Lord of the Mysteries: Sequence War

Protagonist: A model that is more stormy than Master Biro, has a player mentality than Russell, is as "favored" as Xiao Ke, and has a path to death that is bigger than Source Castle.

I can't stand other mysterious fanfics because of the recklessness and stupidity of the protagonists, but this one is different. It's definitely played by people playing Storm. This logic is very reasonable.

Isn't this a mysterious fanfic? The wonderful thing about the mystery is that it is written with flesh and blood, and the supporting characters all have emotions, just like a real world. This is also the basis for the existence of fan fiction. What then? Have you flattened this real world and turned it into a game? Have you turned all living characters into NPCs? How should I read this book? cannot understand

That Elud looks very inexplicable, which greatly affects the perception. The events that the protagonist encounters are all arranged by people. No matter what identity Elud is, it is very boring to look at it this way.

Now that I have read Chapter 9 of Volume 2, I would like to share my current suggestions. Contains spoilers, read with caution. The first point is that the protagonist's transformation is not complete. Generally speaking, if you want to read a transformation story, the protagonist will basically change his gender directly, using his original appearance to become the opposite sex, and then give him a name. As for the protagonist of this book, I prefer to call it a gender transformation. Of course, I can also predict that the author will also completely transform in the future. It just gives me the feeling of a person in a leather suit at this stage. Of course, this is not the point, the point is the second. The second point is that most of the protagonist's creation remains in description and is not reflected in actual events. For example, the protagonist has always been described as a skip player, a reckless and direct player, and a very strong PVP player. However, many specific plot performances only reflect the protagonist's recklessness and lack of understanding of the plot, and do not reflect how powerful he is in PVP. How to reflect the performance of pvp, there are generally three ways: 1. The lower level defeats the upper level; 2. Invincible at the same level; 3. Crush the lower level. The first item may not happen every time, but the second and third items must happen every time. The only one with better performance in this book is Killing Mrs. Sharon. Let me talk about the problems in other pvp scenarios: 1. Kill the serial killer. Based on the main character's screen at that time, and with a sneak attack, he should have taken the lead and then killed him very quickly. He shouldn't have had anyone else do the follow-up. 2. Kill Lancelot. The protagonist only identifies his identity after hearing the voice, and Lancelot does not take the initiative to fight back, and then kills him. A better description is that the protagonist discovers his identity in advance → Lancelot pretends to be innocent → Lancelot realizes that he cannot pretend anymore → Lancelot fights back → The counterattack is ineffective → The protagonist still crushes and kills him. This will further give readers a feeling of "the protagonist has delicate fighting intuition and is usually reckless, but he is very powerful as long as he gets into a fight." 3. Get away from the pursuit of demigods. According to the configuration of the protagonist at the time, this was originally a perfect opportunity to arrange a "down to defeat the upper", but the protagonist not only broke through the opponent's defense when the opponent was seriously let down, but also ran away. What I mean by "under to defeat" is not to kill, but to destroy the opponent's blocking ability, and then leave in style. What I'm talking about is just that the plot details are different, the ending is the same, but the perception given to the readers is very different. These are all based on the premise that the author repeatedly emphasizes that the protagonist is a "pvp master". I guess the author may want to create a contrast through "reckless plot + fighting strongman", but at present, the image of skip player is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, but the performance of high pvp player is average. There is no contrast, but the perception has become worse. Of course, what I said may not be right, they are all my subjective feelings. This book is already very well written among the mysterious reprints. It is really amazing. Come on, author, please update more.

To be honest, it's pretty good so far. Although the protagonist and his system are a bit out of character, it's more like a system novel than amber flow, but it doesn't have the weird feeling of writing a fan system novel - you have the original work and you still need the system to not believe in your own writing power or how much you don't believe in the ability of the protagonist? In other respects, given that the number of words is too small and nothing can be seen, it is a good idea to add your own original content through the so-called gamification mystery. The relationship and conflicts between the protagonist and all parties have not yet reached the breaking point, so it is impossible to see whether the author is really capable of controlling his own setting and plot. Finally, regarding the issue of sexual transformation, the path to death obviously has no corresponding elements. I think the possibility is probably an item similar to the witch's gloves, which means temporary transformation. If this is really the case, I guess it is an unflattering idea for both sides, whether it is the traditional male protagonist audience or the sexual Fans of the book will not rate this point higher than "flaw". In other words, it is a mistake on both sides that depends on your writing style. If you are a master of online writing, then it will not make your readers give up the book, but just endure the discomfort. If your writing style happens to be not very good, then it will become a breaking point. As a person who has changed from reading male protagonists to transformation, I only read this book because it is confirmed that he is single. On this basis, my attitude is: it is good to have a permanent transformation; if not, forget it, I don't have to endure the mentally retarded emotional lines of the male protagonist to affect the plot. As for when to change, I personally don't care. I have read so many books. Even if you write a million words and then change, it is just a special case to me. The question is, is your novel worth the million words I have to wait for? If you can use your own words to show your readers your level of proficiency and the protagonist's charming character, of course I would be more willing to tell a story that the protagonist will experience after the transformation, which is more to my liking. In addition, I don't know who the poisonous point of the author's heart is for. Based on my guess about Qidian's readership, readers of orthodox male protagonist novels will not accept a gender change for any second, and they probably will not accept being single. They will not regard this as a poisonous point, because they will leave after knowing this plot and will not read it at all. The audience of this novel is either single or transformed, so from my standpoint, the advice I can give is: change as soon as possible.

I say that your forced marriage essay, which you did not hesitate to stop updating, is not as good as this book. Do you understand?

Look, if you write a change order that smells like a change of marriage, some so-called CP clowns will appear.

I have read nearly half of this book. My understanding of the protagonist is that he has no IQ and no fighting IQ. I used to play Storm Path a lot, but now all the stupid kids have become smarter. This story tells us that we must not come to Storm Path as it will lower the intelligence of the baby 🙂

I have read more than 200 chapters so far, and the biggest problem is something that is often mentioned in the posts. The protagonist is constantly being manipulated and can only be incompetent and furious. Especially because Zangwill could kill but failed to kill him. The deus ex machina made him run away. This made the protagonist just a clown no matter how strong he was at the same level, and he continued to be a clown for at least 200 chapters.