NBA: Superstar Guard, Dynasty Architect

I'm curious, after the protagonist failed to be drafted in his freshman year and decided to return to his home country, did he not finish his studies? Another point that really bothers me is the 50% compatibility; if you're deliberately trying to suppress the protagonist, don't give him a Shaquille O'Neal-esque persona!

Before you start writing sports fiction, I suggest you understand what sports require, what kind of sports require, what physical qualities are needed, and what specific traits are required. This will help you write well. For example, in the previous chapter where you knocked that little black guy flying, that should be described as having terrifying explosive power.

The writing level is too low; it doesn't resemble professional basketball, but rather a high school league. The protagonist's physique, technique, and basketball IQ are all omitted. He simply leaves opponents with thousands of matches of experience dumbfounded and completely overwhelmed. He even surprises seasoned scouts and assistant coaches. It's ridiculous! Who would yell and scream during a practice match? Even the audience wouldn't be happy!

In the early stages, you can use a physical, brute-force approach, and then gradually develop your skills.

You know what, I read it from beginning to end, just like when I read those wish-fulfillment novels. 🙂🙂

What were they thinking? Teaming up with the NBA's greatest vampire of all time?

You might as well cut yourself up instead of taking one a day.

Keep writing!

Does the author even know that Yao Ming almost couldn't go to the NBA?! You're still thinking of asking Yao Ming to help you find an agent? Back then, Yao Ming was constantly arguing with a certain association, and he ended up selling all his interests, including his management team, to them before they let him go abroad. Do you know why Yao Ming played so badly in his NBA debut?

So, does the protagonist's backline have the physique of a shark?