Taking Charge from Dual Careers

Write quickly

The writing is okay, but the reason why no one reads it, I guess is that the author likes to write memories, and there is a strong sense of separation between the front and the back. There is really no need to emphasize how powerful the protagonist's life experience is. If you open it, you will open it. Isn't it okay to have extraordinary talent? The more explanations there are, the easier it is for loopholes to appear.

After reading ten chapters, the world view is okay and the plot is okay. However, the sense of fragmentation is too serious, the transitions between paragraphs are too abrupt, and it reads very strangely. The writing style needs to be improved.

I just finished reading it. The author made the protagonist a virgin without any opinion. I was speechless.

The author can completely write the protagonist's own thoughts when entering another world. There is no need to write such a story about being forced to another world and feeling aggrieved.

It's good enough, but the author writes some things in a confusing way without any reason. In the eyes of our readers, it is incoherent.

To be honest, I always feel that adding firearms occupations to this type of article is nondescript, and it suddenly reduces my interest in the follow-up.

Chapter 195 Pulling the big one

I like the setting very much, but it always feels weird. The plot is not that exciting and the sense of upgrading is not much.

I was looking too fast and went astray. I mistook the innocent Taoist priest for the light prayer. I thought she was a woman. I was wondering why the protagonist wants two women as teammates. Is this to create a harem? Finished posting comments and posts. It has now been deleted. I solemnly apologize🙏. I really looked at it wrongly. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

By the way, as for the military's technological weapons, why are they only guns?

They also don't carry some powerful artillery shells. Secondly, they haven't developed heavy firearms suitable for players with enhanced attributes. The most important thing is that those large fog gates don't even throw neutron bombs, and they don't even throw cloud bombs or iron bombs inside. With the productivity of modern countries, the land in these fog gates can be used for farming and digging for rare earth, no matter how barren it is. It's not like the desertified land cannot be dug for stones for replanting and maintenance. So far, I have seen that they are still in the form of guerrillas, and the new materials in other worlds still seem to be in the form of small teams. As the main equipment, fighting against fog gates mainly relies on vehicle transport teams, not even helicopters and aircraft, which is a bit too strange. Secondly, based on the enhanced attributes of the player team, the armor and equipment provide a close-fitting defense. Instead of hundreds of kilograms of reinforced metal armor, the shield can actually be 50 centimeters in length. It relies on the mechanical structure to be connected to the armor to improve combat effectiveness. Before entering the fog gate, it is not used as a gas bomb. There are too many opportunities to directly increase productivity and development, which are basically wasted.

Is the male protagonist a skill template of roaming + ammunition + revenge? Sister, is that force magic + elemental blast? The swordsman looks like Sword Sect + Sword Soul + Sword Emperor, with more strength and more seams.

Not to mention Skynet artificial intelligence and surveillance, with the current productivity, all intersections in the country can be connected to surveillance and customized artificial intelligence or identity cards with network interfaces can be carried with you when you go out. If someone is robbed, it will automatically call the police immediately. It will also be easy to use guerrilla invasions from outsiders to seize the house. Real estate development has been upgraded again. Fully intelligent whole-house housing has been built. Those urban villages have been pushed back to reconstruction under the pretext of preventing guerrillas from outsiders. The land area has begun to increase and there is no point in implementing a household registration system. Now the unlimited development of productive labor force is not a situation of labor surplus.

The first post is mine, hh (although it's not something to be happy about...)

My personal opinion is, The land reclamation chief clearly knows that there are problems with the snow team and even the local chief, so why not take control of all the key players first? Do you want to disperse your troops to open up wasteland? Is it necessary to open up wasteland in such a hurry? Save people? I hope the author can explain it.

I'm tired of reading this book. It's too narrative and not very satisfying.

Well written, don't send too much data

There is a light, calm and abstract feeling

The level of talent affects the number of attribute points obtained after upgrading. The higher the talent level in the later stage, the stronger the player will be. Players of the same level, even n A-level talent players, are no match for an S-level talent player.

As the title says, I deleted some of the harsh comments, but since none of them were banned, I just put the topic here so everyone can communicate freely. In addition, tomorrow's chapter will completely confirm the team's bonus points. You can come back after reading tomorrow's chapter.

I think the writing is really good, much better than those in the top 100 of the monthly vote list who don't know how to get there.

Just like the title! More updates! ! !

I've been keeping it since I ordered half of it. I didn't expect it to be finished today. It's good to have a beginning and an end. I'm looking forward to the next one.