Two Worlds: I Can Transmigrate to a Flood-Ravaged Apocalypse

Yes, it looks okay. The only thing is that the protagonist can be passive every time. He will be chopped and stabbed by others at every turn, and then fight back. What if someone directly fucks you in the head? Looking at it now, this is a big problem, it's so inconsistent!

I don't think there should be too many women, just enough. It's mainly about the plot.

No, Chapter 12 is too poisonous, let people chop him with a knife and then kill him! There is also the idea of ​​​​falling in love here, and you are not decisive in accepting girls! Brother, you are writing apocalyptic writing, not urban writing

I'm not a gangster, your flood will recede. If we don't retreat, the highest ones will definitely be the tops of various mountains. How can there be any house standing on the top of the mountain?

Entered the palace, but still not alive enough to be put on the shelves

It's time to cut it off. Your bottom is all exposed.

The moral bottom line of the protagonist is a bit high, especially for a person who has a lot of food in the end of the world, which seems a bit strange.

Just saw it, it's okay. Collected.

Multiple heroines? Can you write emotional lines?

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