Card: the Ego Gods List Guards the World

To be honest, it is a very normal thing for any world to have organizations. But, the worst thing about your official career is that your official career and the protagonist's career are on the same level. This is also why it is most difficult to write about the official version of the revival stream. The official version is not that useful to the protagonist. On the contrary, the official version is subject to various threats. If your official team is harmonious and works together as one without having too many ideas, then it's okay. After all, there are also novels that wholeheartedly support the protagonist's potential. But instead of writing like this, you actually plot against the protagonist in various ways. Who can stand this? You started off on the wrong foot. I don't understand you very well. You have patriotic sentiments, but why do you want to write that the protagonist is in conflict with the authorities? Isn't it okay for the official to develop the protagonist honestly and harmoniously? There are also novels that reveal talents at the beginning and receive strong official support. Why not write them like this? Is it because there is no conflict? Is it because you don't know how to write? This is a very strange point. You want to write that the protagonist has patriotic feelings, but you also write that the official side wants to hinder the protagonist and plot against the protagonist. I don't even know why you wrote this. Don't you think it's funny? It is because there are so many articles like this that almost most of them hate the protagonist and join the officialdom. Join an organization that is of no use to you. You pay unilaterally, but the other party doesn't appreciate it at all. Instead, it wants to scheme against you and control you. Who wouldn't be disgusted by this?

Seeing that the complaint about "official" posted by Jia Xu has a lot of likes, I will reply to it one by one: 1. First, let's talk about why the official setting must be introduced. Because as some book friends said, as long as it is a domestic background, the official background must be unavoidable. Some books completely weaken the power of the government, as if the protagonist is the only one in the world who is awesome. I think that is very unreal, so I introduced the setting of the Special Administration Bureau. After all, in the context of the advent of extraordinary beings around the world, there must be officials to protect civilians. But I won't write about the "workplace routine" of joining the officialdom directly and completing various tasks to get promoted. The protagonist's idea from the beginning is to be independent and develop on his own. The change in thinking and willingness to participate in the Spark Project grading test, in addition to changes in external pressure, also include some factors of "feelings for family and country". But that chapter was revised several times due to review reasons, and some content was not allowed to be written, so it was emotionally broken and could not be expressed clearly. 2. The protagonist will still break away from the official system in the future, whether he sets up his own business or joins a non-governmental organization, there is some foreshadowing ahead. So the official leader is set up to be willful and self-willed, so that conflicts of ideas may easily break out in the future. Later, other book friends also mentioned that they did not want to read the official content, so adjustments have been made starting from Chapter 47, speeding up and diluting the official plot. As for the expression of "feelings of family and country", we will refer to the opinions of book friends in the future and display it in other flexible ways. 3. Other details. For example, why go to such trouble to recruit these people? The official purpose is not only to replenish combat power, but also to control, monitor, and maintain stability (high-quality cards have great growth potential) Including the dispute between Shen Xinghe and Lin Jianxia in Chapter 51. Shen later became paranoid, and Lin gradually left the official and entered the protagonist's team. There may be some lack of foreshadowing and it seems sudden. There will be opportunities to make up for it in the future. Another brother complained that the official writing was like that of a grassroots team or the imperial court. I did not write this well enough because it involves a sensitive issue: what is the PLA doing when the mutation comes? Shenhe changed it for me several times, and I couldn't even figure it out anymore. Fortunately, I can quickly skip this part now. Thank you again for your pertinent comments. Anyone who is willing to leave a long comment must have at least read the book carefully and hopes that the book will be better. As long as it's not mindless, I will seriously look at it and think about how to change it. 🤝🤝🤝

Although the dozens of chapters before the release were not very toxic, they were far less exciting due to the author's vacillation of ideas. However, the four chapters after the release were more exciting and I look forward to subsequent updates.

Station B came over after seeing the royalties video you sent. Remember to code the title of the book in the future, brother. If it becomes popular in the future, someone will be embarrassed and report you maliciously.

The subject matter is very good, and the writing style is also good. Unfortunately, I have not determined my audience. I wrote too many official poisonous points in the early stage, and the results after it is now on the shelves are also tepid. The most obvious poisonous point in the early stage is that the protagonist holds an impromptu meeting at home and gets angry with the leader after being angry. This is a meeting of great importance to formulate a national follow-up action plan. How could someone in the officialdom be so weird about a small role in a meeting of this level, fearing that his position is too secure. It feels like the author was influenced by the audience of mindless white readers. I hope the author can find his audience well and write better in his next book.

The subject matter is very good, the copy is good, and the writing is good. The biggest problem is a logical paradox. When the cards first came, there was no explanation that real-life weapons could not be used. The protagonist also brought real-life armors into the dungeon for the first time. In this case, the country could not be so weak, especially in the early stage when the cards were so weak. It stands to reason that thermal weapons would have an absolute advantage. In the early stage, all cards have restrictions, regardless of function or time. In this case, it is impossible for the officials to leave no traces and the officials cannot control the situation.

I feel that the golden finger is too big, and the difference in strength between the Fengshen List and other cards that are legendary as soon as they come out is too big. I understand that the strength of the Fengshen List lies in the system, but the system in the early stage is not perfect. Is it really that strong? The chief and the boss of Guixu are also legendary. At present, it seems that they are similar to other supporting characters, although the protagonist has not bet against them. It doesn't feel like it's a high-level card. At any rate, the card holder is at the same level as the Complete God List, but it's still a Complete Legend card that doesn't need to be promoted from ordinary. It seems very unattractive right now.

I hope the protagonist is more decent. Watching Yi Shao Song recently, I feel like I still can't forget that we grew up under the red flag.

I have read about 10 chapters on the shelf, and there are several problems so far. The setting of the God List is that it can grow into a legend, but it is not in the early stage. Therefore, it is not reasonable to be able to summon the legendary Nezha at the rare level. What if it is directly set as a legend? Let's talk about Nezha, if the highest level is legend, then Nezha is far from reaching the legendary level in the list of gods. He is not even in his strongest state, let alone the boy Nezha. Finally, the hang-up is too big. The list of gods has always been on a different level from other people's legends. The list of gods in this list is outrageous, and it can continue to produce legendary cards. Is this really reasonable?

But more importantly, most of the Indian gods are actually a bunch of indifferent guys, and they are not boring enough to pay attention to the fights between human countries.

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Damn, I'm also from station B. Your videos have given me a lot of inspiration and allowed me to keep going. First order + two monthly passes are provided.

Suggestion post, after reading the latest chapter, I only feel that the protagonist is suffocated in the official. I feel like I have stopped pursuing the book. I believe many people have abandoned the book directly after seeing the protagonist's suffocation in the official. This kind of novel is the main theme, which gives people a sense of satisfaction. If you always suppress people, then no one will read it. I hope the author will end the official plot of the protagonist as soon as possible, or downplay the official plot. Why don't many of the same novels include the official? Even hiding your identity is because official content is difficult to write. If you don't write well, you may be blocked, or you may be restricted by various rules and regulations, which is too sensitive. So I hope the author can adjust the official side well. Patriotic information and information can also be given anonymously, or find two people with high authority in the official position who are truly patriotic to make friends. I don't believe there is no card that can hide information and appearance.

After reading about 60 chapters, I gave up, but I still encourage the author to work harder and share some thoughts and suggestions. 1. It feels like the Western fantasy online games of the past. The skills at the beginning are too Western, some reckless charging, a bit jumpy, and I can totally use Chinese to be indomitable. Especially when Ao Bing comes to a scale, it just... Doesn't match with Hua Gaixing. 2. Poor growth. It's already Chapter 60. It's hard to see independent growth or team development. Without planning, the whole thing is in chaos. 3. The combat system is broken. To be honest, I don't know why a young version of Nezha is needed. The reason why Fengshen has gone from cannon fodder to a quasi-sage is that it is not necessary to develop it, and it will inevitably lead to more appearances, squeezing the space of other characters. It is better to create a card bond similar to the Alliance, which is more interesting. In the later stage, it can be synthesized into Zhou Tianxing Dou and used as a pendant. 4. The plot is boring, relying entirely on leveling up to drive combat power upgrades. It is a routine of ancient online games. I don't know if there will be legion wars in the future, so I guess I am not very good at it.

It's a bit white, but as a newcomer's first book it's still worthy of recognition.

I have read all the comments, replied to all the opinions, and discussed the details. In addition, the writing is above the passing mark, the ideas are very good, and the context is very clear. The bad points are completely acceptable, and the cool points can completely outweigh the bad points. I think it can be used to screen readers without changing it. The official strength and attitude are a bit lacking, but I can make up for it. The characterization is weak but the main character is not off-putting.

The strokes are so big that I feel like I can't finish writing them.

I would like to ask about the battle mode in this book. Does the protagonist participate in the battle, or does the summoned object fight, with the protagonist posing next to it?

Is it another mythical card book? I hope it will have a good ending. I don't want to be a eunuch.

I've always wanted to ask a question. After reading so many card-related articles, why can I only use a few cards at the beginning? I feel that in many novels, there is no way to spread out the deck, so no one wants to read it. Why can't I just use the deck at the beginning?

I would like to ask, did the author shield the thermal weapons? Card-making vegetables can only be obtained from the corresponding world, and cards cannot be made with materials in the real world?

It's limited and free, and I caught up with the update in one go. The pace feels a bit fast, as if half of it has been written. . . Before it was put on the shelves, the plot was continuously changed, so the rhythm kept changing, and several of the plot lines that were cut were also very abrupt (for example, the woman who started buying materials, I thought she was the reincarnation of Guanyin, and the role of the trading website was also eliminated by Guo Jia). After it was released, the plot was pretty good, and the battles were basically fun. It's just that the Western camp is a bit weird. The guys all have skills from Greek mythology, but it seems like there's Odin from Northern Europe behind the scenes. It's so weird. The key point is that the mythology of the East is missing, but not that of the West as well. No matter how strange you think about this misidentification of your ancestors, oh yes, the representative actually has the nerve to call him Caesar. I hope it's just a foreshadowing, remember to fill in the holes. Suddenly I remembered that there is a pitfall in the East. How did the two mortal enemies Jinwu and Houyi combine their power? I hope there will be some pitfalls later.