A Certain Detective World's Master Assassin

He's obviously an assassin, but he's still refusing to kill someone just for fun after 30 chapters? Is your sense of morality a little too high?

Forget about female characters who have no interactions. Akemi had so many interactions, and she even made up her mind to send her out to be matched, which is not what Toru Amuro was originally. This makes people feel very uncomfortable. It gives people the feeling that every thought is just pulling the red line randomly. Not paying enough attention to the role you create.

What did you think of sending Belmode to Calvados? Is it worthy? Even if you can do it yourself. It feels like giving Diao Chan to Hua Xiong. My brain is crazy.

Generally speaking, if there is a single female protagonist, a very important role such as this one cannot support the heroine's status. After reading so many fanfics, I found that these under-popular women are more like supporting characters with the title of heroine than heroines. But it's no wonder, after all, even the heroine Xiaolan is like a supporting character in the original work

Can the protagonist get a hidden sword for use, and also get an assassin robe?

The protagonist is of Edenian descent. I can understand that he can extract genes to go back to ancient times. Why can you, an old woman, extract them?

I would like to ask the author, will the plot of Belmod be changed? If you don't change it, you will give up. I hate this kind of gifting of popular characters. It's just official roles, and it's still reluctant to write about their natural development. This kind of forced gifting is really unacceptable.

After reading the first 30 chapters, I feel that the author handled the plot of the protagonist being taken away by the underworld too roughly. The protagonist is an assassin, and he dared to get into someone's car without preparation or development. It makes people feel very bad. The later chapters also confirmed my opinion, and almost didn't kill anyone. This is because they followed the rules and didn't do anything in the car. It's not that this kind of plot of forcing people to take on trouble in the early stage cannot be written. I think two requirements must be met. 1. There must be a reason why you must come forward. I don't see why the protagonist has to come forward. A house worth 7,000 yen? Or was he kidnapped by someone close to him? It's not even that big of a deal, it just comes out as soon as you think about it, and it's over without any brainpower. The Lord of Mysteries and Red Heart Patrol both have plots where they force themselves forward before they are fully developed. The Lord of Mysteries is for the sake of saving more people, while Red Heart Patrol is similar to the protagonist whose enemy is about to get a death-free gold medal, and if he doesn't take action, he won't be able to get revenge. At least there's nothing wrong with these two reasons. 2. The protagonist handles the crisis reasonably through some operations despite lack of strength. In this plot, the protagonist's job is to go up and do it. What should I do if he can't do it? Sorry, I didn't think about it. It's too childish to handle life-threatening situations. I think this plot can be expanded on at least three points. First, the protagonist secretly sends a message to the police before getting in the car, so that at least someone can save him if he is about to be beaten to death; second, make some preliminary preparations before the fight, such as poisoning to reduce the difficulty of the fight; third, set up a listening device to see if he can find information about the underworld boss. The look and feel will be much better. The most important thing about the plot is that there should be no subtle points, and the writing is not brilliant enough. Readers should be patient and read a few more paragraphs just in case they see a plot they like. People are very sensitive nowadays, and if the plot has subtle points, readers will abandon it after seeing it.

There is really no need to be too law-abiding in Ke Xue's world. There are too many heinous sinners in Ke Xue's world. In addition, it is Assassin's Creed. The name Assassin has a long history. It can also be used to scare washing machines.

The combat power is a bit too low, and I am no longer in the mood to continue reading.