Cut Off the Leader of the Religion and Conquer the Wilderness with One Sword

I can't do it without departing from the original work, so I'm back to the original track.

Yang Jian has an older brother named Yang Jiao. What do you think? The first born was named Erlang. He was obviously the second child, but Yang Jiao was killed by Heaven. If not, he would have been a god of war. Is the second design just a fool's errand? The first born was called Erlang? ? ? ?

More than 4,000 years have passed between the time when the Lich measured the calamity and the time when the Conferred God measured the calamity. Author, are you serious?

If you don't even have a spiritual treasure, what are you doing during the lich period?

It feels like a billionaire living in a shack, 👍

After the Lich calamity, five emperors became enlightened. It will take thousands of years to reach the level of Conferred God. What a prehistoric thing this is. There is not a single Yuanhui. This is reasonable. Low-end prehistoric people would have to have dozens or hundreds of Yuanhui to have a calamity.

Have you never thought about why Yang Chan calls Yang Jian second brother?

So invincible. I didn't want to write it.

For lv1 level authors, please stop trying to show off! You don't deserve it! Let's upgrade to level 5 first

I didn't even look for an innate spiritual treasure when I traveled back in time. The world existed before the world was opened. I don't have any backhand at all. It doesn't feel like I'm in the prehistoric times. Without a master, I don't know how many times I have died. Before I was imprisoned, anyone could beat me with the Four Swords of Zhu Xian. After being imprisoned for 4 million years, I reunited with Sanhua and added a sword move, and then it was difficult to fight anyone. If I don't have the strength or mana, how can I use the four swords to cut the sky and the earth? Is your feeling like your master stored the mana in the sword for you to play with? The strength of Da Luo's realm golden elixir 🤔

There are too many immortals, The balance of yin and yang in the world has been destroyed, Now a group of immortal species need to die to balance the yin and yang of the world. The higher the strength, the more disasters will be consumed. So every time there is a calamity, there must be a war.

It's been a long time ago, the settings can't be opened, Xiaojiazi is angry

The author writes about prehistoric times. Now the pattern needs to be opened up. Don't write too pettyly.

It shouldn't be magic power, and what kind of story are you planning to write about The Great Desolation, Immortal Style or Shinto Style? Or maybe Daluo is the only one who takes turns sitting in Pangu. Can it be a bit mythical? The text is too fantasy-like. Can it not be too fantasy-y?

I saw you asked a question on Zhihu, but unfortunately I haven't given you an answer yet, so you deleted the question directly. It is not recommended to spend ten thousand a day, but it is more recommended to read more books and summarize more experiences and lessons. I am also an old fan. I read your book, but I feel that many places that should be very exciting have not been written. There is no upgrade line, which means it is not an upgrade article in the traditional sense. It's actually super interesting to write a proficiency panel upgrade line swordsmanship in the ancient world, or to write a genius-style upgrade article like a sword god after drawing a sword for thousands of times. It's a pity, brother, that you have avoided this routine writing method that the most mainstream readers like to read. It's not like an invincible novel. The real invincible has layers of foreshadowing. The protagonist doesn't say much ruthlessly, and after enough foreshadowing, there are two short and powerful words, and there is no such thing as defeating the enemy with one move or instantly. It's not like Gou Daowen, the most important treasure-hunting line in the prehistoric novel. Brother, you don't take the protagonist's fight for spiritual treasures and other treasures seriously. You just foreshadow enough hatred and then kill someone every few chapters. Really, there is no sense of reward in this way of writing. It's not about revenge. The inner driving force of the protagonist's fight is actually insufficient. If we really want to pursue revenge, we should write more about the protagonist's poverty and embarrassment. Where does his wine come from? Where did the money come from? To write it this way, the respected senior brother in Jie Jiao saw Jie Jiao becoming more and more in decline like the Huashan Sect, so he treated the protagonist as a disciple of the Huashan Sect to protect the Jie Jiao who was increasingly in decline. Brother, you haven't done anything about the traditional way of writing swordsmanship. It's just a cross-level challenge. Find a big stage like Yuxu Palace or Lingshan Mountain, go to a duel, and defeat them one by one with strength, and defeat the invincible opponent in the world. The female characters were not included in the story, such as Jie Jiao Sanxiao, Nuwa, Hou Tu, etc., But they were not written to convey the flavor, and there was no sense of excitement in interacting with the female characters. In the end, brother, you can only return to the original plot of Fengshenbang. But fortunately, the prehistoric text is similar to the subject matter of the same people. Brother, you still grasp the main line of fighting the Western religion and not losing it, so it is still okay. The biggest failure of your novel is your failure to really change the relationship between the characters. What really changes character relationships? The essence of your decline trend has not changed. This is what readers are most concerned about. And the protagonist did not live up to the title of the book. The protagonist kills people everywhere, but does not really change the power structure. The protagonist should directly become the sword ancestor or something like that, with the goal of overpowering the Western Buddhist Buddha or something. It is more important to assign a core driving force to the protagonist. Except for the leader Tongtian, Sanxiao and others who highly value the protagonist, the protagonist's swordsmanship is not valued at all. Everyone is optimistic about the treasure-smashing style such as Lingbao Zhibao. The swordsmanship is suppressed, and the protagonist is regarded as a deviant because of his sword practice. The advice I can give you, brother, is to read more books on sword cultivation. Even if you understand the realm of swordsmanship, you can still upgrade the school by writing later. Find ways to make the inner drive of the protagonist more sufficient, and then find ways to improve the status of the protagonist (Sword Master, Sword Immortal, Sword God, Sword Ancestor, etc.), And give more pressure to explain Western teachings, and truly establish the unique way of swordsmanship in the ancient world, and there should be more subscriptions.

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Write 🔪 quickly, let's have 10 chapters

Ancient times is about bloodline and background.

It's so important to write about Li Jiu's willfulness. Writing skills need to be polished over time. It's not a problem. Take your time. Come on, author.

It's pretty good. Updates are too slow. I need to raise it. I'll be kicked after a while.

The opening setting is good, but what happens next is really unsightly.

I think it's a bit unappealing. I don't know why. Will the author have another twist? If it's gone, we can only give up.