From Daily Prophecy Information to Sequence Becoming a God

I rarely write book reviews, but I feel that this book is a pity. The ideas are quite interesting, but the story progression and character conflicts are very stiff. For example, in the article, the finance minister wanted to trick the protagonist into using his own son as bait. The reason was that the mastermind behind a case that the protagonist had handled was the finance minister, but by that time the case was over. For the finance minister, revenge on the protagonist was meaningless except to vent his anger. It would be possible if there was no cost, but using his own son as a bait would be too far-fetched unless killing the protagonist can restore the losses caused by the case. The political level in the book is too thin and shallow. One of the reasons why the protagonist thinks that the Chancellor of Finance and the Minister of Palace are political enemies at first is that "Everything in the palace requires funds, and it is impossible not to conflict with finance." But don't all departments need money? They can be political enemies, but this reason is not suitable. It was later patched up that the son of the Minister of Finance had an affair with the Minister of the Chamber of Commerce's mistress, so he had a grudge... Alas, and then the protagonist wanted to kidnap that person. The little wife framed the son of the finance minister... How could this matter be bigger than the counterfeit banknote case... I personally think it's okay for the villain to have a facial makeup, a thin image, and the supporting role to be a tool. After all, everyone is not here to appreciate literary masterpieces, but the story must be smooth and the plot advancement should be reasonable. Otherwise, even if I don't care, it will be difficult for the author to write it down. The story will reach a dead end. If it reaches a dead end, it can only be forced by a mechanical deity. I am not looking for fault, I sincerely hope that the author will write better and better

The cleanup bureau is disgusting, and civilians will die if they enter it. If you fail to complete the task, you will die. If you complete the task and offend the higher-ups, you can easily be killed by others. It has no protective effect at all. If you don't complete the task, you will die. The protagonist, the finance minister, was completely lucky that time. If there hadn't been a steam engine to attract Adele and a multiplication table to attract Jules' teacher, the protagonist would have lost his arms and legs at least.

The beginning is okay, but when the finance minister's son suddenly appears, the plot is unreasonable. Senior figures should not appear too early. It is better to hang around in low sequences for a while and match corresponding opponents. The plot conflicts are too deliberate.

The protagonist is too weak, and the steam engine can be used as a bargaining chip Just exchange it for a life-saving opportunity, and the protagonist knows the structure of the steam engine This aspect of knowledge is not bad, how do you become such a dick?

The struggle is written so much that it makes people laugh, it's better not to write it

I only have 2 months to live. If I can't kill him directly, I'll still hold on to him.

The rhythm is not bad. If not too many people invest, I will probably invest in it.

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Why don't you write anymore? Not very well written