Douluo: the Restarting Life of the Peerless King Dong'er

It's a bit watery, either you should update more, or speed up the pace. How many chapters have been written for a game and it's still not finished 😅😅😅

The author is a little bit dark for the sake of being dark. Many of the characters in the original work are abstract in nature, and they already have enough dark spots. If you add some black spots, it is a bit superfluous.

A historic moment, a book friend value of 114 or even 514 (

So why don't female protagonists post female videos? There must be a lot of talented people there.

The writing style is better than that of most fans, and the logic and protagonist creation are very good. Personally, I feel that the pace is a little faster, but there is no way that today's readers prefer fast-paced books. The author writes very seriously, and each chapter refers to the original text. The only drawback is that I can't describe too much emotional content at the starting point ( I look forward to stable performance in the following chapters!

I hope that the main attack can avoid being outsmarted by the protagonist who likes to play, but unable to defeat the enemy and entering the defeat CG plot 🙂

There is no comparison between Youzhou and Dashu. Youyu is only at level 30, but his knowledge is not bad. He just lacks some knowledge above level 30 that cannot be explained by talking about it. In terms of pure theoretical knowledge, he is not bad. The reason why the top 10 theories are full of loopholes is purely because he is trying to save face for himself. He only lets Sly run. Gram's condition could only be running, but even so, he still more or less observed everyone's physical limit, and also prepared medicinal baths to ensure that not only would there be no sequelae, but he could go further, but one week he was not at this level, he just let him run rigidly, and couldn't even think of mimicry training. Think about it, after entering Lanba Academy, is there such a thing as running? Moreover, he can perform seven-in-one fusion skills. The martial arts of the Shrek Seven are thousands of miles apart. He even knows about angel divine costumes, which means that his knowledge is extremely broad. Many clown behaviors are purely limited by level. Do you think that if he were level 50, would he not know what he would face with a ten-thousand-year soul ring? He couldn't even defeat the thousand-year soul beast, so he could only talk on paper. But the problem was that Zhou was fighting a level 60 soul emperor. In the end, she was not as good as a certain jade.

Now Chapter 209, The writing is good, but the author is too entangled in the second hypothesis that "Wang Donger's body is not Tang Wutong's body". But the protagonist of this book is a time traveler, so there is no need to worry about it. This situation is only suitable if you are writing about Wang Donger himself awakening without a time traveler.

In fact, soul walking is the most ridiculous choice for Douluo Yier and Er. Huo Yuhao has no choice. If he doesn't leave, he will die. Do you think he will leave later? Take the Snow Emperor for example. She occupies four soul ring positions. If divided equally, each one is about 140,000 years old. But in the abstract, each soul ring has 1 soul skill, which is not even as good as a normal soul ring that is just 100,000 years old. There are no soul beasts in Dou San. There are so many hundred thousand year soul beasts in Dou One and Dou Two. If you take the soul spirit, the colors of your soul rings are quite colorful, but when it comes to soul skills, I'm just kidding, they are not as good as a normal soul master with a hundred thousand year soul ring. So why do you have to take the soul beast? Can't you take the Ice Emperor's kind of wisdom soul ring first, sealing the power and then the soul spirit?

Do you have the instinct to write about Sangu Yuena? I want to see what happens when your love brain becomes normal.

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Let me have a big boss recommend some Douluo Lily😎

Although it seems a bit bland at the moment, there are very few anti-Tang Dynasty stories about Douluo heroines. As long as the author doesn't give up, I will follow it to the end.

The first 200 chapters were okay, but the last 180 chapters I think are very weak, especially the ending is very hasty.

Write two novels in one book! 😏

{"NickName":"Citrus Lily","UserId":212632045} Already voted, I want to see Gu Yuena, Wang Qiuer, Snow Emperor Tie Tie

After reading more than 60 chapters, I still feel an indescribable discomfort.

Is there any chance that the author can write about the heroine of Dou San? I feel that Dou San Feng An Feng Yali and Yuan En are both easy to write. It is best to be single and not love-minded. Authors of this kind of heroine can refer to the game Yggdrasil. That author is very good at writing heroines.

I don't understand. This book is obviously well written, but why the results are not ideal. On the contrary, some brainless fan fiction can achieve very good results.

Okay, okay, there's more to see 🙂

It's good to watch, some new content of Dou

If I write it, I would like to see Gu Yuena from Dou San as the protagonist. The protagonist travels back to Gu Yuena, gets rid of the love brain of the original work, concentrates on dealing with humans (hanging Tang 50 and using him to gain power in human society, etc.), And finally swallows his blood, takes the heart of the Dragon God, transforms into a Dragon God, and sinks the Great God Circle. It feels very interesting 😍

Author, isn't the life span of a soul ring less than 10,000 years only related to physical fitness? As long as the physical strength is consistent, it will not be affected no matter how many years it is absorbed. Only the number of souls is limited by mental power. I have seen many fans write that Tang San's age is getting lower and lower since the second martial soul absorbed the soul ring. It is said that he is a twin martial artist. There is a conflict between souls, but it always feels wrong. I remember that the original setting of absorbing a soul ring should be to absorb a physical enhancement rather than a burden (the soul has a burden on the spirit). The more it is absorbed, the more it is strengthened. It is not that the body is a container and can only hold a certain amount of soul rings, so the older the soul ring is, the lower its lifespan is.

I skipped reading, but at the end it didn't seem to say what the protagonist's system was and where it came from?