What Happened to the Bard Making up Some Stories?

Using a self-aware quill with a very out-of-touch personality as a golden finger...

Did the author sell the book to a studio? It has a good plot and cliched content. I'm about to end my relationship with the bard.

He doesn't look like a newbie, Lao Deng is reincarnated as an extraterrestrial demon

It's really a pity. The opening is amazing. The fantasy flavor is too positive. The description of the interactions between the members of the adventure group is the brightest pearl. The dialogues between the characters are humorous. The plot is as smooth and smooth as watching a movie. It is no exaggeration to say that it was adapted into a movie. It's a pity that it disappeared from everyone after ten chapters. The next forty chapters are procrastinating. The biggest highlight of the opening is that the members of the adventure group disappeared without a trace. They turned into wizards and started to develop constipation. This reading experience plummeted instantly like jumping off a cliff. The gap is really shocking Although your middle period is very cliché and makes me feel like I just clicked on a wizard novel and followed a boring process such as the Chip Knight Breathing Technique. But your beginning is very attractive to me, so I still follow it and look forward to your second adventure to start. But after it is on the shelf, I can only say that I will keep it. At this pace, I think there is a high probability that it will be cut. I won't waste the money.

It's not so much a pseudo-DND style. Looking at it now, it's more like a fairy tale fantasy with half added. It has a bit of a dungeon career structure and a Japanese-style Miyazaki fantasy. It's a bit like watching Howl's Moving Castle. Not intense, but comfortable to look at. It's not about competing for hegemony or improving your adventure level. Fight monsters! Rather, enjoy the feeling of adventure. Well written, good luck to the author!

It's a bit boring starting from the wizard. I came to read the poet's adventure and the subtle deviations in the story, not the legend of the wizard. I read about a hundred chapters to wait and see.

After reading about twenty chapters, the beginning was good, but after meeting the witch, it became boring. I am more disgusted with two types of novels, one is a novel with a sister, and the other is a heroine who appears too early. I came in based on the title of the book. In order to read the bard, I ended up focusing on the description of witches in the first two chapters. Isn't this selling dog meat with a sheep's head? Western fantasy novels don't take risks or have mercenaries, but you write about witches. It's true that you're putting the cart before the horse 😅

Because the new book issue can only be updated twice a day for 4,000, the basic time is fixed at noon and evening, and sometimes I feel that the chapter is a bit broken and I will put the two chapters together. It does not mean that the update is not fixed. Finally and finally, please read and read, it is really important, I am extremely grateful 0.0

If the level of the previous twenty chapters had been maintained, this book would still be recommended on the Internet, instead of being read and put on the shelves hastily. This is really the most regrettable and worst book in recent times. It stands to reason that Manzo is still receiving recommendations early on, and then a small recommendation will be made after the new book issue. When it is released, there will be at least two or three thousand first orders. The author seems to be blind to the doubts in the comment section and insists on going his own way. Now the first order is estimated to be less than 300 yuan.

I haven't read it yet but the synopsis is the same as Harlot's.

There have been no updates for two or three days, and there are no leave notes or explanatory notes. You want a eunuch, right?🤔

The opening adventure is fun. The writing style of the description has a Japanese fairy tale fantasy feel. Jeepney-style version of the old headband. But the pace is too fast to enter the mid-term main line. Originally, it should have been followed by several small adventures to allow the protagonist to slowly enter the incident. Learning more about bards, but turned around and became a wizard. It completely deviates from the theme of the bard's adventure. This may be because the author designed to put the shadow fragment of the conflict point into the protagonist's body. But the process is too rushed. There should have been more inspection periods. Give the protagonist a few more mini-adventures and a better look at the witch. It would be better to have more early interaction. Test each other. The outbreak of the conspiracy will take a little longer to simmer. Put the urban intrigue and pretense points after they are put on the shelves. As a result, the story was suddenly brought into urban conspiracy politics. Several supporting characters described in the early stage. The role of the quill is completely downplayed. The witch unfolded in direct tile order. The style of the story completely changed. At the same time, although the protagonist's identity has improved, he actually has no expression in terms of expression. It seems powerful, but it's actually just words. It does nothing to advance the story. Especially after it was put on the shelves, I watched two events that were always from a third party. The perspective of the protagonist was never described, and it was very mediocre. Lazy and boring. If you write this down, I guess most people will subscribe to two, and then...

The previous chapter was good, but I felt bored since I returned to the city. Although the bard did not take risks and became a psychic wizard, although it meant that he had to have more self-protection power before setting off, it no longer had the appeal of the beginning. Except for Goldfinger, he was still turning to the bard, and now he was completely writing about wizards. This transition was a bit long, maybe because of the pursuit of reading, I felt a bit boring, so give it a try and read it again

Doesn't look like a newbie. Have you written any other books?

Write an article! Who sees you as a wizard. You, a time-traveler, can't even write an adventure story? The part-time wizard pulled back and forth again.

What is written behind this 😰

Now I really wonder if the author wrote this bard in a flash of inspiration, but he didn't have an outline and didn't know how to write it later, so he could only stick to wizards and witches 😅

It didn't feel right. I came here for the introduction. I looked at the atmosphere of a fun person and thought it was more cheerful and mischievous. As a result, after reading a few chapters, it was about fate or something, but it didn't feel right anyway.

At first I thought the plot was copied, but it turns out that the protagonist doesn't even know how to do anything, and the protagonist is pure and innocent. If it weren't for Goldfinger, he would have died long ago. Then Goldfinger can't be used either. Nothing to see, gone

I'm still thinking about reading a hundred chapters to see if the focus of the story is the poet or the wizard. Why are the brothers so similar?

Why did you cut it? It looks interesting to me

Wow, it's a dead ball. Fortunately, I didn't order any more.

Are you a bard or a wizard?😥

What happened to a bard being a wizard.

The front is a bit strange. The latest chapter should be the end of this story. I hope it won't collapse later.

It can be seen that I tried my best to describe the world and enrich the atmosphere of life, but the description is still a little short.

It was a bit new at first, but after the first mission, I just lost the team and became the wizard, and then it was the Formula Academy.

Keep writing, it would be a shame not to. Your writing has a pure Western fantasy flavor, even more Western fantasy than some of the Western fantasy writings I have read by great writers. There are many Western fantasy that I feel are hard-edged, but judging from your writing, you should know a lot about Western fantasy and play a lot of related games, so you can write that flavor. It will be much better to learn to frame narratives. It is recommended to learn some theoretical knowledge of online writing before writing, and you will definitely be able to get ahead.