Tyrant of the Red Chamber

Give the author some suggestions, maybe the name and cover should be changed.

Can you not include private goods? Who told you that those who studied in ancient times were all rich people? Why do you need a so-called class summary to deny the beautiful qualities of so many poor people who study hard and are determined to learn? If nothing else, as you put it, Fan Wenzheng's father died when he was two years old, his mother Xie remarried Zhu Wenhan, and his family was poor. What you mean is that all the hard reading is a joke. According to your way of labeling class, I can also say, are you mocking these contemporary high school students and college students who study hard in their humble childhood? After all, they have not created much value and live on the support of their parents. Many students' families are not well-off, and many families rely on manual work to barely make ends meet. This means that they are also people in heaven. Can you please stop using the class label and write your book well? Then why don't you write about your protagonist enjoying the fruits of exploitation here all day long, collecting a harem every day to be a stud, and even more so, being born within a child?

He has become an emperor, so why should he call Yuanchun "sister"? Because of her big face?

I don't understand Queen Mother Hu. Logically speaking, she should protect her son. Which position of Queen Mother and Princess can he not distinguish between? , If he really usurped the throne, then he would be the princess, not the queen mother. At that time, Wu Zetian also knew that the throne should be passed to the Li family and not to the warriors.

After reading more than 140 chapters, the author's point of view is quite strange. Before accepting a daughter, she must first confiscate her family and exterminate her family. The euphemistic name is that because the protagonist is the emperor, she cannot be accepted in a hurry and must be in line with the character (killing decisively). He also likes to take Li Shimin, Shangguan Wan'er and Zheng He as an example to show that only the love that kills the whole family is true love. He also wants to ask the woman whether she hates him, whether she really hates him or she doesn't dare to hate him? Then the male and female protagonists fall in love. In front of love, family hatred is nothing. At present, the Wang family and the Xue family have been wiped out, and the three Yi tribes and their female relatives have entered the Jiaofang Division. Judging from the previous foreshadowing, the Jia family should also be killed in addition to Jia Zheng and Jia Mu, and then Yingchun, Tanchun and Xichun fall in love with the protagonist after experiencing the ordeal of confiscating the house. After all, I have destroyed your whole family and yet I spared your life. Isn't this grateful? Naturally, he was admitted to the harem. The whole story is a piece of epic sadomasochism. It is about the love-hate entanglement between a tyrant who cares about the world and the golden hairpins in the Red Mansion. It is breathtaking. Does this open up a new track in the Red Mansion? Come on, author, take good care of you!

It's not that female authors of female videos can't be good, but isn't your plot arrangement too vicious? You are the emperor, and even if you are the author and you don't like the character of Jia Baoyu, you just write that you are deliberately trying to punish him and put him in the army. Because of his character problems, he will definitely commit crimes, and then catch the pigtails and punish him severely, wouldn't it be over? A very simple political issue makes you write as if the emperor is so noble, Jia Baoyu is so outrageous, and you rack your brains to plead for mercy, and you are a relative who is exterminated for justice. There is a kind of beauty of a mentally retarded female channel who retreats after rebelling in the capital and demanding an apology from the emperor.

It's broken. I read this book too early. I guess it's the reincarnation of an old man. Let me mention a few points that I enjoyed. The swordsman is decisive and ruthless. There is a tangled and cruel feeling. The abuser is moderate. There are restraints and enhancements. The plot is compact. However, there are a few shortcomings. One is that Hu Xuanji's setting has a high IQ, but it is not reflected in the text. Compared with the more everyday character creation in the garden drama. Yuanchun's image in the main plot is more prominent, but I always feel that there is something missing. Also, it is suggested that the psychological description of the indigenous people should be less vernacular, which may be a bit dramatic in my personal opinion.

When Hu Xuanji participated in the rebellion, the protagonist did not disclose his participation in the rebellion, but secretly said that there was a delay in dealing with him. Come on, this is a rebellion. It's not the extermination of the nine tribes. He is still alive and well. He will probably let his son go in the future. He will cut the grass without eradicating the roots. There is nothing wrong with participating in the rebellion. Also, Lin Daiyu's writing was okay at first, but in the last chapter, she changed directly back to the way she got along with Jia Baoyu in the original novel. I really thought she was stupid. Or is it the stereotype that Lin Daiyu will only be jealous and cry for no reason?

It is best for Xue Baochai to remain an outsider and not enter the palace. Even if she can enter the palace, it is best to give her the lowest status. In short, she cannot be given status, even if she gives birth to a son. Xue Baochai is literally a femme fatale, a serious house-fighting master. In the original novel, Lin Daiyu was tortured by her in an unbelievable way. Giving her status means giving her the capital to stir up trouble.

The political wisdom and planning in the front are quite good, but in the back, they only think about the lower body. It seems that except for the twelve hairpins, there are no women in the world 😴

I originally read the posts before reading the book. They said the male protagonist was weird. I didn't believe it yet, so I decided to take a look. But halfway through, I felt sick. The male protagonist is more than just a weirdo, he is simply a sinister villain, and he feels like a villain who has succeeded. Jia Yuanchun has taken care of her for ten years as both a mother and a sister. He has also risked his life to save the male protagonist so many times, holding a sword to block the rebels and protect him. What is the result? What did the male protagonist do... I won't say anything about killing Jia Zhen and Jia She. These two deserved to die. Let's talk about the more disgusting points: ① Accepted Li Wan. This is my sister-in-law. You took her in not long after her eldest brother died, and you even took her several-month-old child as a fake child. Are you right to her? Is it worthy of Jia Zhu's spirit in heaven? That was his only bloodline, but in the end he became your son, and you even claimed to be giving him wealth. Fart! In the original work, the family was confiscated and someone could pass the Jinshi exam on their own. Do they need you to make them rich? ② Jia Baoyu was repeatedly tortured and castrated. Let's just say, there are many Red Mansions fans who hate Jia Baoyu, including me, and everyone is just having fun punishing others. What about you? According to the timeline and plot of your book, you torture them repeatedly before they do anything bad. Okay, if you want to say that he covets Daiyu, then fine, that's fine. But you want to write about sending Jia Baoyu to the military camp, and then destroying the morale of the army, and then taking the opportunity to castrate Jia Baoyu, and tortured him so many times, just for this? Then, Jia Yuanchun watched his only biological brother being castrated, unable to do anything. How did you do it? "Oh, give me a child. Don't resent me. I have two capitals and thirteen provinces on my shoulders. You have to understand." Oh my God, I'm so disgusted. Jia Yuanchun really and truly gave up in vain. You, a white-eyed wolf, will only rely on your status as emperor and the world's righteousness to oppress the pua family, and then they have to fall in love with you without any complaints, give you children, and watch your father, eldest brother, and younger brother's bloodline cut off with your own eyes. You are really good at it. You have made it clear about the sinister villain and his selfishness. He calls it euphemistically: This is the power of an emperor! Being an emperor means being alone, there is nothing you can do about it. Bah! It makes me sick. ③ Punish Jia Yucun. Let's talk about the facts. Let's not talk about the bad things he did in the original book. Let's talk about what he did in your book. Let Jia Yucun control the army, and then Jia Baoyu confused the morale of the army and wanted to punish him, but because of Jia Yuanchun and Jia Jia Sanchun, he did not dare to deal with it privately, for fear of losing the face of an emperor who "emphasizes love and justice", so he punished him a little first, and then wrote a letter to inform him about how he wanted to be punished, and then he did what he was told. What about you? Without saying a word, he went up and down secretly, and even said that he would punish Jia Yucun. It makes me sick. You said that if they didn't inform you and directly killed Jia Baoyu to stabilize the morale of the army, then you said that he had no superiors and killed him first and reported later. After all, you just said before that you are not satisfied with the cabinet's private approval of some memorials that you think are important, so you don't want to restrict the cabinet. What happened when we arrived at Jiayu Village? Is this a big deal? It's big, it must be big, so people don't dare to deal with it privately. They ask you first, but you just punish it without saying anything, and then send someone to check and balance it. Really, if people avoid you and do things, you should punish and check them. If you report them openly and then ask for instructions, you should also punish them and check them. When I work under you, everything I do is always wrong? Whether your male protagonist is evil or not is this a double standard? Everything was fine in the past, but I have been indifferent since I became emperor. What kind of cooking, "training" the Queen Mother to make dumplings that are no more delicious than "learning" from Aunt Xue, Baochai's biological mother... Do you dare to be more disgusting? Why drink breast milk to treat diseases? Do you dare to be more debauched? What's the point of this plot? You didn't read the comment section where I was scolding you, right? In short, if you haven't started reading it yet, don't read it. The writing style of this book is very good, which won my heart. The characterization is also pretty good, barely acceptable. But the male protagonist is a villain, which is a bit disgusting. Of course, if you like this kind of dark style, you can still watch it😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

I jumped to watch it. As the emperor, I lived like the old emperor I hated the most. I just barely managed to take down Mrs. Shi. She couldn't do anything about business. A gentleman does something and doesn't do anything. Not to mention the stars and the sea, he at least enriches the country and strengthens the army so that the people can benefit. Ten thousand women a day will not help society. In the end, I am a poor man and only read chapters with a subscription price of more than ten points. Thank you.

The protagonist should just confiscate the Jia family. The reason is to participate in Wang Ziteng's rebellion, and then let the female members of the Jia family enter the palace as slaves. This way, there is no need to use your brain to figure out how to get the beauties of the Jia family.

Doesn't the author think it's disgusting that a ten-year-old with pig's feet would have an affair with a girl? What can you do? Hurry up and speed up the plot! At least fourteen or fifteen, let's put it aside for a moment and I'll take a look again when I'm older.

In order to please readers, the author tortured the Jia family in various ways, including confiscating their homes and castrating them. But I was really jealous of those women from the Jia family, so it was awkward. The title of the book is Tyrant, but it is not that violent. He was violent and violent against several women's mothers. Then I feel that the color is very low-level (compared to an emperor). The entire day revolves around the lower body to advance the plot. The girls don't have that kind of refreshing feeling when they do it. In short, they look very awkward.

How to put it, people can't imagine things they haven't seen before. After all, the author has not received a formal education as an emperor, and he only imagines the emperor's life. Let's just read it, it's an online article after all.

After reading about Chapter 130, since the emperor has secured his throne, I feel that the following plot is not interesting. Just looking at the table of contents makes people less interested in reading. I feel like going forward is nothing more than collecting everything.

Actually, I personally dislike Lin Daiyu in the Red Mansion.

The description angle of this book is very strange. The heroine, Yuan Chun Daiyu, is described in an average way. The protagonist, Empress Dowager Hu, who she wants to kill over and over again, is described in such a seductive way. What on earth does the author mean? From a writing logic point of view, she should not be portrayed as someone who is extremely cruel. Only when the protagonist kills the Queen Mother will the readers feel better. According to this description, when the Queen Mother is killed, the readers will feel depressed, right? What did the author think?

After reading it, I think it's okay, it's just a fictional historical novel. There is no bad point. The only bad point is that the protagonist is too young. It really looks a bit nondescript. Another aspect is the creation of characters. It can be seen that the author is really trying his best to create the complexity of the characters. However, if it is not written well in this way, it can easily lead to inconsistencies and conflicts. For example, Wang Ziteng said in front of the prince's mausoleum that he was a loyal prince, but later he would stand with Hu Xuanji, the man suspected of killing the prince, to "take the side of the emperor." The reason for collaborating was also very abrupt. Quite contrary to the inner monologue of the previous character. It's very much like the feeling that whatever the protagonist thinks he thinks, he must think so. Could use a little more psychological description. This reflects the involuntary nature of the struggle. The last point is that there are too few necessary words and too much unnecessary words. You have to figure out whether your audience is an old critic, a weirdo who likes to see the details of Quan Douwen, or a Red Mansion Party member who likes to watch everyday flirting. Of course, this is just my personal reflection after reading it. The author writes very well.

I want to watch the Tyrant, not the Sexy King 😒

After reading, please post some pictures 🙂

Damn it, why did you write Jia Yuanchun's son Li Zhao to death? Did it help the plot at all? I really vomited. I ate a huge lump when I saw the last chapter 🤔

An animal that thinks in its lower body has become an emperor and still lacks women? Isn't it good to march eastward and westward, and to march northward and southward? Nothing!

Red Mansion

I finished it in one go, the writing is really good, the writing is excellent, especially the characters in the harem 🙂 are well written, the historical reserve is in place, but there are too few plots about Daiyu, please give me more! ! !

When writing about Red Mansions, you are right to bully Baoyu 🤭, there won't be any fans of Baoyu, right?

There's not much to see in the back. It's all about recruiting girls, ransacking homes, and fighting Japanese pirates.

Let me ask a question, are you okay?

Where's the spirit?