
Ace of Diamonds: Awakening of the Sharingan at the Beginning
钻石王牌:开局觉醒写轮眼
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- 1.8M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 2mo ago
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- Qidian
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You know how to break chapters. When will you be able to update more? I want to keep it.
I like Qingdao, but if you really want to play baseball, I don't recommend joining Qingdao.
Qingdao's training is too exhausting for the players. After training in hell, they then compete with strong teams to train the players' performance when they are lacking in physical strength. This is not what a qualified coach should do. Players are also human beings, especially those who are overtired. They are more likely to be injured. Just watching the iron-blooded training is enough. If you actually practice it, it will really affect the players' careers.
I don't want to see it anymore when I suddenly come out. Pitching can also be explained by talent, but the instantaneous version basically challenges the logic. The Ace of Diamonds is more realistic. You don't write about love. Why do you make the protagonist so invincible? One person does all the work. Then why should I read your novel? Anyway, you are winning.
I've been saving for half a month, and you're going to give me this? The content of more than ten chapters only describes the competition, and everything else is dispensable.
Um, newcomers have poor physical strength. Isn't this a gift to the powerful brands... Kiryu's bunt is the end of it. The frontal bunt consumes the newcomer's physical strength the most... And the pig's feet, since you can see every ball clearly, but they don't have enough strength, then why don't you use a wooden stick? If you hit the center of the ball accurately, it will fly very far. Isn't this the way the protagonist Tuanxiao Minato does it? 🙂
How long have I been playing in Daocheng? Chapter 107 is not over yet. The protagonist has no one to hit the ball. He can hit any ball he swings and is invincible. There is nothing to write about next. I just change the team and continue to play for more than 50 chapters. I win again and continue the cycle.
Don't write more stories about teammates pulling and trampling on you.
This is a sports article, or a competitive article like baseball that requires team spirit. This is not a lone wolf fantasy novel. In this kind of team event, cricket teammates are taboo. It is obvious that there is discord in the locker room, and many times it ends with one party getting out. Just let the enemy do the bad work.
Seeing it now, it actually feels like it is a forced cheat to make people unable to play. With the protagonist's current ball speed, there is no such pressure. With this kind of talent, his future as a strong guerrilla is definitely better than that of a pitcher.
After seeing the latest version, I feel that the Sharingan has little significance. What is currently displayed is the outstanding observation ability. In addition, there will be no Magatama, so the concealment of the Sharingan is gone. In terms of observation, the Byakugan is more suitable. It is recommended to explain the necessity of the Sharingan as soon as possible. After all, when it comes to the Sharingan, it is a copy. The protagonist should be colorful and personalized. For sure-kill skills, relying on the Rasengan alone to conquer the world is not as good as Naruto's physical monster. In addition, sports themes, especially team events, are a bit crazy. Personal abilities are indeed important, but communication within the team is also necessary. If you are overwhelmed and your teammates can't cooperate, there is no point. The pitch is fast and powerful and the catcher can't catch it. Daily training can also be mentioned appropriately. Don't upgrade or learn new skills every time at critical moments. If the latest Rasengan upgrade occurs during training, the team can completely develop corresponding tactics around this secret weapon. However, exploding on the pitcher's mound will only make people think that the protagonist only relies on cheating and has no ability to solve problems at all. Cheating is okay, but If you can't just cheat, then there will be no point to watch. In addition, injuries and failures are indispensable in sports. Although there will be regrets, people who get up after falling will be stronger. Otherwise, the protagonist cheats all the way to Koshien and wins the championship. In the later stage, his combat power will either collapse or just be a waste. How to reasonably balance cheating and the efforts of other geniuses is also very important.
Let's change the name, the secret story of water escape from Tobirama's Awakening in the beginning
Looks good, but has a lot of flaws
It is a rare diamond fan who is neat and tidy. The advantage is that it is very fun to hang up, but the disadvantage is that it is too fun to hang up. The Sharingan and various pitches were already abnormal. I guessed that I would be dead later, so I forcibly added a teleportation technique to fill up the base. Then when I finished reading it, it was 670,000 words long and it was too slow before reaching the main plot 😅. In the end, the protagonist is too invincible. I can't imagine who can beat the protagonist in the second year. It's completely impossible to lose. In addition, the author likes Che Lunluo to talk back and forth, and the colloquialism is serious. All I can say is that if you like reading light-hearted novels, and also like Ace of Diamonds and baseball, you can read it, it's quite suitable for relaxing (anyway, there won't be any disgusting plot like The Failed Summer
Damn it, can I still see a fan of Diamond A at Qidian in my lifetime? ? ? ? The theme is too niche
Many authors don't think about it. If Qingdao wins the championship, even if it only reaches Koshien, will the star players only have the original ones? Aren't the little wolf cubs, the little captain and others at the back still here for the strong and the good results?
If he weighs 300 pounds and is fat but not strong, he can throw a ball at a speed of 130 per hour. If he throws it a few times, his hand will probably break. It is really funny. Do you know how hard your arms are when throwing the ball at 130mph? If you don't know there are videos on Douyin, go watch them yourself.
. . The first 10 points of writing are very nerve-wracking. I don't even want to use a novice's way to get a plug-in. I use a plug-in. I use a way of writing that people don't understand. I get a plug-in, and then I get a hang-up and then use the plug-in 😅
I read about 600,000 words. All I can say is that there is a reason for not living. It seems that Qingdao can only score points with Qi Cheng, Dong, and the protagonist. How can this be called the strongest lane. The characters are all the same, too flat, and both those who have watched the anime and those who have not are shaking their heads. The Rasengan, which cannot be hit by anyone once it evolves, is also speechless. In addition to competitions, there are too few daily chapters. Look at the proportion of comic competitions and daily chapters. The other thing is the game. Baseball is a game that combines extreme heroism with close teamwork. It also combines mental and physical strength. It's really not written at all. Take the protagonist's physical problem. If the opponent knows it, they will definitely take action. For example, they will keep hitting the ball you throw out of bounds and let you throw three Rasengan.
You can't watch it with your brain. You can't watch it with your brain. It's just a piece of cake. It ran away.
The protagonist should increase the speed of the ball as quickly as possible
Nowadays, baseball balls are getting faster and faster. To be honest, the top speed of 130 is too shabby and is seriously disconnected from reality. Ohtani Shohei's ball speed reached 150 in his freshman year of high school, and exceeded 160 in his senior year. Nowadays, the average Japanese high school strong shot is not to mention 160, but the average is 150, which is easily achieved. After all, the protagonist also has a Naruto system. To be honest, it can at least be equivalent to the level of Shohei Otani, otherwise it is better not to use this system. Moreover, the ball speed of the straight ball is almost the same as that of the spiral ball, which is a bit ridiculous.
Baseball... Sleep three times after one game
I suggest you give me a little explanation
It's just that I haven't watched anime and I don't understand baseball, but I want to watch it, but I just can't understand it. Basically, the free chapter can have a little explanation of the rules or background, or at the end of the chapter, so that more people who don't understand can read it 🙂
The plot is too delayed
It is not necessary to describe every score and every outing in every game in detail. It is also possible to describe it from the side with appropriate Spring and Autumn style of writing, or through the spectators and scouts watching. As a result, the protagonist is so cheating, and the author has to write about every hitter and every pitch, which is really too slow. Originally, the Tokyo competition subscription seemed okay, but when it came to the national competition, the homogeneity was extremely serious, and I really couldn't stand it anymore. I skipped to the last chapter of each game to read.
Should it change after being hit out for the first time and then continue to shoot until it is scored? This point may be the ending
This kind of thing is not promoted in China. Writing this kind of thing is not purely about taking to the streets.
With an all-around star pitcher like the protagonist, Qingdao's attack should be stronger. After all, the protagonist is often exposed to pitching with supermodel strength, and his vision has been trained in everything. And he plays a lot of games, so he shouldn't have the same growth as the original. Every time, the protagonist turns the tide, while his teammates only try to win the game. It shouldn't be
Let's get more ball skills.
There is also an increase in running speed. The protagonist's speed is still too slow. Let's use the Thunder Chakra mode. Stop pressuring the protagonist. It's nonsense that the Sharingan has a time limit. If you say the Mangekyou has a limit, that's normal.
The author is great, the first few pictures are not very good. The baseball in Ace of Diamonds that I know is positive and encourages each other. It is definitely not the kind of juniors who belittle themselves as you wrote.
Have you started pitching illogically?
Did you think it was tennis when you looked at the cover picture? Who watches baseball?
There is a Japanese baseball comic that imitates professional players. You can refer to it next time. To be honest, sports games are the most prone to data collapse. No matter how many players kill, the starting ERA is a little more. Of course, the data of different levels of hitting are quite different, but... You, a rookie, can control the bat's hitting? An ordinary person with average physical fitness and a baseball rookie... Can make you hit the ball at a speed of 100. You can't do that.
I've seen more than 300 pictures, but I can't stand it anymore, because I'm already invincible, and there's no point in playing more infinite enhancements.