Clan Cultivation: I Forge Eternal Life with the Five Poisons

The inexplicable choice of skills. If you don't take the main road to the sky, you have to take a side path. It's better to have a choice. The protagonist should not have the Pacific in his mind.

Copy the poisonous cultivation setting of Shuidao. Anyway, he is a eunuch, so why not give you more experience?

Overall, it is very comfortable to watch, except for three places where the writing is a bit stiff 1: The horned lizard is awkward, but it is understandable because of the relationship between the five poisons. 2: The hatred that pulls down the brim of the hat seems a bit immature and does not match the character of the protagonist in front. 3: The biggest stiff point, the family exercise conspiracy, is a bit abrupt and urgent. It was written in two chapters at once and the protagonist's eyes were opened. It would have been better if there were some previous chapters that set the stage for asking the elders for advice and filled in a few hundred words to let the protagonist notice anything unusual.

I couldn't stand the chapter when I saw the protagonist choosing a skill. You either give the protagonist only one choice, or you make the other two choices more difficult and more fatal than this choice. Otherwise, why would the protagonist choose such a fatal skill when he doesn't have a golden finger? You are raising a baby, and you are using drugs to refine your qi. The baby may have backlash, and practicing drugs may kill you. There are also many resources to raise 5 babies. You don't need to think about it.

Except for the sudden family conflict, everything else is actually pretty good. There is nothing wrong with the patriarch's idea, but it is too much of a conspiracy theory to add that the parents were killed by the patriarch. The second is that the protagonist has opened his eyes. If you don't point it out, I didn't find this problem. The protagonist guessed it as soon as the patriarch finished telling the elder. It's a bit funny. The recent writing is a bit too extreme. I don't know how the author coordinates the subsequent conflicts. Overall, I think it's good.

The family is in trouble, and now they are about to break up with the family 🤔. The patriarch is indeed written as someone who cares about the family, but in order to put him on the opposite side of the protagonist, he is written to have harmed the protagonist's parents and wants to take away the body. It feels a bit forced.

I suggest changing the title of the book. Judging from the content, it is definitely a break with the family, so it is not a family stream, and the family stream is not popular now.

The training part is well written and very detailed, including training spiritual beasts, making poison, etc., As well as the principles of the protagonist's practice of poison skills, etc. However, I feel that the focus is a bit too focused on training and fighting monsters to accumulate resources. It is better to have some daily life, such as the protagonist's interests, the protagonist's social interactions, and the protagonist's improvement of his residence, etc. The story is slow and urgent. They are all dungeons for fighting monsters and training, which makes people feel a bit too tight. They have turned into training machines. A little daily addition will also show the popularity of the protagonist and enrich the content of the novel.

The synopsis is quite interesting, but unfortunately I hate watching family stories.

Seeing that the protagonist knows the truth, I won't say anything blunt. I just want to know what the protagonist will do next? Revenge? I really hope that there is no conspiracy in the title family, but now, apart from being okay at the beginning, I still have a feeling of hoping that the patriarch will succeed. I feel that the patriarch is very successful and more interesting. Now there is a kind of pushing the plot for the plot.