I Transmigrated into Battle Through the Heavens and Became Xiao Yan's Senior Sister

Xiao Yanzi is eating so well now. I recall that a few years ago, there were people who competed with Xiao Yanzi for the harem, but now they are all cheating, and they even bring their own dry food 😏😏😏😏

She was said to be a strong woman with far-reaching plans, but she was easily deceived by Han Feng for several years, resulting in the same fate of Yao Lao She was said to be war-loving, but it did not reflect her heroic spirit She was said to be decisive in killing, but she was too tolerant to Han Feng, and she was too rational She was said to be affectionate and righteous, but she almost ignored Yao Lao's kindness to rebuild her. However, in order to maintain the plot, Xiao Yan has to kill Han Feng It is said to be a blood feud, but it is a bit flattering to the ancient race. For the sake of the plot, the ancient race is allowed to win The author's heroine has a half-hearted idea and has no clear stance and character traits. As a result, I only speak for myself and it seems that the heroine has no personality charm.

I can only say that the first part was fine. When I wrote about Han Feng, it was just a mess, and it ended up being a mess. Do you understand? First of all, the heroine is a time traveler. She knew that Han Feng was a traitor, but she did not kill Han Feng after her master was killed. She was like a transparent person. Everything must be according to the original work, and everything must be killed by Xiaoyan. It can't be said that he is a wolf-hearted person, or it can be said to be a bit meaningless. Moreover, when Yao Chen died, he did not ask for help from Master Feng, nor did he ask for help from the Fighting Saint of Danta. I ran off to the northwest road in a hurry. I suspected that the author had no outline at all and wrote whatever came to his mind. Anyway, this heroine traveled to the past and accomplished nothing, nothing changed. The author only dares to follow the original work. What has been gained, what has been harvested, what growth and accumulation, foreshadowing, what new places and dungeons have been explored, there is nothing. Except for the foreshadowing in the front, I suspect that the rest of it is basically written around Xiao Yan. If you want to watch it, just watch it. Anyway, I don't recommend watching it, so go ahead.

Why are all Dou Po fans now licking anti-inflammatory drugs? In the past two years, some people said that anti-inflammatory drugs were a copper-smelting pervert who was pierced by the soul of a thirty-year-old uncle. There are many old people who abuse anti-inflammatory and anti-inflammatory drugs. Why is it that anti-inflammatory drugs are now used by people like a father to catch a train? There are a lot of people praising his stinky feet. Why don't you bully a young man who is poor and hypocritical?

The setting that cannot be broken through is a bit alienating

Children, don't you run away when you see the young author who limits his comments to 100 followers? The protagonist's setting is interesting, but the plot is a piece of shit. I won't say anything about Han Feng's backstabbing. The reason for staying with Xiao Yan is "Master Feng believed that Yao Lao was stabbed to death by the protagonist." Are you human to make up a lie that can be exposed casually? You are also a god if you forcefully follow the original route. The reason given is not as good as the world line closing. I hope you will stop writing this book and go home, kid, go home, okay?

I was watching your introduction to the harem, so why should I change it to pure love?

Marry into a harem? You and prison 💊 sit at the same table

In order to forcefully stick to the original plot, the protagonist was made so disgusting! Wouldn't you be able to write without the original plot?

Yun Yun's shame as a Dou Huang can make someone like the protagonist who can kill Dou Zong vomit blood 🙄. Do you want to read what you are writing? And why don't you kill Furukawa when he bites his nose and face like this? Is there anything that Furukawa can't kill?