Mortal I Have a Farm Space

The poison is given when testing the spiritual roots at the beginning. For a family of cultivators, they only test the spiritual roots when they are ten years old. This is really a sign of the Tang family. Do they need a certain age for the spiritual roots to grow? Not everyone is a casual cultivator who started out as a secular mortal like Han Li.

Your book is a harem-style book, but it is not enough for a harem-style book. It should be difficult to attract too many harem-style readers. If there are fewer people who subscribe to this kind of book, it will be difficult to achieve good results. Although there are many cultivation plots, because you wrote about the harem, the readers of cultivation flow will probably not read them. Your plots are really boring. Although the writing is not bad, it feels like there is nothing new, and it is difficult for people to spend money to subscribe. I suggest you write more harem plots, recruit more women, and expand your readership. You can add a little more creativity to the cultivation plot. Don't be in seclusion for years and decades. You can use your time to do other things. After all, you have a golden finger. You can cultivate at least several times faster than Han Li. It's not good for the plot to jump too fast. It's also good to have more daily life in the harem. I have shared with you several reader groups. I don't know if anyone will come. Come on, author, I can only support you so much. 🤭🤭

The harem is either not watching or wide open. Nowadays, the readers are basically readers of the eunuch training stream and the harem recommendation stream. There are too few readers for other writing styles, and they cannot form a basic base at all. Writing about a few women offending the eunuchs and monks, and even a few women offending the harem, the remaining readers cannot become the base. The reader base of this book is too small, and the author is at risk of being eunuchs. It feels difficult to finish the book. The plot also messes up the Star Sea for a hundred years, which makes me speechless. If you already have a golden finger, can't you control the development of the teleportation array? Wouldn't the development of both places provide the resources to support women? Why are you still a casual cultivator? The plot happened so many years ago. The plot is too cliche.

The biggest drawback is writing about the daily life of love, the rest is okay

I saw that I went to Jin Guang and said he was a fat sheep. Come out and complain. Jin Guang is only worth an Immortal Ascension Token and has nothing else. You don't need it. You can join the sect directly with your qualifications.

It's very poisonous. The protagonist is Wind Spirit Root, who is naturally a weak alchemy and weapon refining group, and the attack is only a Wind Dragon Flag, which is extremely weak. The protagonist's farm space is extremely weak and too restrictive. There is also no forced contract ability in the spirit beast space, which is exposed.

Dear readers, welcome to read my book. I am a complete newcomer. You are welcome to point out any shortcomings.

I can't say whether it's good or bad, but I feel like I can't stand the chance to pick up Han Li all the time.

If you put the spirit beast into space, won't it be exposed when the spirit beast transforms into a spiritual golden finger?

The casting is not good, the self-created casual cultivator characters are better than the family characters, and the space spirit stone ripening mechanism is not good!

The Mortals I've seen before: I Asked about Immortality on the Farm is very interesting, I hope the author can refer to it.

The writing is good. You can consider adding some magic skills and magic weapons to the protagonist. How can he face the invasion of magic? Don't rush to Chaos Xinghai. Harvest a few waves first.

It feels too bland, a bit confusing, and the golden finger is not strong. In addition, I can take the Sky Palm Vase but give it up, tsk tsk tsk

A cultivator relies on rote memorization to record the exercises? ? ? Don't you know how to use jade slips to make rubbings? ? Really wise

The writing is very poisonous, First point: The setting of Golden Finger is unreasonable. There are not so many high-level spiritual stones in the human world to give you elixirs that can mature for more than a thousand years. It can be set to use low- and mid-level spiritual stones from one to nine thousand years. If you want to break through ten thousand years, you need high-level spiritual stones. Don't be afraid to open it up Second point: The wind attribute skills obtained in the Bloody Forbidden Land do not have matching magical powers and magic weapon refining methods. It's really too bad. It is against the heavens. It is absolutely necessary to have the top skills in the human world that can be practiced to the stage of divine transformation. Moreover, this technique has a high possibility of being practiced to the late stage of divine transformation, because the founder of the Bloody Forbidden Land is the same figure as the Ice Soul Fairy. He came from the spirit world to resist. A cultivator in the late stage of divine transformation from Demon Tribulation, The third point: It's so hard to see the protagonist mindlessly looking for a foundation-building elixir. (I really want to laugh when I see it) The protagonist is too stupid and doesn't take advantage of his own big advantages. You are not a casual cultivator, you are Li Huayuan Disciple, the son-in-law of the Jindan Chen family, just go to them and exchange the spirit stone and elixir for the elixir. I will definitely help you, because you are a spiritual root monk. The elixir is difficult to find only for casual cultivators. A thing that can be copied is not so precious. It is important to find the right way. That's all I've seen so far, and I can't stand the rest.

The core of the novel is still the plot, or you can write something astringent like Bamboo Leaf Cake or Chicken Fork

Next is the daily routine of ordinary people raising children?

The proportion of monks below the Golden Core in Luan Xing Sea is much higher than that in Tiannan. Foundation Establishment Pills are not a rare item in Luan Xing Sea. When they reach above Golden Core, especially Nascent Soul, they are far lower than Tian Nan. Overlords like Xing Gong only have a few Nascent Souls in total, and they are not as good as the 7 sects of Yue Kingdom. 11, And the Yue Kingdom is not even a hair in Tiannan. Not counting behemoths like the Six Demonic Sects and the Righteous Way, the Yue Kingdom is nothing in ordinary countries, not including the grassland tribes. In total, there are probably hundreds of Nascent Souls in Tiannan. How can Luan Xinghai compare with them?

Sects are rushing to get the Heavenly Spiritual Root and the Different Spiritual Root, even the dual Spiritual Roots only want the foundation-building recommended sects. You still need to enter the sect with the Immortal Ascension Order.

How about setting the golden finger to be a treasure or magic weapon that can turn back time? Throw in elixirs, magic weapons or the like to restore the original spiritual grass minerals. People can also go in and turn back time, making old people look younger.

No, buddy, don't those who cultivate immortality have great power all in one body? Why do you want to fly when a descendant suddenly appears?

I haven't read it yet. Check the catalog to see if you can walk Han Li's path before Han Li does.

Xiao Cui'er forgot about it and said she would be Qiao Qian's apprentice, but everyone here ran away.

I want to ask who the heroine is in this book! Did you collect everything?