The Little Melon-Eating Monk in Demi-Gods and Dragons

The second-generation young man wearing the skin of a dragonsays

Come on, Baby Gan!

Xuanci: Shaolin's thousand-year reputation has been ruined by your hands! Shi Yongxin: Each other...

Jiumozhi: Shaolin Temple? It turns out to be a place that hides spring beauty and filth!

Authors and readers Shennong, is this eating melon real? Is it just eating melon? Or eating melon while eating? Are you meddling in other people's business? In the end, it turned into eating one's own melon?

A bad guy dared to break into Shaolin, and how many people were injured in an open and honest manner? Can such a Shaolin become the leader of martial arts? Murong Bo and Xiao Yuanshan didn't dare to be so arrogant, otherwise they wouldn't be able to get out of Shaolin. Do they really think that the Xuan generation in Shaolin are vegetarians?

It's true that you say you're a fool, but you soon start to meddle in other people's business, and you're invincible at the beginning. Overall, it's a good write-up, you can read it.

I hate the idea of ​​tearing apart other people's CPs like this. I just take what I want. I watch the show and take care of so many things. I can't figure it out when I'm playing with Wang Yuyan.

I don't understand, why did you keep Murong Bo alive so many times without killing him? ! Can the author give an explanation? Learn how other people write fanfics! If you don't dare to kill him for fear of ruining the plot, then don't write about meeting him! It's really poisonous! There is no logic! Murong Bo is going to kill you, and you still know his identity. This is a fundamental contradiction that cannot be solved! ! ! The two of you cannot live together in this conflict! ! ! We also want to kill other people in Shaolin. Only those who can commit thieves in a thousand days will not be able to guard against thieves in a thousand days! It makes no sense, and one poisonous point ruins the entire book!

Second-rate protagonist. Hungry Ghost in Sex

The author has brought in so many personal items that I can't even count them.

Fairy Sister

Talking about living well, talking about leisure, eating melons, being carefree, and showing off, in the end they all focus on a model worker. He is causing trouble everywhere, or things are messing with him, just like Conan, people are dying around him every day, and he is waiting for him to solve the case every day. You taste it, you taste it carefully.

Can a storm evil person use the Shenhezhi?

What kind of imagination can you write at the beginning of the story about Feng Bo going to Shaolin Temple to provoke him?

Anyway, it's already an invincible start. You can eat whatever you want, as long as it's not boring or ridiculous. I'll read it first and wait for me to taste it. 1. Just like the introduction, the conversation, behavior, and psychological description are like those of a gangster (not vulgar), and there are also some vernacular environments and dialogue forms that are a bit hard to follow. 2. Expose strength and talent, but hide them. 3. The protagonist does eat melon, but actively participates in things, even starring in melon. If you haven't seen the same type, it is Liangcao. If you have seen it, it is probably Liangcao-and below.

The protagonist forcibly intervenes in the world... It has nothing to do with eating melons

Can I write about a monk in a more serious manner without a female protagonist who is a real eminent monk? Otherwise, what kind of monk would I write about?🙂

Most of them are acceptable, but some feel like they're just inexplicably pretentious. Some people may think it's cool to recite the pressure formula when fighting someone, but I feel embarrassed and my scalp goes numb.

Wood

This doesn't look like a new person. Is he a reincarnated soul boy or an extraterrestrial demon?

I don't know if the book is good or not, but the relationship is really hard... Why do I feel like reading the daily guide every day...

Gan Baobao character card, you must take a look 😏

Judging from the writing and plot, he doesn't look like a novice

The author is a bit experienced, and the plot feels a bit bland, but the writing and style are very good.

So far, it's OK to eat, food level. Recommended, monthly vote has been cast, come on!

Fine?

Let's not talk about what's wrong with the original CP. Is age a problem in ancient times? If you don't mention it, we won't be able to remember it. Just don't mention your age!

It's very interesting. I just caught up with it and subscribed to 60 chapters. I hope to maintain the quality in the future.

You can write until you are proud of yourself.