may be very good. 2. If Goldfinger is only for intelligence collection and auxiliary analysis, I think this can better reflect the protagonist's military qualities and avoid situations like Superman killing everyone.

You can post a large picture in the comment area, so I will post it here~ This is actually when the author played "Victoria 3" and the tightrope 'Pax Royale' MOD, he played two extremely abstract situations and then stitched them together... In order to make Dade and Spain border, the author directly used his 'divine power' to squeeze a piece of land from the Mediterranean Sea. As for the places that cannot be seen outside the map, more than 90% of the territory of North America, Central Africa, and South Africa are colonies of the British in other worlds. This is also the confidence of the British to "single-handedly suppress" the European continent. As for this Saxony, just say that God is not holy, emperor is not empire, and Rome is not Roman~

Can you please turn off the anti-theft switch? Just let me watch it, I will definitely spend money next time

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Let's briefly sort out the timeline On August 7th, the Morin Division set out in the afternoon Arrived outside the city at 9 a. M. On August 8th and exchanged fire On the evening of August 8th, the French Fifth Episode Headquarters learned the news In the morning of August 9th, the French 3rd Cavalry Division arrived outside the city and learned that there was only the 1st Guards Cavalry. Division reinforcements The French 9th Infantry Division arrived on the morning of August 10. The Ludendorff Group exchanged fire with the infantry of the 5th French Infantry Division 10 kilometers outside the Namur Fortress Group The 1st Guards Cavalry Division arrived on the morning of August 11 The 11th French Infantry Division was expected to arrive on the afternoon of August 11 Da According to the author's settings, it is known that Charleroi to Liège is more than 90 kilometers and Ilsson to Charleroi is more than 50 kilometers (55) kilometers I used deepseek combined with the map to find that the driving distance from Liège to Charleroi is between 83 and 92 kilometers. There is basically no difference between miles (the straight-line distance given by DS is 55 kilometers, I am not sure if it is wrong); but the driving distance from Ilsson to Charleroi is 78 kilometers. Considering the difference between the World War I era and the level of modern infrastructure, the author's figure of more than 50 kilometers is quite different. But it is a novel after all, so the data given by the author still prevails. Then, because the author did not give the distances from the Namur Fortress Group to Charleroi and to Liège, I calculated based on the 30-37 kilometers and 59-62 kilometers given by ds. And the distance from Dinant to Charleroi is also calculated based on the 52.7-53 Kilometers given by DS. Let's start with the problems I feel. There were basically no problems from August 7th to August 8th. The only thing that puzzled me was that the response of the French Fifth Assembly Command was too fast, which was not in line with my understanding of France's protracted bureaucracy. On August 9th, the humorous plot came. Bülow asked more than 60,000 people of the Ludendorff Battle Group to defend the 35,000 people of the 5th Infantry Division😅. Charleroi, the fulcrum of the battle, should be defended by a battalion, right? Okay, I'll bear with it, this is the combat level of our outstanding soldiers from the Saxon Empire👍👍👍, 60,000 people defending 30,000 people is really mediocre. According to my opinion, at most half of Ludendorff's battle group is enough. If the attack fails even with a 1:1 headcount ratio, then I have to suspect that this is not Saxony but the Qing Dynasty. The most important thing Ludendorff Battle Group should do on August 9 is to expand the breakthrough point in Charleroi, arrive in Charleroi before France 5 has fully reacted, and turn Charleroi into a forward base. After that, whether it is to annihilate the vanguard of the French Third Army and continue to break through or to hold on, it is better than risking the loss of Charleroi and moving the entire battle group to Namur. On August 10th, there is nothing much to say about the main plot. But your Ludendorff battle group had a firefight in the morning, and the 2:1 headcount ratio wouldn't mean the fight wasn't over in the afternoon, right? It's a field battle, not a positional battle. And isn't it only 20-30 kilometers from 10 kilometers outside Namur to Charleroi? Calculated at 30 kilometers, if Battle Group Ludendorff really wanted to support, it would have arrived by the morning of the 11th at the latest. Furthermore, of the more than 5,000 trucks in the entire right-wing army group, you can always get 1,000 in the second episode, right? Can't the Ludendorff battle group form a temporary commando team? Britain has mages and knights, France has bulletproof cuirassiers, and apart from airships, can Saxony not be regarded as a leader in industry and mechanization? Now it seems that Saxony is really nothing special. On the morning of August 11, the First Guards Cavalry Division finally arrived. Compared with the speed of the French Third Cavalry Division, I can only say that the training is indeed insufficient. The distance between Dinan and Irsun to Shahroa is not much different . In any case, it is unjustifiable to delay the arrival of support on August 9th until the 11th, especially when compared with the French 3rd Cavalry Division. I really don't want to watch the next plot, so I'll wait until it's over. It's nothing more than the Guards Cavalry Division sending away the half-disabled French 5th Infantry Division, and then being defeated by the French 11th Infantry Division, and then Morin turned the tide or something else. No matter how the author conceives the subsequent plot, the French Third Army has already pressed forward. I think that being able to defend Shahroa under such circumstances is purely mechanical. In addition, in terms of politics, it is purely funny, using the training camp as a death squad, right? Chang Kaishen has never done anything to throw the teaching brigade into the ground. Even if the political significance is not mentioned, everyone within the Saxon army knows that this is to teach "assault battalions" and is the innovative seed of assault warfare, not to teach engineer battalions. Taking the training camp and throwing it into urban combat is really... The humor is over. I think everyone should know the meaning of "teaching camp". From a military perspective, the training camp should not be half-abandoned. From a political perspective, in an empire like Saxony, the training camp directly under the crown prince should not be treated like this. To sum up, if Molin has never slept with Biro's wife or daughter, then I can only think: 1. Saxony, as the continent's largest army power, has a lot of water, and its senior generals lack basic knowledge of battle laws. 2. The author used excessive force in highlighting the training camp, making the entire second episode look stupid 3. Bülow and Ludendorff were too greedy and had no basic political common sense

Are you humans and machines? You are all praising me, but no one is replying to me. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I have no idea what the protagonist wants to do, and I have been collecting information without explaining it clearly. Is it like this later?

After seeing the 8-level spell and the 10-minute invincible defensive spell in more than 300 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The previous writing was a bit boring, but I could barely read it, but these two episodes are direct: no need to play, magicians have been around since ancient times. Just based on this thing, I can't figure out how Germany and France can resist the British invasion. 100% Lose, it is said that Germany has recently risen to develop industry and magic, while Britain has relied on mages to rise for at least a hundred years. Before this, I never thought why Britain did not fight Germany and France. Instead of sending out a few mages, they won directly with an eight-level spell. The British magic army is much more than that of Germany and France combined. What do you think? Why is it unrealistic? Secondly, the protagonist is becoming more and more like Superman. We don't write about large-scale wars. We don't write about battles between soldiers. We don't write about how the enemy directs the attack. We don't write about how we counterattack. We only write about the protagonist who always carries a small number of soldiers with him to transform into Superman and charge. You seem to have some serious illness, and Britain has also become a fool. Assassinating the protagonist is not easy. The protagonist is protected by spells from head to toe. It is like a ray of light in the dark. It is very conspicuous. Just find a great magician and cast a spell in seconds, and it will be over. To retreat, use any door or dimensional door. Although there is a one-minute delay before it can be used, what kind of force field do we have that makes you invincible for 10 minutes? One minute is only one tenth of the chicken feather.

Updated from time to time, from "Illustrated Encyclopedia of World War I Uniforms, Logo, and Weapons"

In fact, one thing I really can't understand is that the male protagonist is a middle-aged man who has gone through military training. Why does he have to fight for them so hard in Germany 1? When I saw the street fighting led by the male protagonist, I didn't feel at all happy.

These days, it's not easy to find a normal novel. The recommendations were all bullshit, but I finally got to eat something good.

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The author's top priority now is to quickly wrap up this plot and then go back and work with the four female protagonists to save the book's reputation.

After reading chapter 130 for now, I feel that the protagonist is just a machine, a chosen one. He has 24 hours a day, and he can work and study for 20 hours. He has no feelings of his own and no selfish desires. He just works on the front line to save his life. But what do you think after returning to China? How awkward is it that a sister appears at the helm of a giant company, a device expert with both stature and intelligence appears who wants to open a military industry company, and there is a friend's sister who can provide technical support. All the arrangements are too deliberate, without any twists and turns, and it feels awkward if it goes too smoothly. My personal suggestion is to set a goal for the protagonist, work hard for this goal, and have such a motivation to fight. Think about it from the perspective of a modern person. You have only been in another world for a few days. In the early stage, you are fighting to save your life on the front line of the battlefield. But after you become developed and your personal strength is not invincible, will you still run to the front line and fight for your life? Basically not, but find every excuse to stay in the rear, accumulate food and slowly become king. In this era when war will obviously break out later, train your direct subordinates, unite with useful relationships, increase your strength infinitely, and create a giant interest group. Otherwise, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's arrangements for the sister at the helm of a giant company to pave the way for everything? Moreover, in this imaginary world, how can anyone always be someone's subordinate and take orders? Even if you are not an emperor on the surface, you still have to be an interest group boss who controls the country and controls the state machinery behind the scenes And look at which country's important figures will always be fighting on the front line. There is nothing you can do in the early stage, but I hope it will not be like this in the middle and late stages. Modern war does not focus on individual heroes. That's right, even if it's a low-demon world, it's not like a fantasy world where a person's great power is concentrated in one person. On the front line, he is directed by his superiors to hit him wherever he wants. He is used repeatedly like a robot because you are so easy to use. People will be destroyed for their own sake. I hope that the protagonist can be portrayed as more human, with his own desires, his own selfishness, his own greed, his own anger, his own cruelty, and his own unwillingness, instead of being shaped like a robot. Everything is for the emperor and everything for the country. He doesn't look like a time traveler, but becomes more and more like a native. The locals who have been brainwashed for decades do not require you to treat people from this world as NPCs, but you have only traveled through time for a few days, and the feelings are really not that deep. If you die, you will die. You see, the leaders of that country do not take their people too seriously. Now you are a captain and a time traveler. Here, you are pitiful and want to save the country and save the world. Who do you think you are? Finally, the most logical and humane thing is to develop in the rear area, slowly accumulate strength, find your own position in the turbulent era, control certain materials, rely on your own plug-ins, have your own say in military industry, military affairs, resources, public opinion, etc., Unite all forces that can be united, and combine into a group of interests. Regiment, get married and have children early, cultivate your own direct lineage, rely on plug-ins and foresight to become a politician and diplomat, seek the greatest benefits, and finally become a big BOSS behind the scenes. It may be much better to read than engaging in personal heroism on the front line, because there are too many novels about personal heroism, which makes the eyes tired. Of course, this is also more difficult to write. I hope the author can see it.

Most people have the combat power of ordinary people. An ordinary mage can directly have the combat power of the Nascent Soul, and there are still many mages. What's the point of all these? It made me sick to my stomach.

I suddenly felt a little uncomfortable while watching it. A war like World War I, where both sides lacked justice, seemed to have a lack of thinking about war. The protagonist seems to enjoy this kind of war and killing or the feeling of victory. On the other hand, the author's description of the French army resonated with my feelings about the French army defending their homeland and country. So I am curious about what position the author plans to put the protagonist in later. It is the emperor's sharp blade, but it doesn't matter where the blood comes from. Or is it something else... Currently, I don't like the protagonist a little bit. The protagonist is just killing people more efficiently, and the meaning of war is very difficult to answer...

As the title says, the recent plot can be compared like this: Lin used a dozen divisions to attack Jinzhou, 60,000 people to block the 30,000 Liao Yaoxiang Corps, and let the leader lead his 1,000-man reinforced battalion plus an artillery battalion to defend Tashan. I don't like this "300 Spartans"-like plot.

The positioning of the mage is confusing for a while. It just depends on the plot. The mage is as strong as the plot requires, right? Is the 203 cannon under your armored airship a water gun? Do you have to fly to the enemy's head and hit him? If it's not 10 kilometers away, can it be 5 kilometers away? Where did Germany get the confidence to fight Britain and France? The mechas are not as good as others, the magic is not as good as others, and the tactical understanding is also backward without the protagonist. How can you do it? Looking at the entire German-French battlefield, it feels like the protagonist and his battalion are like fucking Aryan supermen. Without him, Germany will just vote.

The concept of UAV originated in 1914 when Generals Caddell and Pichel of the United Kingdom developed a small aircraft controlled by radio that did not require human pilots to carry bombs and fly over the target for bombing. Because the pilots were busy fighting World War I, the United States was the first to develop it. In 1917, it was invented by Peter Hewitt and Elmer Sperry. The "Hewitt-Sperry Automated Aircraft" is based on the "Automatic Gyro Stabilizer" technology and modified from the "Curtis N-9 trainer aircraft" to achieve radio-controlled automatic flight. It is the world's earliest UAV with a range of 80 kilometers and a bomb load of 136 kilograms. It has not been put into actual combat and cannot return if it can go. The UAV that can truly go and return is the DH-82B Queen Bee produced by the British de Havilland Company in 1935 The first UAV with real combat significance, with a maximum flight altitude of 17,000 feet. With a top speed of 100 miles per hour, this drone was used by Dai Ying until the end of World War II. At the same time, Sande also built the Avenger 1 drone to fight against Dai Ying But this thing is a one-time use, the originator of modern cruise missiles.

When I read a book recently, I occasionally see comments that always say that they dislike the author and stop updating the book and then abandon the book. . . I thought there was no need to open a separate post to criticize the author. If you are not a full-time author, wouldn't it be normal for you to be delayed occasionally? And relatively speaking, it is a lot. Other books do not have so many words per day. Since reading this book, I have been more diligent in recharging my starting coins. If you don't abandon the book, it's normal to open a post and scold it. After all, I spent money. I want to have a better experience reading your book. But you have abandoned the book. Isn't it the biggest punishment for the author? Why are you still talking about spreading negative energy? It makes the author unhappy. Those of us who normally pursue books also feel disgusted. Sometimes I feel that you are right and the author should be scolded, but I don't abandon the book, which makes me feel bad when I watch you scold me. In addition, I think the naval battle is very good. The plot is adapted from a serious historical battle, and the confrontation in the era of giant ships and cannons allows you to feel the cruelty of history in a fantasy. Moreover, the background of this book is before and after World War I. The European pattern will lead to different battlefield changes due to changes in naval power. I feel good about describing this paragraph. I have been describing Lao Mo's side, but suddenly there is a change. In one sentence of the article, because the United Fleet defeated the Royal Navy, readers feel that the plot is reasonable? What's more, I feel that the fleet is too tooly. Finally, although I have never won a prize, this is indeed a rare monthly lottery where the author makes real money and everyone can enjoy it (proportionally speaking, there are quite a lot of things given away every month). As for why I am typing these words here. . . It's just that I really can't stand it. I'm also a creator. I was upset when I saw all the negative feedback when I went online one day. But I also know that most people who pursue books are actually the silent majority. I don't want the minority voices to represent the majority, so I want to give the author a positive feedback. That's all

There are many heroines, I just didn't search for the heroine information in advance... (Vomiting blood) Looking at the character card, I thought she was single.