
Konoha: the Uchiha's Master of Neuromanipulation
木叶:宇智波的神经操纵大师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 740k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The author said that there are only 50 ninjas in the Uchiha clan
The author said that Uchiha looked down on medical ninjas. The author said that he had seen and heard a lot of this kind of thing. The author said that he suggested listening to interviews with White Crow.
The author said that the corpses of dead Hyuga clan members can breed Hyuga clan members
Extremely poisonous! Hundreds of people fought against thousands of Iwa Ninjas. As a result, only thirty people died on the protagonist's side, while more than three thousand casualties were suffered on the Iwa Ninja side. Also, the protagonist only gives 1,000 taels as a pension to one of his subordinates who is killed in battle. A bowl of Iraku Ramen costs fifty or sixty taels. 1,000 Taels is not enough for twenty bowls of ramen, so it's better not to give it at all. Isn't this purely insulting! He also said that Konoha can't even afford a pension of 1,000 taels. How can Konoha be so poor? An S-level mission costs at least a million taels. The author didn't use his brain when writing the book!
They have three golden chapters at the beginning, but you feed them directly in the first chapter. You actually say that a ninja family like Uchiha who adds blood to the blade looks down on the top doctor who can save their lives? It's been years since I've seen such a mindless setting. It makes me dream back to 20 years ago.
It was the first time I met my anxious author. (50 Uchiha people) People here say they are impatient haha
After reading the comments, the author said that if you should go to the factory to make screws, then make screws. Don't just eat this bowl of rice if you can't eat it.
It feels like it was written by two people. The contrast between the main character before and after is too great, and he suddenly becomes a charlatan and makes complaints about nothing.
The first twenty or thirty chapters are okay. Although some of the plots are purely the author's self-imagination, which is not consistent with the original work, it is acceptable, but starting from more than thirty chapters, it was written randomly. The negotiations were negotiated by the senior management without going through the negotiations, and the benefits gained from the negotiations were distributed by oneself. Why, if you want to rebel, it is not realistic at all.
There is no such thing as a check in Naruto. Kakuzu kills people and collects bounties in stacks.
In order to write a novel, I have no shame. The eldest son of Sarutobi Hiruzen is dead Naruto is a demon fox and may not die. Being a fourth-generation son may not be alive Even a demon fox and a fourth-generation son need to withstand twice the pressure of life To protect Naruto, Konoha needs at least twice as many people to die. The product of the combination of Japanese samurai spirit and ninja. Konoha White Fang's mission failed Suicide is a bit of a conspiracy. It is somewhat redeemed by his own death The meaning of Konoha's credibility. The samurai spirit is somewhat lacking in brains.
Let me talk about the points that discourage people from quitting. I hope the author of the next book can refer to it: 1. The idea of nerve control is very good, but there are a few points that are not explained clearly. 1. Why nerves can be used as a means of attack. Nerves should be very fragile and have a strong sense of pain. I feel that the protagonist's nerve skills are comparable to those of Mu Dun. 2. Why nerves can be controlled outside the body, refer to Corpse Bone Veins, this type of technique should not have this ability. 2. There is a second time traveler 3. It's a bit disgusting to leave body tissue in other people's bodies 4. Some of the protagonists are trying to be mysterious, and the Riddler gets out of the starting point
The writing is better than most fics
Why are you watching Naruto fanfics? Obviously I have only watched Shippuden anime. Isn't it just the same plot that makes people confused and angry? If you were to write about a passionate bond, you wouldn't even read it at a glance. It depends on whether there is revenge or revenge.
A family of dozens of people can be feared by a ninja village that has tens of thousands of standing ninjas and can squeeze out 40,000 to 50,000 ninjas at its limit! Haha!
It's so dramatic. Suddenly a classical Chinese text came out from Tsuchikage. Is there a classical Chinese text in another world?
The novel written by the author has more bugs than the original Naruto novel
It hurts to watch. The second set is too much, the logic is illogical, and it makes my head hurt to watch it.
You only need a clown. It doesn't matter whether it matches the original work or not.
The author's way of writing on the battlefield feels awkward, and the nerves come out of the body. What kind of operation? You said that the fine operation of chakra is about the same. I can only say that there are ideas, but the writing is poor.
Three authors said, is this a bad review?
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Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?