Professional Disciple: Beginning with Joy of Life

What can I say? Let me write about my feelings after reading this volume of Qing Yu Nian. Some are good and some are bad. Let's talk about it first: 1. The humanity of Emperor Qing is written out. This is different from the original work. It's good. He has his own ideas. The Emperor Qing in the original work is a funny version of Qin Shihuang. His death is also funny. He has a feeling of being a remnant of the Six Kingdoms. The feeling of carnival, what you write is relatively more like a person; 2. The protagonist has a lovable personality, is unrestrained, and repays kindness; 3. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just don't write them. This is good, and it won't be embarrassing. The bad things: 1. It has its own thing, but not much. The plot is still within the framework of Qing Yu Nian and does not really jump out. There are only two purposes for writing fan fiction, to make up for regrets or to go completely crazy. There is no other purpose, because if you only follow the plot, it is not as good as watching the original work; 2. Due to the constant Following the plot of the original work, the protagonist began to become a saint, and the characters created in the early stage began to collapse. Originally, according to your own words, all the characters were the Queen Mother, Emperor Qing, Lin Waner, your grandma, father and sister, who you valued, but in the end, your tolerance for outsiders rose again and again. I can understand that you don't want to kill Fan Xian because of Lin Waner, what about the others? In your writing, is it really important to the protagonist that they have Emperor Qing and the Queen Mother? 3. Based on 2, I think your subconscious belief that Emperor Qing is the villain is a bit rigid. Why do you think Temple is a positive, while Emperor Qing is the negative? We must look at the problem dialectically. An existence that transcends everything will not be a good thing no matter what era... And if Emperor Qing really unified the world, it would bring absolute peace. There are not many good things in Qing Yunian, so why not let the bad things that can really move the world do things? Can Fan Xian really do anything? He may be able to promote economic progress while he is alive, but which emperor doesn't want him to die? The progress of the system depends on the development of productivity. Throughout the original book, I did not see that he wanted to liberate productivity. Instead, he always pointed out from the perspective of a modern person. To sum up, I think the book is about the bread and butter, and there is a lot of room for improvement. It is very important to balance the original plot with your own original plot. I think everything else is fine

Qing Yunian's death came to an abrupt end. Didn't the author think of adding a few chapters to write about the subsequent development of that world? It feels like ending a world like this.

Why do I have to practice the martial arts of the current world when I change the world? I also practiced the martial arts of the previous world by myself (memory). I can't remember the martial arts of the previous world. Very discouraging! Relative

I want to know if you will help Emperor Qing unify in the end. Emperor Qing is also good to the protagonist.

The villain is his teacher, and he is his apprentice to the Lord Worshiping Moon and Wutian Buddha. Finally, I went to pay homage to the Master Tongtian of the Conferred Gods List.

When can I create my own martial arts or something? The conditions are so good, and you can find powerful masters every time, why don't you think of a way to gather martial arts and immortal arts from all over the world to create your own martial arts or something?

Chapter 58 is already the end of the second season of the TV series. The plot goes by so fast 🙂

Can you be more aggressive? Give me more teeth!

How many days are you planning to take off?

He is actually the Patriarch of the Demonic Way 😰 He is gay at the core