Naruto: Me, the Shikotsumyaku Byakugan Princess

The Byakugan clan girl outside Konoha is unreasonable in the first place, and it is even more unreasonable if she is not a reproductive machine 🙂

There are certain logical problems. For example, killing people in Konoha is indeed a bit reckless. Another point is, why not choose to go to Iwagakure Village? Ohnoki is obviously more willing to accept a blood-stained ninja like the protagonist. There is no such person as Dango over there. Iwagakure is inexperienced and can even be regarded as a shadow if he works hard. In my opinion, Iwagakure Village is more suitable for the protagonist. Of course, the overall content is still very good. I personally like it very much. It is regarded as the food of Hokage. Come on, the author.

Have you ever been a ninja? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

It can be said that it is very good. It is not an old-fashioned start. I want to return to the plot line, and there are no nonsensical goals and dreams. The protagonist is also a normal person. After traveling through Naruto, he should have a mind and survive by any means. This alone is very difficult. I will not comment too much on the rationality of the plot. In everyone's mind All Naruto stories are different If I have to say it, I hope the author can handle it well. The protagonist returns to Hinata. Hinata may not necessarily accept the protagonist's identity as an outsider. According to the Hyuga clan's view, blood leakage is a capital crime, not to mention the protagonist, the descendant of a sinner, so this is something that needs to be handled well. Finally, according to the current timeline, it is the time when the Fourth Mizukage just released the genjutsu. It should be around Konoha 54, but it is not sure. After all, the original work did not explain it. However, at this time point, the protagonist and Naruto are the same age. It is also because of this that if the protagonist arrives in Konoha at this time point, he will be subject to a lot of suspicion. Most of the key plots will start after this point, so this is also a difficult place to deal with. PS: My personal expectation is not to overwhelm Danzo. Danzo has done so much dirty work, but there are so many unnatural operations. Most Naruto stories are "Leave this child to me and give you a war machine." Why is there such an expectation? Because as the protagonist, Danzo cannot avoid it

Anyone can discover the protagonist! ... None of the various accidents go smoothly! Abuse in disguise

Author, please don't write too much about the plot of children's play house. Just leave enough space. The background of the ninja world is cruel and ruthless, and the protagonist does not have much time to grow up.

This is the ninth female-fronted article I've seen on men's videos this month. I feel like there have been more of them recently.

Since the protagonist wants to be the goddess of the sun alongside Kaguya, the goddess of the moon, let's call her Amaterasu from now on. The best portrait can be based on Onmyoji's Amaterasu. But I think the Japanese are quite funny. Amaterasu is considered the god king of the Japanese pantheon, but the name is given to the basic attack of pink eye. Instead, a bunch of place names and gods with no origins are given to powerful skills. Maybe this is Japan's unique way of defeating the top?

Maybe the author's understanding of Shuangdian is a little one-dimensional? I can find at least two exciting points in the outline sent by the author: First, the strength is crushed. The author said that the protagonist's combat power increases too quickly, and the plot is a bit wasted. But there is also a way to write invincible, which is to crush. As long as the author changes the way the battle is written, don't use the water gun. Every time the water gun feels like it can't kill anyone. In the previous plot, it was quite interesting to use the trance air strike to crack the sky. Let's change the outline a little bit, delete the plot of Team 7 working together to break the seal, and change it to the main character leaving a back-up, and after being sealed, rely on the back-up to break the seal, and break through the overwhelming invincible situation. The second is the realization of the blood inheritance snare. This thing is originally a carrot dangled in front of our readers, and it is inherently fun to eat it. (ps: I read it on QQ, but many authors don't seem to read the comments there)

It's not that I haven't watched it for 2 days, it's just the chuunin exam, and I saw the title finale. .