Douluo: the Phoenix Descends on the Nine Heavens, Burns the Sky and Cooks the Sea

Why go to Notting City to gain a sense of presence? The most powerful person in Notting City is the Soul Sect at most. Although the protagonist's parents are dead, he is considered a genius in the family and at least he is protected. And he has to go to the small border town of Notting City to gain a sense of presence in front of Yu Xiaogang. Isn't this just funny?

Is there any problem with Yu Xiaogang's knowledge? Are you kidding me? Funny.

It's enough to upgrade your soul power to level five in five years. It's amazing. It's also known as body training. If you want to level up, find a good reason.

There are no useless martial souls, there are only useless soul masters. Anyone who believes this is stupid.

Author: How come you, the author of Douluo fan fiction, always use Rasengan when you create your own soul skills? The protagonist is not following the Hokage route, awakening the Sharingan, the Nine-Tails... He will miss the mark and the sun will not shine.

The plot is okay, but why do you need both parents to die? Isn't it good to be alive? A soul saint and a soul king can basically get through the early stage as a backer. You don't need the help of the college dean to even hunt for a soul ring.

The writing is childish. Why don't you go to Notting City with the protagonist group?

The author sets that the externally attached soul bones can be deprived, and there is no such thing as complete fusion.

The master is full of poison points and accepts disciples. He is not satisfied with hunting soul beasts and absorbing 800-year-old soul rings. No body refining can withstand 800 years. Unless he has been eating whale glue for several thousand years, it can be justified.

It's okay. Among all the Douluo I've seen, it's one of a kind.

Did you go to Notting Academy just to increase your presence, deliberately caused a conflict with Yu Xiaogang Tang San, and was called out by Tang Hao to teach you a lesson? Did the protagonist have nothing to do?

Looking at the introduction, why does that flame look down on the Phoenix Spirit? Even if the evil fire light martial soul suppresses them, they can be crushed to death.

It's so beautifully written, don't write it next time

Today's plot is quite speechless. Where is the elder who is secretly following the protagonist? If he is temporarily absent, the protagonist also knows that the sect has not given up on him, right? Speaking of which, will the strong man in the background not be able to use it if he is not in the background? At least give it a try. There is a high-level academy opposite, and the strongest person is the Soul Saint. Not to mention that the master present is the teacher. In the original work, the Soul King is also the Soul King. Now it is estimated that the Soul Sect is there. He can't be unconcerned after hearing the protagonist's background, right? After all, Canghui Academy is not run by him. If he encounters a tough backstage person, he has some brains and knows how to find a way to get off.

It doesn't matter if I create something else, but what I end up creating is a clear and huge problem in the original work. I don't remember whether the evil fire in the original book can kill people. It turns out that your family has records that evil fire can kill people. Hey, your protagonist is the yy evil fire body forging. Forget it, I already have the cockscomb, phoenix and sunflower at hand, and others don't I don't care if you take it, eh, I'm just playing, just having fun, just not solving it, just waiting for the evil fire to break out, waiting for the evil fire to break out at a certain critical moment for a woman, and then the woman can't bear the evil fire for you to die, so I just give in. I can imagine this plot with my eyes closed. The chicken is wise.

It's so stupid and disgusting.

This was written like a fucking idiot.

Poisoned by poison, not to mention that the author changed the setting of the Evil Fire Phoenix to become the inherited martial spirit in a certain family's bloodline (the little fat man in the original book was the Evil Fire Phoenix and mutated from a commoner), the protagonist originally wanted to find Ye Lingling, but then he ran away inexplicably I went to the academy where the master was, and then the protagonist was given Tang San's template. The master wanted to accept him as his disciple, and then took him to get the soul ring. The protagonist also got a set of hidden weapons. Good guy, you are using the template, why don't you just become a disciple directly? The protagonist's reason for refusing to become a disciple is also ridiculous. He says that the master's theory is fine but his character is not good, so he doesn't want to become a disciple. Come on, can you tell me which of the master's theories is correct?

Why is it written like a torture article?

Well, at least in the early stage, I didn't see anything bad about the master towards the protagonist. At least what he has given to the master so far is positive. What he said after getting the first soul ring is too exaggerated.

Will he kill Bibi Dong and Xiao Wu, torture Qian Renxue, Ning Rongrong, and Zhu Zhuqing? Anyway, there is no heroine or original heroine?

It's okay, not to say it's very good, at least most of the poisonous points have been avoided, it's considered a high-quality product.

The first soul ring is rubbish and no one wants to watch it. It's like the beginning of the plot where you are forced to go to Notting to meet the master.

The writing is so good. The author is simply born to eat this kind of food. Keep up the good work and try to write a few million words. It is best to write full-time and have a chance to make money.

Don't you have FW's Wuhun yet? Some martial arts spirits are fw.

I won't save face, that's it💩

The tempo is slow, because the soul beast still wants to achieve nirvana, and the pursuit of blood is not good. Later, a cliched plot appeared. I wanted to play ancient clichés, but I didn't dare. It's a bit contrived.

Full of poison, it slipped away.

It's Tang San again, he destroyed other people and didn't wake up to the common people.

It can only be said that the author is very unfaithful. He does not add soul rings when he reaches level 20 in the early stage. He insists on pressing hard. Can the cultivation efficiency of 10% and 100% be the same? And if you try to save Ye Leng Leng and Xin Haitang's martial spirit, you will be poisoned... Your flames are needed to drive out the poison. It's obviously thankless. Knowing that someone is plotting, you still rush up and beg to be beaten. Isn't this a fool?