Kingship of the Abyss: I Became a God by Borrowing Money

What was written at the end of the first volume is too outrageous. If I remember correctly, you can rely on that elf to run away. If you don't run away, if the hook is not big enough, the protagonist will die. What a retarded plot.

The plug-in is very good, the first few pictures are no problem, it is worth paying attention to

This is a fantasy adventure story. This golden finger is good, but its presence is not strong. Keep up the good work and look forward to the follow-up!

There are too many imperfections in the first volume, and many of the plots are a bit sloppy. But here, let's briefly summarize. In addition to his status as the third son of the Duke of Locke, Levin also has another bloodline that is about to wither. During the journey to Dawn Valley, in fact, no matter how you choose, you cannot avoid the fate of going to Dawn Valley. This is a game between two princes. Reina wants to release the sacred bull. There is a hole at this point, which will be filled later. The first volume may not be particularly good, but the main content of the story has been written. There are a bit too many plot points, and there is not enough foreshadowing. In 120,000 words, there may not be much plot written to make the plot compact and roughly reveal the general world. The first volume was originally a fatal situation, but it was not prepared well. When I realized it, it was too late to go back and revise, so I just wrote it down. Originally, there were some plot foreshadowings, but later thinking that they were all foreshadowing, I started the second plot at a fast pace. In the first volume, I overestimated my control over the plot. In the second volume, I concentrated on making a detailed outline. The story line has been set up, and some plots will not be as abrupt as in the first volume. After sorting out the plot of the first volume, I will put it in the work related section. See you in the next volume of Twilight Kingdom. Thank you to everyone who persisted. Thank you.

Occasionally mixed with the taste of literary youth, which is quite embarrassing

There are too many eunuchs in the fantasy category, come on!